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1、2. 关于90后As a generation born in the 1990s, we are facing with a lot of problems in receiving education and getting employed. Living in a world full of fierce competition, we have developed our own ways of life and values, which have caused peoples deep concern. They think we care too many about ours

2、elves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, so that is hard for us to achieve success however we do. Besides, they consider that we lack of determination, without it we would easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned about that we are so eager to win instant fame that we wo

3、uld like to follow fashion blindly, which might in turns ruin our future career.1. facing faced 2. competition competitions 3. have has 4. many much 5. that it it 6. however whatever 7. 去掉lack后的 of 8. without it without which 9. 去掉 about 10. turns turn 3. 电视的副作用A lot of parents and teachers worry ab

4、out the effects of television to young children. According to a recent study, many a child spend more time watching TV than reviewing their lesson. Due to watching TV for too long, these children cannot develop habit of reading books and the ability to learn on them own. Teachers are also concerned

5、about the effects of television commercials. It is reported that on a year, a child can watch as many as 25,000 television commercials on average, all of them are designed with the purpose of making children to ask for things that they dont real need. 1. to on 2. spend spends去掉be 3. lessonlessons 4.

6、 habit 前加the 5. on them own on their own 6. worried 后加about 7. on a year during/in a year 8. all of them all of which 9. 去掉want前面的 to 10. real really 4. 低碳生活 Live a low-carbon life means that all of us must try our best to cut off resource consumption（消耗） to reduce carbon dioxide emission （排放） in or

7、der to stop global warming. How shall we do to live a low-carbon life？First of all, when we go to school or some places, wed better walk or go by bike instead of going by cars. Besides, we should save food, water or electricity in our daily life. Finally, using environmentally friendly shopping bags

8、 rather than plastic bags can help us to fight against white pollution, which can make great difference to the earth. It calls for everyone efforts to protect the environment. Unless every one of us can make a small change in our way of life, we can make the earth a better place. 1. Live Living 2. c

9、ut off cut down 3. How What 4. some 后加other 5. cars car 6. or and 7. Finally Lastly 8. great 前加a 9. everyone everyones 10. Unless If 5. 工作使人快乐 Studies show that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. It is because working keeps people busily, away from lonely. Researchers find t

10、hat people will feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they had nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those always work busily. Working serves as bridge between man and reality. While work, people come into contact with each other. Through collective（集体的） activities, they find friendship and warmt

11、h, this is highly beneficial to health. The lost of work usually means losing everything, so it has negative effect on people physically and mentally. In addition to, working gives people a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. 1. busily busy 2. lonely loneliness 3. had have 4. those 后加wh

12、o 5. bridge 前加a 6. While work While working 7. this which 8. The lost of The loss of 9. effect effects 10. 去掉In addition后的 to6. 给孩子松绑As we all know it, many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling because their parents dont want

13、 them to fall behind in the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping with as many skills as possible. Therefore they wont lose faces when comparing their children with others. Besides, they are sure these extra classes will help their children to stand by and become more compet

14、itive in the future. Actually, it is wise to force children to do all what they dont like. Too many training classes will be heavy burden for children. The parents shouldnt push their children too hardly.76. As we all know 为非限制性定语从句，As指代下句的内容，应去掉it；77. be unwilling to do sth表示“不愿意做某事”，上句出现了spend the

15、ir weekends and holidays attending various training courses，为了避免重复，可省略该短语，而保留动词不定式符号to，因此在unwilling后应加上to; 78. on/ at the starting line意为“在起跑线线上”，因此把in改为at/on；79. 短语be equipped with“被装配上”，因此把equipping改为equipped 80. 习惯用语lose face “丢面子”，因此把faces改为face；81. stand by“站在一边，支持”，stand out“突出; 显眼, 引人注目, 脱颖而出

16、”，因此把 by改为out ；82. 结合下文可知，作者不赞成家长让孩子上各种补习班的做法，因此把wise改为 unwise；83. 先行词all 后的定语从句应用that引导，把what 改为that或去掉what；84.burden为可数名词，因此在 heavy 前加上a ；85. The parents shouldnt push their children too hard家长们不要对孩子催得太紧，把hardly改为 hard。7. 住在寝室还是在外租房Nowadays, some students dont like sharing a room with their classm

17、ate. Instead, they rented houses near their school. The advantages of living in the dormitory are clearly: students can develop a deep friendship or learn to cooperate with their roommates. However, it is safer. If they live lonely in a rented house outside, its better for their studies because they

18、 feel free in their own rooms without interrupted by others. As a result, they can devote their time to study whole-heartedly. They can also decide how to go to bed and get up. But there may be some safety problems with living outside school. Personally, it is better to live in the dormitory than in

19、 a rented house. 76. classmate classmates 77. rented rent 78. clearly clear 79. or and 80. However Besides 81. lonely alone 82. without后加上 being 83. study studying 84. how when 85. school 前加the8. 成长的烦恼When I was a child, how I wished to become a adult so that I could do all what I liked. I wanted to

20、 have more space where I was able to follow my own heart without obey my parents orders. As time going by, I have grown up gradually. But I find things are quite different from what I expect. I do have the free to do more things alone. Moreover, I have to take on more responsibility. I have to take

21、the charge of my life and face the challenges bravely. Now I am determining to work hard and go to college so that I can have a good job in the future. 1. a an 2. what that或去掉all/what 3. obey obeying 4.As with 或going goes 5. expect expected 6. free freedom 7. Moreover However 8. responsibility respo

22、nsibilities 9. 去掉charge前面的the 10. determining determined 9. 如何保持健康In modern time, the pace of our life is getting faster and faster. We have to work under the pressure, which makes that hard for us to live a healthy life. But developing a healthy lifestyle is very important unless we want to enjoy g

23、ood health.First of all, work long hours in front of the computer is bad for our eyes and back. Drinking and smoking also do harmful to our health. However, taking physical exercise can help build our body. In addition to, we should have a balanced diet that contain a lot of grain, fruits and vegeta

24、bles. Last but the not least, having enough sleep is also necessary to us to stay healthy. Personally, having a healthy lifestyle is just your choice. 76. time times 77. But So 78. the pressure pressure 79.makes that makes it 80. unless if 81. work working 82. harmful harm 83. build 后加up 84.去掉In add

25、ition 后的to 85. contain contains 10.喜欢传统贺卡I would prefer to send traditional greeting cards to e-cards because of the following reason:First of all, it has been tradition to send printed greeting cards to friends and relatives since ancient times. The cards written with hand can express the senders d

26、eeply love and friendship. Beside, the paper greeting cards can be collected and kept as a reminder of friendship. Comparing with traditional cards, e-cards are convenient and fast to send on the Internet. But it wont spend us a penny to send the e-cards. In addition to, receivers can listen to musi

27、c while watching moving pictures, that is very enjoyable. Although e-cards can help save energy and protect the environment, but Id prefer printed greeting cards to keep the tradition alive. 76.reason reasons 77. tradition前加a 78. with by 79. deeply deep 80. Beside Besides 81. Comparing Compared 82.

28、spend cost 83.去掉In addition 后的to 84. that which 85. 去掉 but11.校园浪费With the living standard arising, there is a large amount waste on campus. For example, some students tend to leave the light on during the day and water run after washing. They also throw away the food what they dont like. So it is hi

29、ghly time we dealt with these problems. Here are what I think we should do:First of all, we shoud turn off the lights and the tap before we use them. Secondly, wed better eat up what we buy in the school cafeteria. More importantly, we should form habit of saving natural resources however we do. Personally, it is everybodys duty to stop wasting. If we dont take action now, and the limited resources on the earth will run out so