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2.关于90后

Asagenerationborninthe1990s,wearefacingwithalotofproblemsinreceivingeducationandgettingemployed.Livinginaworldfulloffiercecompetition,wehavedevelopedourownwaysoflifeandvalues,whichhavecausedpeople’sdeepconcern.Theythinkwecaretoomanyaboutourselvesandareunwillingtocooperatewithothers,sothatishardforustoachievesuccesshoweverwedo.Besides,theyconsiderthatwelackofdetermination,withoutitwewouldeasilygiveupintimeofdifficulty.Theyarealsoconcernedaboutthatwearesoeagertowininstantfamethatwewouldliketofollowfashionblindly,whichmightinturnsruinourfuturecareer.

1.facing→faced2.competition→competitions3.have→has4.many→much5.that→it→it6.however→whatever7.去掉lack后的of8.withoutit→withoutwhich9.去掉about10.turns→turn

3.电视的副作用

Alotofparentsandteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisiontoyoungchildren.Accordingtoarecentstudy,manyachildspendmoretimewatchingTVthanreviewingtheirlesson.DuetowatchingTVfortoolong,thesechildrencannotdevelophabitofreadingbooksandtheabilitytolearnonthemown.Teachersarealsoconcernedabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Itisreportedthatonayear,achildcanwatchasmanyas25,000televisioncommercialsonaverage,allofthemaredesignedwiththepurposeofmakingchildrentoaskforthingsthattheydon’trealneed.

1.to→on2.spend→spends去掉be3.lesson→lessons4.habit前加the5.onthemown→ontheirown6.worried后加about7.onayear→during/inayear8.allofthem→allofwhich9.去掉want前面的to10.real→really

4.低碳生活

Livealow-carbonlifemeansthatallofusmusttryourbesttocutoffresourceconsumption（消耗）toreducecarbondioxideemission（排放）inordertostopglobalwarming.

Howshallwedotolivealow-carbonlife？

Firstofall,whenwegotoschoolorsomeplaces,we’dbetterwalkorgobybikeinsteadofgoingbycars.Besides,weshouldsavefood,waterorelectricityinourdailylife.Finally,usingenvironmentallyfriendlyshoppingbagsratherthanplasticbagscanhelpustofightagainstwhitepollution,whichcanmakegreatdifferencetotheearth.

Itcallsforeveryoneeffortstoprotecttheenvironment.Unlesseveryoneofuscanmakeasmallchangeinourwayoflife,wecanmaketheearthabetterplace.

1.Live→Living2.cutoff→cutdown3.How→What4.some后加other5.cars→car6.or→and7.Finally→Lastly8.great前加a9.everyone→everyone’s10.Unless→If

5.工作使人快乐

Studiesshowthathard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Itisbecauseworkingkeepspeoplebusily,awayfromlonely.Researchersfindthatpeoplewillfeelunhappy,worriedandlonelywhentheyhadnothingtodo.Instead,thehappiestarethosealwaysworkbusily.Workingservesasbridgebetweenmanandreality.Whilework,peoplecomeintocontactwitheachother.Throughcollective（集体的）activities,theyfindfriendshipandwarmth,thisishighlybeneficialtohealth.Thelostofworkusuallymeanslosingeverything,soithasnegativeeffectonpeoplephysicallyandmentally.Inadditionto,workinggivespeopleasenseoffulfillmentandasenseofachievement.

1.busily→busy2.lonely→loneliness3.had→have4.those后加who5.bridge前加a6.Whilework→Whileworking7.this→which8.Thelostof→Thelossof9.effect→effects10.去掉Inaddition后的to

6.给孩子松绑

Asweallknowit,manychildrenhavetospendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcoursesthoughtheyareunwillingbecausetheirparentsdon’twantthemtofallbehindinthestartingline.Instead,theyhopetheirchildrenareequippingwithasmanyskillsaspossible.Thereforetheywon’tlosefaceswhencomparingtheirchildrenwithothers’.Besides,theyaresuretheseextraclasseswillhelptheirchildrentostandbyandbecomemorecompetitiveinthefuture.Actually,itiswisetoforcechildrentodoallwhattheydon’tlike.Toomanytrainingclasseswillbeheavyburdenforchildren.Theparentsshouldn’tpushtheirchildrentoohardly.

