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3)Withapopulationof176million,thefiguresforBrazilindicatehowhighagriculturalwaterconsumptioncanbeinsomecountries.
使用状语前置的最大优点是让单调的句子有了跳跃的节奏感、考官一天看上百张考卷,看到这样的句子也会心情愉悦。
2、插入语
此种语法结构是可以理解为是状语前置的另一种变体,它将状语结构提到了主句的主语和谓语之间、插入语也是相对地道的英语表达方法。
请看以下几例:
1)Universities,whenitisfunctioningwell,shouldofferboththeoreticalknowledgeaswellasprofessionaltraining.
2)Sooverall,Ibelievethat,attendingschoolfromayoungageisgoodformostchildren.
插入语的功能和状语前置基本相似,都能使句子更有跳跃感和地道。
3、倒装句
1)Theparentsshouldspendtimeontheirchildren,theyshouldalsocommunicatewiththem.
2)Wecanneverlosesightofthesignificanceofeducation.
以上两句话都没有任何错误,但是读来非常平淡,没有任何特色,如果我们用倒装句,出来的效果就完全不一样了。
1)Notonlyshouldparentsspendtimeontheirchildren,theyarealsoadvisedtointeractwiththem.
2)Onnoaccount/bynomeans/innowaycanwelosesightofthesignificanceofeducation.
实例解析增强雅思写作语句表现力的方法
一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。
例如:
Weak:
Thetreesarebare.Thegrassisbrown.Thelandscapeseemsdrab.Revision:
Thebrowngrassandbaretreesformadrablandscape.(转换为前置定语)
Or:
Thelandscape,bareandbrown,beggedforspringgreen.(转换为并列结构作后置定语)
2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。
1)Weak:
Theteammembersaregoodplayers.
Revision:
Theteammembersplaywell.
2)Weak:
Oneworkersplanistheeliminationoftardiness.
Oneworkersplaneliminatestardiness.
3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。
Thereisnoopportunityforpromotion.
Noopportunityforpromotionexists.
Herearethebooksyouordered.
Thebooksyouorderedhavearrived.
二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。
1、Poor:
Mysupervisorwentpastmydesk.
Better:
Mysupervisorsauntered(=walkedslowly)pastmydesk.
2、Poor:
Sheisacarefulshopper.
Shecomparespricesandquality.
三、尽量运用主动语态。
1、Weak:
Theorganizationhasbeensupportedbycharity.
Charityhassupportedtheorganization.
2、Weak:
Thebiscuitswerestackedonaplate.
Motherstackedthebiscuitsonaplate.
四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。
1、Wordy:
Mylittlesisterhasapreferenceforchocolatemilk.
Improved:
Mylittlesisterpreferschocolatemilk.
2、Wordy:
Weareinreceiptofyourletterandintendtofollowyourrecommendations.
Wehavereceivedyourletterandintendedtofollowyourrecommendation.
3、Redundant:
Wehadaseriouscrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
Wehadacrisisatschoolyesterdaywhenourchemistrylaboratorycaughtfire.
4、Redundant:
MysisterandIboughtthesame,identicaldressindifferentstores.
MysisterandIboughtthesamedressindifferentstores.
五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。
Theywillnotagreetohisproposalsinanyshapeorform.
Theywillnotagreetoanyofhisproposals.
IneedherfinancialinputbeforeIcanguesstimateourexpendituresnextfall.
IneedherfinancialfiguresbeforeIcanestimateourexpendituresnextfall.
雅思写作技巧:
使句子多样化的方法
一篇好文章的条件很多。
除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理,也起着决定性作用。
句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。
如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。
如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。
最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。
简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。
总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。
例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:
(1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句
(1)+2)
(2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(现在分语短语+简单句)
(3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副词短语+并列分句
(1)-
(2))
(4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(简单句+形容语短语)
(5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副词从句+主句)
(1)和(5)的句式最常见;
如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?
最后,看看这两个句子要怎样多样化呢?
(6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(7)Hefeltveryuneasy.
(a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.
(b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.
(c)Theyoungpilotsfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.
(d)Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.
(e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.
(f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.
(g)Beingonhisfi