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MATHTEEN
1Japan’snuclearburst
2Stressandrelaxationinlife
3Myplantoexercise
4ThecollegeEnglish
5Gratitude
6AletterofApplication
7Onwatershortage
8Alow-carbonlifestyle
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王扬王丹丹苏华丹秦超刘青山
1Japan’snuclearburst
RecentlyJapanissufferingfromearthquakeandnuclearburst,whichhascausedgreatlossesinbothlivesandproperities.Asweallknown,Japanisasmallislandcountry,ithasnonaturalresources.Sonowonderit’sabighurtforJapan.
Andasweallknown,nuclearburstwouldbadlydamagepeople’slife.Itwouldmakepeoplesufferillness.Andseveralreasonsshouldbeconsideredtobringaboutthisdisaster.Firstly,thereisnowonderthattheearthquakecausethenuclearburst.Secondabnormalweathershouldbetoblame.Butafterthatweneedtoseewhathasmadetheweatherinsuchcondition.Obviously,itisthenaturehasbeendisturbedandtheenvironmenthasbeendamaged.
Allinall,immediateandeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentodealwithsuchsituation.Firstly,weshouldtryourbesttohelpJapanese.Second,scientistsshoulddoaspossibleastheycouldtoreducethedamageofthenuclearburst.Andtheyshouldworkoutsomewaystoimproveweatherforecast,whichcouldpreventsomeunnecessarylosses.Finally,Ithinkwehumanbeingshouldfindabalancebetweeneconomicandenvironmentprotection.(苏华丹)
刘青山:
Thedamageofnuclearstationattractedallaroundtheworld’sattentionagain.So,aconstructiveproposalshouldbegivenassuhuadansaid.
王扬:
层次清晰,条理清楚!
秦超:
选词合理,结构整齐!
王丹丹:
本文主题不很明确,应突出主体部分。
但语句通顺。
Thefutureofnuclearenergy
Itisoftenclaimedthatnuclearenergyissomethingwecannotdowithout.Thistypeofenergycanbecreatedthroughnuclearfissionandnuclearfusion.Nuclearfissionisthesplittingofaheavyatomintotwoormoreparts,releasinghugeamountsofenergy.Thereleaseofenergycanbecontrolledandcapturedforgeneratingelectricity.Nuclearfusioninvolvesbombardinghydrogenatomstogethertoformhelium.Inthelongrun,nuclearfusionhasgreaterpotentialthanfission.
Weliveinaconsumersocietywherethereisanenormousdemandforcommercialproductsofallkinds.Moreover,anincreaseinindustrialproductionisconsideredtobeonesolutiontotheproblemofmassunemployment.Manypeoplebelievethatnuclearenergyprovidesaninexhaustibleandeconomicalsourceofpowerandthatitisthereforeessentialforanindustriallydevelopingsociety.Thereareanumberofotheradvantagesintheuseofnuclearenergy.Firstly,nuclearpower,exceptforaccidents,isclean.Afurtheradvantageisthatanuclearpowerstationcanberunandmaintainedbyrelativelyfewtechnicalandadministrativestaff.Thenuclearreactorrepresentsanenormousstepinourscientificevolutionand,whatevertheanti-nucleargroupsays,itiswrongtoexpectareturntomoreprimitivesourcesoffuel.However,opponentsofnuclearenergypointoutthatnuclearpowerstationsbringadirectthreatnotonlytotheenvironmentbutalsotocivilliberties.Furthermore,itisquestionablewhetherultimatelynuclearpowerisacheapsourceofenergy.Therehave,forexample,beenverycostlyaccidentsinAmerica,inBritainand,ofcourse,inRussia.
Thepossibilityofincreasesinthecostofuraniuminadditiontothecostofgreatersafetyprovisionscouldpricenuclearpoweroutofthemarket.Inthelongrun,environmentalistsargue,nuclearenergywastesvaluableresourcesanddisturbstheecologytoanextentwhichcouldbringaboutthedestructionofthehumanrace.Thusifwewishtosurvive,wecannotaffordnuclearenergy.Inspiteofthecaseagainstnuclearenergyoutlinedabove,nuclearenergyprogrammesareexpanding.Suchanexpansionassumesacontinualgrowthinindustrialproductionandconsumerdemands.However,itisdoubtfulwhetherthisgrowthwillorcancontinue.
Inconclusion,nuclearfusionhasmuchmorepotentialforlongtermusethanthecurrentfissionreactors,eventhoughintheshorttermitmaycostalittlemoretodevelop.Thesmallpricetopayfordevelopmentoffusiontechnologyseemstrivialincomparisontothepriceoftheplanet.(秦超)
文章最后给出了对核利用的一些看法,很有道理。
本文结构清晰,分析了核能的未来。
但专业词汇太多,有些看不懂。
苏华丹:
本文语句通顺,结构清晰。
而且文末再次点题,很不错。
刘青山:
Thefutureofnuclearenergyishopeful.Ithinkthisenergywillbesaferandcleanerinshortfuture.So,whatweneedtodoisgivenscientistmoretime.
NuclearTechnology-GoodorBad?
ItshorkedalloftheworldthatfournuclearpowerplanthadbeendamagedinJapan.Andlotsofpeopleworriesaboutthebadinfluenceofit.Recently,manypeopleareafraidofnucleartechnologybecauseofthedangersassociatedwithitsuse.somepeoplevoiedthatnuclearshouldbebaned!
Ononehand,Itisright.ButIn