高考英语短文改错集训二文档格式.docx
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Passage1
Lastmonth,the18thForeignLanguageSpeechCompetitionwassuccessfullyheldinourboardingschool.Luckily,theStudents’UnionorganizeanEnglishSpeechCompetition.AtfirstIdidn’tshowsomeinterestandwasn’tverymuchconfident.ThenmyEnglishteacherMr.Smithencouragedme.Inspiringbymyteacher,Isignedupforthecompetitionandmadefullypreparationsforit.TwoweekslaterthetimeIhadbeenlookingforwardtocominganditwashisturn.Glancingatmyteacher’ssmilingface,Ibuiltupmyconfidence.Muchtomydelight,theresultwasannouncedandIwasoneofthewinner.Butmyteacher’sencouragement,Icouldn’thavewonthefirstprize.I’mproudofMr.Smithorthewonderfulexperience.
Passage2
Asisknowntoall,drunkdrivingintheroadtrafficsafetyisstrictlyprohibited.Unluckily,Isawatrafficaccidentonmywayhomeonlastnight.Acarhitamotorbike.Themotorbikedriverwasbadhurtandsenttohospital.Afterawhile,thetrafficpolicecame.Underthehelpofthepeoplewhowitnessedtheaccident,thepolicefoundoutatruth.Thedriverofthecarwasdrinkingandhiscarwentoutofcontrol.Atlasthewastakentothepolicestation.Allthepeopletherethinkthecardriverwastoblameforthisaccident.
Whichisreportedinthenewsreports,drunkdrivingshouldbetreatedmoreseriously.Itoftencausesmanypeoplelosetheirlives,suchastheaccidentthathappenedinHangzhouandChengdu.Itishightimethatwepreventdrunkdriving.
Passage3
DearSir/Madam,
Iwritethislettertoyoutodrawyourattentiontomycomplaintaboutyourservice.Afewdaysago,Ijoinedathree-daystriptoE-meiMountaininyourtravelagency.Ifoundalittledifferencesbetweenyouradvertisementandaction.Asyousay,youwillprovidealargeair-conditionedbus,butweonlyrodeinashabbybuswithanyairconditioner.Yes,youserveduslunch,andthefoodtastedterriblyandsomeevenwithsand.Wedidn’tenjoyanykindofshower.Infact,weonlybatheincoldwater.Asforsightseeing,theguidetookustoseveralexpensivesouvenirshops,whatwastedusmuchtime.Astheresult,twosceneryspotswerefinallyleftunseen.Wedohopesomethingcandonetopreventsuchthingshappenagain.
Passage4
Asweallknow,playingisoneofman'
sitselfcharacteristics.Notallpeopleliketoworkandeveryonelikestoplay.Allovertheworldmenandwoman,boysandgirlsenjoysports.Sincemanyyearsago,manyadultsandchildrenhavecalltheirfriendstogethertospendhours,evendaysplaygames.Oneofreasonswhypeopleliketoplayisthatsportshelpthemtomovehappily.Inotherwords,theyhelptokeeppeoplestrongandhealth.Ifpeopleareplayinggames,theymovealotof.Havingfunwiththeirfriendsmakethemhappy.Manypeopleenjoysportsbywatchothersplay.Sothatiswhysportsaregoodactivitiesforpeople’shealth.
Passage5
LastSundayIwentshoppingwithmyfather.Wehavealotofthingstobuy.Wedrovetothecenterofthecityandstoppedourcarinthefrontoftheshop.Anhourlate,wecamebacktothecar.Butitwasstrangethatwecouldn’topenthedoor.Soweaskedthepolicemanforhelp.Itwasgladtohelpus.Afewminutelater,hegotthedooropen.Justthenamancameupandshoutedangrily.‘Howareyoudoingwithmycar?
’Weweresurprisingandwenttoseethenumberofthecar.Whatyouthinkwedidthen?
Wehadtospeaksorrytothemanagainandagain.
Passage6
Yesterday,itwasjustonthepointofbigshoppingthisseason.LiMeigoestoastoretoreturnashirtwithoutcarryingthereceipt(收据).Whenshegotthere,sherefused.Thesalesmansaidthathewouldn’ttakeitbackifsheshowedhimthereceipt.Thinkingitwasnowayout,LiMeiputtheshirtbackinherbagandleft.Suddenlytwoshopguardstoppedherandbegantosearchforher.Theyfoundtheshirtinthebagandlookedatitcareful.Manyeyeswerestaringather,whatmadeLiMeiveryembarrassing.Luckily,asalesmancameupintimeandshewasallowedtogo.
Passage7
Changescreatehappiness.Fortunately,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinmyvillage.Tenyearsago,thesmallandlowhouses,whichlieonthenorthofthelake,producedmuchwaste.Astheresult,thelakewasseriouspolluted.Tothewestwasasandyfield,thatwasthesourceofdust.Betterstill,abrickyardonthesouthwestsideofthelakeusedupagreatdealgoodsoil.Nowpoorhousehavebeenreplacedbygreentreesandthebrickyardbytallbuildings.Thesandyfieldthatthevillagersusedtoploughinghasbeencoveredwithfruittrees.Onthelakethevillagersoftenspendhissparetimeboat