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1、写作三：to sell a you used at college. 看到这次的作文题，就问你惊不惊喜？意不意外？这次的作文不是大家最熟悉的议论文，而是大家本就不是很熟练的应用文！而且是应用文体里面最没有存在感的广告！其实大家也没必要因为没有写过广告类的文章而慌了神。“应用“文体，重点在于“应用”，所以写作的时候，实实在在的“按需而写”就可以了；Step 1:其实作文的题目已经把要写的“需求”都写得很清楚了，大家考场上需要做的，就是先仔细审题，把下面这些关键字先圈出来：Sell a computer: used（所以不是新的电脑）, brand, specifications/features

2、, condition and price, and your contact informationSell a bike: used（所以不是新的电脑）, brand, features, condition and price, and your contact informationSell course books: a brief description of their content, their condition and price, and your contact information.注意：虽然题目中说的是“you may include ”, 但是作为卖二手货的“

3、广告”，有些必要的信息是一定不能漏的condition, price and contact information 所以这三个信息在三套写作题里都出现了，说明十分重要！这次很多考生，因为害怕涉及个人信息泄露，就自动忽略了“contact information”，亦或是写到最后，就忘记附上这一点了。这样没有个人联系方式的广告，本就违背了“应用”文的写作目的，所以最后写作分数上也一定会受到一些影响。Step 2:按照最舒服的“三段式”，安排广告信息，做一个简单的草稿；草稿就是“结构 + 关键词”就可以了。大家可以参考一下下面这个格式：P 1: 自我介绍 + 背景原因 （我是谁，我要干什么，我为

4、什么要卖这个电脑）P 2: 所卖东西的细节信息：brand XXX; features fast, reliable, suitable seat, strong tires ; price 以前多少钱，现在多少钱；P 3: 如何练联系我Step 3按照自己写的大纲，完成文章即可！注意，遇到和单车，电脑有关的专有名词不会写怎么办？ condition不需要写太详细，挑自己会写的大方向写就好了；比如单车很舒服啊（suitable），电脑还很新啊（brand new），就可以了；总之，写作尽量减少自己的语言错误！应用文的用语不需要太高端大气上档次的！1. Well-maintained MacBo

5、ok on saleIm Wang Ming, a senior from College of Mathematics and Computer Science. I want to sell my used Apple MacBook Air for Ive just got a new one recently.With a simple and neat design, the Apple MacBook Air weighs only 2.9 pounds. The attractive silver color has an appeal thats perfect for col

6、lege students. With mac OS 10 operating system installed, its components are in good condition as well. The motherboard owns Intel Core i5 processor, and a 4GB RAM with 128G hard drives, which works very efficiently.Considering all this, 2000 RMB is a truly fair price for you to own it!If you are in

7、terested in my computer, please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions. I can be reached at phone 87654321. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.2. Used bicycle on saleA used Canyon bike is （available） on sale! Though used, its still a fast and reliable road bike, for it

8、is well maintained and in good condition （which is） perfect for any standard of riders （beginner right through to competitive club cyclists） with suitable seat and strong tires.The bike was bought two years ago for 1000 yuan, and it is now sold at only 388 yuan （so it is a real bargain! Besides, the

9、 price is negotiable）!I want this bike to be sold as quickly as possible, for I am a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus in the near future. Please feel free to contact me if you are interested in this bike. I can be reached at phone 87654321 or by my e-mail 123.3.Advertisem

10、entIm Li Hua, a senior student who is about to graduate and leave the campus, so I have three used course books about English learning to sell at a fairly low price!These books could be beneficial to anyone who decides to buy them. First, the books provide many practical skills on the following thre

11、e aspects of English learning: how to improve listening, speaking and writing. Second, the books are still well-maintained with seemingly brand new covers. Third, each book contains a delicate bookmark with the writers signature as a souvenir!If you are interested in my book, please feel free to con

12、tact me if you have any further questions. I can be reached at phone 87654321. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.4. As I am about to graduate and leave the campus, I am going to sell my personal laptop at a low price.It is a Lenovo ThinkPad that I bought in June, 2015. It is not big, but

13、 very functional. It has a four-core CPU, an independent display card of 2G, a hard disk of 500G and a screen of 15.6 inches.For the last two years, the laptop has served as my faithful aid and helped me finish most of my assignments and my thesis. There has appeared no fault in the process. I owe s

14、o much to it. But as my workplace has already offered me a more advanced working laptop, I find there is no necessity for me to have two. And I know that there must be some of my schoolmates who are more in need of the ThinkPad. Therefore, I determined to sell it.I bought the laptop as the price of 3500 yuan. Now I will sell it at 1500 yuan or less. Anyone interested can contact me via email, and my mailbox is *.2016年6月英语四级写作及范文写作题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to 1. write a letter to express your thanks to you