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Tocontinueastory,续写之如何构思,WhatisaSTORY/WhydowemakeSTORIES?
@#@,Astoryistoentertian,toamuse,toeducate,toenlighten.Basically,astoryistodeliverapieceofmindtous.So,howtodeliveritwell?
@#@,Whatmakesastory?
@#@,Simplyput:
@#@,WhoWhereWhatWhenHowWhy,Literarilyput:
@#@,Characters(Main&@#@Minor)Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&@#@Resolution),ThinkForagoodstory,whichismoreimportant,thecharacter,ortheplot?
@#@,1.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but_.2.ShenMengyanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_,butwhen_shewill_.3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe_.,hewasalittleannoyedwhenhisfoodwastakenbyChengSihan,isintheclassroom,inthedorm,betotallyacrazyone,alwaysspeakssoftlytohim,CharacterizationPractice(Writing),4.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,he_.5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe_.6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_.,cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.,looksdownuponalltheotherboysintheclasswhohethinksugly.,felthemustdosomething,Makeitaone-sentencestory!
@#@,1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptonshouse,onlyto_.2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas_.3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinnystape,_.,bemadelosehisnervesbyalittlemischievousgirl,tobecomethequeenofthepartyoftheupperclass,didntletthedesiretowingetthebetterofherandreturnedittoJinny,4.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteacherseyes,yethe_.6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she_.,aChristmasgiftfromtheboss,neverlikesanyteachersclass,Letsreadandpayattentiontotheredpart.,OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“Imgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.,Whatwouldshedoorexperiencenext?
@#@,criedforhelp?
@#@regrettedwhatshehaddone?
@#@triedtogobackonherown?
@#@waitedforherhusband?
@#@cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?
@#@.,Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.,Begantoregret,Thingsgotworse,missherhusbandandfamily,Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.,1.Itsluckyshehadsometingtodrinkandeat,butwouldtheluckcontinue?
@#@2.Whyweretheberriesmostdelicioustoher?
@#@,Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?
@#@Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.,Helicopterstandsfor?
@#@,Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._,