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『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因（一个或者多个）：

增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想（ideal;

idealistic）（如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书）

为了保证将来的就业机会

父母要求子女上大学

别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书

找不到工作

（无知，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。

上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险运动亦如是[43]。

）相关题目：

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『范文』

aftergraduatingfromhighschoolmanyyoungpeoplehavetheoptiontodirectlyentertheworkforce.most

studentswhohavetheopportunity,however,decidetogotocollegebeforefindingjobs（theyattendcollegetoobtainmorechoices,-highersalaries,andmoreopportunitiesforadvancementinanincreasinglycompetitivejobmarket.

beforeattendingcollege,studentshavealimitedopportunitytospecialize.afterobtainingaspecificcollege

degreeajobapplicantcanbecompetitiveforpreviouslyunavailablejobs.forinstance,applicantswithcomputersciencedegreeswouldnotonlybequalifiedforjobsinhigh-techcompanies,theywouldalsobewellpreparedforanyjobwithcomputerskillsasaprerequisite.withalargerrangeofpotentialjobstochoosefrom,degreeholdersaremorelikelytofindajobthatsuitstheirparticularneedsandinterests.

additionally,employersarewillingtopayapremiumforhighlyqualifiedapplicants.forexample,many

companiesdesireemployeeswhoarecompetentinmorethanonelanguageandofferhighersalariestoattractthem.evenifajobapplicantwithoutacollegedegreehashighstandardizedtestscores,employersmaystillplace

ahighervalueonanapplicantwithsimilartestscoreswhoalsopossessescredentialsfromawell-knownuniversity.becauseoftheextenttowhichacollegedegreeisacceptedbyemployersasproofofcompetenceinagivenfield,collegegraduatesarenotonlymorelikelytoreceivemorejoboffers,theycanalsocommandhighersalariesthanapplicantswholackcollegediplomas.

finally,inadditiontoofferingmorechoicesandhighersalaries,acollegedegreeoffersaccesstojobswithaclearpathtowardsprofessionaladvancement.ab.s.inbiology,forexample,couldallowastudenttofindajobinalabaftergraduation,afirststepontheroadtowardsacareerinscientificresearch.thesamemajorcouldalsobeusedtoapplytomedicalschool,andacareerasadoctor.bothoftheseavenueswouldbeunavailablewithouttakingthefirststepofanundergraduatedegreeinbiology.

2.areparentsthebestteachers?

doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

parentsarethebestteachers.usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

obviously,inmostcasestheearliestteacherspeoplehavearetheirparents,andparentsaregenerallymostconcernedaboutthedevelopmentoftheirchildren.however,itisnotcompletelytruetosaythatparentsarethebestteachers.

firstofall,notallparentsaregoodteachers.asnormalindividuals,someparentsmoreorlesshavesomebadhabits.eventhoughparentsalmostinstinctivelydevotethemselvestocultivatingtheiroffspring,theoutcomemightturnouttobedisappointment,forallchildrentendtounconsciouslyorsubconsciouslycopyeverythingincludingbadonesfromtheirparents.anotherdeficiencyofparentsasteachersisthefactthatmostparentsarelackofcommonsensesofeducation.alltoooftenweobservesomeparentstendtopursuetheircherishedbutfaileddreambyforcingtheirchildrentodevelopinaprearrangeddirection.ironically,whentheirchildrendonotfollowtheinstructions,thechildrenwillberegardedasdisobedientorallegedlyrebellious.infact,itisparentsratherthantheirchildrenthatvirtuallydisobeycommonsenses.

toefl.ibt高分作文完美重排版editedbylostlawyermoreover,someparentsarequalifiedasgoodteachers,butnotallofthemarethebestones.whenchildrenareinthepreliminaryschool,itisnotsurprisingthatparentsareperhapscapableofteachingtheirchildrenalmosteverysubjectevenbetterthanprofessionalteachersintheschool.butthesituationwillnotlastlong.weliveinaworldwhereknowledgeisaccumulatedbymultiplyingandatthesametimebecomesmoreandmorespecialized.therefore,tobeaprofessionalinacertainfieldtodaytakesmuchlongertimethanhaseverbeenbefore.noparentisabletobeprofessionalinallfields,thoughtheymightbeexpertsinoneormorefields.wiseparentsoftenreleaseratherthanchargetheirchildrenasearlyaspossible.theyareawareofthepossibilityoutsidethefamily.

parentsmay,nevertheless,helptheirchildrenmuchmorethandogoodteachers.mostpartsofchildreneducationarevirtuallybeyondteachersreaches.itisparentsthatsupplement.psychologystudieshaveshownusthatparentslovesometimeshasastonishinglymagicpowertotheirchildren.albeiteinsteinsmotherandthatofforestgumparebothgoodexamples.ontheotherhand,parentsmightdotheirchildrenharmmorethandobadteachersaswell.thenaturesofthosechildrenwhoseparentshavedivorcedareoftenseverelydistorted.inaword,itisrathersuperficialtosimplysaythatparentsarethebestteachers.

