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Faultdiagnosisresearchbasedontime-frequencymethodinrotorsystems
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Thepaperpresentsanapplicationofreassignedwaveletscalogramforrotorsystemfaultdiagnosis.Itisatopicofinteresttotheresearchersintherelatedareasbutthepaperneedsverysignificantimprovementbeforeacceptanceforpublication.Mydetailedcommentsareasfollows:
1.Thewaveletmethod(reassignedwaveletscalogram)usedinthepaperworksverywellfortheunderlyingfaultdiagnosisproblem.Ontheotherhand,thiswaveletmethodisa
well-establishedmethod,andthepresentresearchisadirectapplicationofthismethodwithoutnewcontributioninmethodologicalresearch.
2.Fortheabovereason,thepresentationshouldbefocusedontheresults.Unfortunately,thepresentationisfarfromacceptableforpublication.ThematerialwasnotproperlyorganizedanditisstronglysuggestedthattheauthorscheckcarefullytheEnglishwritinganduse
standardterminologiesinthetechnicalarea.
3.Thetitleofthepapershouldbemorespecificsincenumerousstudieshavebeendoneonthefaultdiagnosisofrotorsystemsusingwaveletsandtime-frequencymethods.Also,removetheword"
research"
.
4.OnSection1:
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Thissectionlistedmanyreferencesthataremainlyrelatedtorotordynamicsandarenotdirectlyrelatedtorotorsystemdiagnosis.Iftheauthorswouldliketokeepthesereferences,somediscussionsontherelevanceoftheserefstothepresentresearchareneeded.
ReviewonthedirectlyrelevantrefswillbemorehelpfulForthereader.Also,time-frequencyandwaveletsaremainlyfornon-stationaryandtransientanalysis.Theauthormaydiscussinmoredetailwhattypesoftransientsandnon-stationarycomponentswouldappearinrotorsystemvibration.
Afewsentencesontheorganizationofthepaperwillbehelpful.
5.OnSection2:
Sincethemajormethodusedintheapplicationisreassignedwaveletscalogram,itisnotneededtogivethedetailsofthreeothermethods(onlygiveafewwordsandgivetherefs).Instead,theauthorsmaydiscussmoreontherelationshipbetweentraditionalwaveletscalogramandthereassignedwaveletscalogram,andexplainwhythelatterisbetterthantheformer.
Eq
(2):
theright-hand-sideiswrongand"
2"
ismissed.
ThedescriptionafterEq
(2)isnotclear.SeeCohen'
sbookfordetailsaboutthecross-terms.
6.OnSections3and4:
Thedescriptionneedstobeimproved.ThematerialinSection3shouldbeorganizedinseveralparagraphs.
7.OnSection5:
Theauthorsdidagoodexperimentandsomeofthephenomenapresentedinthe
time-frequencyplanesarealsoveryinteresting.However,theobservationsshouldbedescribedconcisely,andtheauthorsshouldfocusmoreon:
1)whetherthesephenomenaaregeneralcharacteristics,and2)ifpossible,explainthereasonofthephenomenaandtheadvantagesofreassignedwaveletscalogramoverothertime-frequencymethods.
Infact,itispossibletointerpretmostofthephenomenainthetime-frequencyplanesusingr