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第二段最好是总分总的夹心式写法，论点点明深刻含义（或者先由浅入深），好事结论用反面论证，坏事用威胁性总结，而中间的5大可以使用的方面分别是：

象征点，现状+原因分析，INOTHERWORDS（影响和后果分析），举例联系实际，和层进的修辞手法。

其中最最最关键的是原因分析和后果分析。

注意到，这八个方面是可以构思的方面，不是要都写，都写的话，这一段一般人过200，高手过1000.P2注意尽量控制在6-7句以内.

下面将就今年重大的食品安全问题，来简单阐述一下P2的思想，并且教授如何有效简化P2的思路。

所有的论据如下：

1. 

现状（罗列除了很多可以参考的写法）

1）Thepastseveralyearshaswitnessed/experiencedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowing/increasing/expanding/mountingnumberssufferedfromthesevereconsequenceofunsafefood.

2）Thepastseveralyearsareaccompaniedbythedramaticincreaseofunsafefood.

3）Theunprecedentedeconomicdevelopmentoverthepastseveralyearsisaccompaniedbythedramaticincreaseofunsafefood.

4）Wecanthinkofavarietyofcheatingphenomenainourcontemporarysociety,suchasthepoisonousmilkwhichresultsinprevalentinfantkidneyproblem,andeggswhichcontainundesirablechemicalfactors,allofwhicharesoundinganalarmtooursociety.

2. 

原因（写一条就可以，不写也没问题，但是要让文章显得有深度最好分析一下原因）

1）.人们为了追求利润，而丧失了道德底线

2）.国家监管不力，相关法律并未完善，给了不法分子漏洞

3）.万能BT理由，社会压力巨大。

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1）Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.

2）Thereasonforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent,ascribeittothefollowinginterrelatedfactors.（1，2两句作用相同，都是引出两条原因。

注意没必要两条，一条就够，两条主要是为了层次感）

3）具体的两条理由，Ontheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyturningablindeyeto/totallyignoringthebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.

Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.

3. 

后果/影响

Professionaldishonestyundoubtedlyexertsanadverseconsequenceonoursociety.

Initially,theyadverselyaffectthehealthconditionofnumerousconsumers,forthereasonthatconsumerscannoteasilyrecognizethem.Additionally,fakegoodsposeaprobableandpotentialthreatonournationaleconomy,because/asconsumersdonotbelievethemarketsystem.Inotherwords,thisphenomenonwillunderminethewholebusiness.Finally,wehavebusinesswithforeigncountries.Iffakegoodsarediscoveredintheoverseastrade,itwillundoubtedlyexertanegativeinfluenceonourreputation.

王江涛：

Itnotonlyputshonestbusinessmenatacompetitivedisadvantage,butalsounderminesthefoundationofprofessionalethicsinbusiness.

4. 

威胁性总结

Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse/thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywouldbecomeunimaginableanduncontrollable/thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywouldbecomeuncurbed.

5. 

举例说明Itcanbebestexemplifiedbythecaseofpoisonousmilkandotherdangerousfood.（其实就是联系实际，也可以说就是现状的具体体现）

6. 

层进的修辞手法和转折的运用

1）Thereisnodenyingthefactthatthevirtueofhonestyshouldbeaccepted,appreciatedandadvocatedbyallthebusinessmen.Regrettably/However,thecurrentsituationisincompatiblewiththisidealconcept.

2）Itisundeniablethatwemustbehonest,whichshouldbeaccepted,appreciatedandadvocatedbyallthebusinessmen.Regrettably/However,itisruthlesslyandrelentlesslyignoredincontemporarysociety.

考研第二段就是以上内容的合理整合，加上第一句的论点

Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.

和最后一句的结论（威胁性总结）Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.

中间插入3-4句论据即可，成为一个夹心式的写法。

一定不能写太多，第二段控制在5--6句，7句冲顶

版本一论点+原因+结论（黑字是第二段首尾，几个版本都不变，其他是根据刚才的分析加入的论据）

Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.Ontheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyignoringthebasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorateandcollapse.

版本二：

论点+现状+层进+结论

头尾两句不变

Simpleasthepictureis,itssubtleconnotationendeavorstoconvinceusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtotheprevalentandpervasiveissueofunsafefood.Thepastseveralyearshaswitnessed/experiencedthephenomenonthatpeopleingrowingnumberssufferedfromthesevereconsequenceofunsafefood.Wecanthinkofavarietyofcheatingphenomenainourcontemporarysociety,suchasthepoisonousmilkwhichresultsinprevalentinfantkidneyproblem,andeggswhichcontainundesirablechemicalfactors.Thereisnodenyingthefactthatthevirtueofhon