3.doeseasier-preparedfoodimprovethewaypeoplelive?

nowadays,foodhasbecomeeasiertoprepare.hasthischangeimprovedthewaypeoplelive?

总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会带来improvement。

使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化：

好的：

节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

也有不好的变化：

准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少

了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozendumpling]

快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子

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peopletodaycanpreparetheirmealmucheasierthanhaseverbeenbefore.toprepareasingledinner,providenthousewivesusuallyhadtoworkforhoursinthepast:

theyhadtobuyhomedirtyvegetableswhichhad

toefl.ibt高分作文完美重排版editedbylostlawyertowash,meatwhichhadtoslice,andsoonsoforth.eachandeverystepofpreparationwasatime-consumingtask.butnow,thingsareentirelydifferent.supermarketsprovidevegetablesandmeatcleanandneat,someofthemevenhaverelevantingredientsandneedonlyafewminutestobemadeintodeliciousmeals.andthischangehasindeedgreatlyimprovedthewaypeoplelive.

inasense,foodpreparationisnolongeratedioustask,atleastmucheasiertotolerate.suchachangehasliberatedmanywomenandgiventhemchancetodomoremeaningfulthings,forexample,ahigherpayjoboramorerespectfulone.ontheotherhand,moremenarebecomingwillingtodothethingthattheyoncehatedsomuch,andinsomecasessuchtransformationofmenbroughtdramaticpositiveimpactonthefamily.today,itsnothardtoimagineawifecomeshomeafteradayshardworkandhowdelightfulsheistofindouthishusbandhasalreadypreparedherseveralherfavoritedishes!

childrencanmoreeasilybecomeindependent—atleasttheycanmakethemselvesbreakfastsordinnerswhenparentsareoccasionallynotpresent.

butsuchachangehasalsobroughtsomeunexpectedconsequences.girlsnowadaysarebecomingmoreandmorereluctanttodeemhouseholdworkastheirresponsibility.thereasonisquitestraightforward:

itwasoncereallyridiculoustoinsistmendotrivialhouseholdworkratherthangoworkandearnmoneytosupportfamily,butconditionshavealterednow,girlsmightthink:

icanworkaswell,ormaybeicanearnahighersalarythanyoudo,dearboyfriend,ifyouwanttomarryme,answermeonequestionfirst,willyoupreparemebreakfastanddinnereveryday?

andsomeboys,ontheotherhand,arebecominghesitanttogetmarried,orsimplyremainsolitary,amongmiscellaneousreasonstheydosoisonething:

icantakecareofmyself,atleastidontreallyneedsomeonepreparemedinner!

anyway,suchachangeispositiveanditdidimprovethequalityofpeopleslife.atleastithasbroughtgirls,boys,husbands,wives,childrenandeveryoneelsewhohastopreparefoodanopportunity,nomatterwhatkindofopportunityitis.

4.whichismoreimportant,bookknowledgeorexperience?

ithasbeensaid,noteverythingthatislearnediscontainedinbooks.compareandcontrastknowledgegainedfromexperiencewithknowledgegainedfrombooks.inyouropinion,whichsourceismoreimportant?

why?

注意一定要先进行比较

从书本中获取的知识

优点：

题材、范围更多

有更多的深度

更加的系统

缺点：

有时过于教条

也不见得完全准确

从经验中获取的知识

获取直接、简单明了

更加地实用

有些知识无法从书本中获得

不系统，很大的随意性

很容易产生片面理解

不一定要说a比b更重要，或者b比a更重要。

也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。

学习抽象的知识，书本是最好的来源。

学习游泳，这只能靠经验。

另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可以。

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有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育

有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理

有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；

管理技巧

所以不能一概而论（treatdifferentthings/problems/matters]asthesame），要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。

ingeneral,knowledgegainedfrombookshasawiderrangethanthatgainedfromexperience.wenowliveinaworldthattypophileisnolongerexorbitant,andthatprintedmattersarereadilyavailable.inlibraries,wecanlearnnearlyeverythingonlyifwehavealreadyacquiredbasicreadingskills,philosophy,history,literature,physics,mathematics,chemicals,biology,geography,anthropology,andthelistwillgoon.unliketheexperienceofanindividualthatislimitedbytherangeofthatindividual,booksseemtohavealmostnolimitation.sittinginthelocallibrary,wevirtuallycantraveleverywherethroughan