76.Asweallknow为非限制性定语从句，As指代下句的内容，应去掉it；

77.beunwillingtodosth表示“不愿意做某事”，上句出现了spendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcourses，为了避免重复，可省略该短语，而保留动词不定式符号to，因此在unwilling后应加上to;

78.on/atthestartingline意为“在起跑线线上”，因此把in改为at/on；

79.短语beequippedwith“被装配上”，因此把equipping改为equipped80.习惯用语loseface“丢面子”，因此把faces改为face；

81.standby“站在一边，支持”，standout“突出;

显眼,引人注目,脱颖而出”，因此把by改为out；

82.结合下文可知，作者不赞成家长让孩子上各种补习班的做法，因此把wise改为unwise；

83.先行词all后的定语从句应用that引导，把what改为that或去掉what；

84.burden为可数名词，因此在heavy前加上a；

85.Theparentsshouldn’tpushtheirchildrentoohard家长们不要对孩子催得太紧，把hardly改为hard。

7.住在寝室还是在外租房

Nowadays,somestudentsdon’tlikesharingaroomwiththeirclassmate.Instead,theyrentedhousesneartheirschool.Theadvantagesoflivinginthedormitoryareclearly:

studentscandevelopadeepfriendshiporlearntocooperatewiththeirroommates.However,itissafer.Iftheylivelonelyinarentedhouseoutside,it’sbetterfortheirstudiesbecausetheyfeelfreeintheirownroomswithoutinterruptedbyothers.Asaresult,theycandevotetheirtimetostudywhole-heartedly.Theycanalsodecidehowtogotobedandgetup.Buttheremaybesomesafetyproblemswithlivingoutsideschool.Personally,itisbettertoliveinthedormitorythaninarentedhouse.

76.classmate→classmates77.rented→rent78.clearly→clear79.or→and80.However→Besides81.lonely→alone82.without后加上being83.study→studying84.how→when85.school前加the

8.成长的烦恼

WhenIwasachild,howIwishedtobecomeaadultsothatIcoulddoallwhatIliked.IwantedtohavemorespacewhereIwasabletofollowmyownheartwithoutobeymyparents’orders.

Astimegoingby,Ihavegrownupgradually.ButIfindthingsarequitedifferentfromwhatIexpect.Idohavethefreetodomorethingsalone.Moreover,Ihavetotakeonmoreresponsibility.Ihavetotakethechargeofmylifeandfacethechallengesbravely.NowIamdeterminingtoworkhardandgotocollegesothatIcanhaveagoodjobinthefuture.

1.a→an2.what→that或去掉all/what3.obey→obeying4.As→with或going→goes5.expect→expected6.free→freedom7.Moreover→However8.responsibility→responsibilities9.去掉charge前面的the10.determining→determined

9.如何保持健康

Inmoderntime,thepaceofourlifeisgettingfasterandfaster.Wehavetoworkunderthepressure,whichmakesthathardforustoliveahealthylife.Butdevelopingahealthylifestyleisveryimportantunlesswewanttoenjoygoodhealth.

Firstofall,worklonghoursinfrontofthecomputerisbadforoureyesandback.Drinkingandsmokingalsodoharmfultoourhealth.However,takingphysicalexercisecanhelpbuildourbody.Inadditionto,weshouldhaveabalanceddietthatcontainalotofgrain,fruitsandvegetables.Lastbutthenotleast,havingenoughsleepisalsonecessarytoustostayhealthy.Personally,havingahealthylifestyleisjustyourchoice.

76.time→times77.But→So78.thepressure→pressure79.makesthat→makesit80.unless→if81.work→working82.harmful→harm83.build后加up84.去掉Inaddition后的to85.contain→contains

10.喜欢传统贺卡

Iwouldprefertosendtraditionalgreetingcardstoe-cardsbecauseofthefollowingreason:

Firstofall,ithasbeentraditiontosendprintedgreetingcardstofriendsandrelativessinceancienttimes.Thecardswrittenwithhandcanexpressthesender'

sdeeplyloveandfriendship.Beside,thepapergreetingcardscanbecollectedandkeptasareminderoffriendship.

Comparingwithtraditionalcards,e-cardsareconvenientandfasttosendontheInternet.Butitwon'

tspendusapennytosendthee-cards.Inadditionto,receiverscanlistentomusicwhilewatchingmovingpictures,thatisveryenjoyable.

Althoughe-cardscanhelpsaveenergyandprotecttheenvironment,butI’dpreferprintedgreetingcardstokeepthetraditionalive.

76.reason→reasons77.tradition前加a78.with→by79.deeply→deep80.Beside→Besides81.Comparing→Compared82.spend→cost83.去掉Inaddition后的to84.that→which85.去掉but

11.校园浪费

Withthelivingstandardarising,thereisalargeamountwasteoncampus.Forexample,somestudentstendtoleavethelightonduringthedayandwaterrunafterwashing.Theyalsothrowawaythefoodwhattheydon’tlike.Soitishighlytimewedealtwiththeseproblems.HerearewhatIthinkweshoulddo:

Firstofall,weshoudturnoffthelightsandthetapbeforeweusethem.Secondly,we’dbettereatupwhatwebuyintheschoolcafeteria.Moreimportantly,weshouldformhabitofsavingnaturalresourceshoweverwedo.

Personally,itiseverybody’sdutytostopwasting.Ifwedon’ttakeactionnow,andthelimitedresourcesontheearthwillrunoutso