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写作三:
tosellayouusedatcollege.
看到这次的作文题,就问你——惊不惊喜?
意不意外?
这次的作文不是大家最熟悉的议论文,而是大家本就不是很熟练的应用文!
而且是应用文体里面最没有存在感的——广告!
其实大家也没必要因为没有写过广告类的文章而慌了神。
“应用“文体,重点在于“应用”,所以写作的时候,实实在在的“按需而写”就可以了;
Step1:
其实作文的题目已经把要写的“需求”都写得很清楚了,大家考场上需要做的,就是先仔细审题,把下面这些关键字先圈出来:
Sellacomputer:
used(所以不是新的电脑),brand,specifications/features,conditionandprice,andyourcontactinformation
Sellabike:
used(所以不是新的电脑),brand,features,conditionandprice,andyourcontactinformation
Sellcoursebooks:
abriefdescriptionoftheircontent,theirconditionandprice,andyourcontactinformation.
注意:
虽然题目中说的是“youmayinclude…”,但是作为卖二手货的“广告”,有些必要的信息是一定不能漏的——condition,priceandcontactinformation——所以这三个信息在三套写作题里都出现了,说明十分重要!
这次很多考生,因为害怕涉及个人信息泄露,就自动忽略了“contactinformation”,亦或是写到最后,就忘记附上这一点了。
这样没有个人联系方式的广告,本就违背了“应用”文的写作目的,所以最后写作分数上也一定会受到一些影响。
Step2:
按照最舒服的“三段式”,安排广告信息,做一个简单的草稿;
草稿就是“结构+关键词”就可以了。
大家可以参考一下下面这个格式:
P1:
自我介绍+背景原因(我是谁,我要干什么,我为什么要卖这个电脑)
P2:
所卖东西的细节信息:
brand–XXX;
features—fast,reliable,suitableseat,strongtires…;
price—以前多少钱,现在多少钱;
P3:
如何练联系我…
Step3
按照自己写的大纲,完成文章即可!
注意,遇到和单车,电脑有关的专有名词不会写怎么办?
——condition不需要写太详细,挑自己会写的大方向写就好了;
比如单车很舒服啊(suitable),电脑还很新啊(brandnew),就可以了;
总之,写作尽量减少自己的语言错误!
应用文的用语不需要太高端大气上档次的!
1.Well-maintainedMacBookonsale
I'
mWangMing,aseniorfromCollegeofMathematicsandComputerScience.IwanttosellmyusedAppleMacBookAirforI’vejustgotanewonerecently.
Withasimpleandneatdesign,theAppleMacBookAirweighsonly2.9pounds.Theattractivesilvercolorhasanappealthat'
sperfectforcollegestudents.WithmacOS10operatingsysteminstalled,itscomponentsareingoodconditionaswell.ThemotherboardownsIntelCorei5processor,anda4GBRAMwith128Gharddrives,whichworksveryefficiently.
Consideringallthis,2000RMBisatrulyfairpriceforyoutoownit!
Ifyouareinterestedinmycomputer,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions.Icanbereachedatphone87654321.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
2.Usedbicycleonsale
AusedCanyonbikeis(available)onsale!
Thoughused,it’sstillafastandreliableroadbike,foritiswellmaintainedandingoodcondition(whichis)perfectforanystandardofriders(beginnerrightthroughtocompetitiveclubcyclists)withsuitableseatandstrongtires.
Thebikewasboughttwoyearsagofor1000yuan,anditisnowsoldatonly388yuan(soitisarealbargain!
Besides,thepriceisnegotiable)!
Iwantthisbiketobesoldasquicklyaspossible,forIamaseniorstudentwhoisabouttograduateandleavethecampusinthenearfuture.Pleasefeelfreetocontactmeifyouareinterestedinthisbike.Icanbereachedatphone87654321orbymye-mail123@.
3. Advertisement
I’mLiHua,aseniorstudentwhoisabouttograduateandleavethecampus,soIhavethreeusedcoursebooksaboutEnglishlearningtosellatafairlylowprice!
Thesebookscouldbebeneficialtoanyonewhodecidestobuythem.First,thebooksprovidemanypracticalskillsonthefollowingthreeaspectsofEnglishlearning:
howtoimprovelistening,speakingandwriting.Second,thebooksarestillwell-maintainedwithseeminglybrandnewcovers.Third,eachbookcontainsadelicatebookmarkwiththewriter’ssignatureasasouvenir!
Ifyouareinterestedinmybook,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions.Icanbereachedatphone87654321.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
4.AsIamabouttograduateandleavethecampus,Iamgoingtosellmypersonallaptopatalowprice.
ItisaLenovoThinkPadthatIboughtinJune,2015.Itisnotbig,butveryfunctional.Ithasafour-coreCPU,anindependentdisplaycardof2G,aharddiskof500Gandascreenof15.6inches.
Forthelasttwoyears,thelaptophasservedasmyfaithfulaidandhelpedmefinishmostofmyassignmentsandmythesis.Therehasappearednofaultintheprocess.Iowesomuchtoit.Butasmyworkplacehasalreadyofferedmeamoreadvancedworkinglaptop,Ifindthereisnonecessityformetohavetwo.AndIknowthattheremustbesomeofmyschoolmateswhoaremoreinneedoftheThinkPad.Therefore,Ideterminedtosellit.
Iboughtthelaptopasthepriceof3500yuan.NowIwillsellitat1500yuanorless.Anyoneinterestedcancontactmeviaemail,andmymailboxis***@.
2016年6月英语四级写作及范文
写作题目:
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutesto
1.writealettertoexpressyourthankstoyou