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宣布:
announce/declare
保证:
promise/assure
建议:
offer/propose/suggest;
问与答:
ask询问/answer回答/reply回复
喊叫:
cryout喊叫/call喊叫/shout大喊/scream尖叫/yell大喊/exclaim惊叫(因高兴、愤怒、痛苦、惊讶等发生的喊叫)
其他的说:
add补充说道=continue继续说道/retort反驳道;
explain解释道/state陈述道;
/protest抗议道/sob哭诉道/agree同意地说/comfort安慰道/blurtout脱口而出/insist
2.关于eye的动作:
闪烁(某种感情色彩):
shine/sparkle/glimmer/glitter/twinklewith+excitement/joy/pride等表示感情色彩的名词
各种哭:
cry/sob/weep/wail/burstintotears/burstoutcrying/fightbacktears抑制住泪水
睁大眼睛:
one’seyeswidened/grewwide
3.关于face/cheek的动作:
露出笑容:
asmileappearedon/spreadacrosshisface
焕发光彩:
one’sfacelitup/brightened/glowed
脸红:
flush/burn(withembarrassment)
各种笑:
smile微笑/laugh出声笑/chuckle轻声笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer讥讽地笑/beam笑容满面/grin露齿笑
4.关于hand的动作:
各种打:
pound/thump/punch猛击;
beat连续击打;
slap打耳光;
tap/pat轻拍
各种抓:
seize;
grasp;
grab;
clutch;
takeholdof;
catchholdof;
holdonto
其他的动作:
pull拉/掏;
push推;
reach伸;
drag拽;
pinch捏wipe擦;
rub揉;
hug/embrace/holdsbinone’sarms拥抱;
press按压;
roll摇;
pickup捡起
5.关于body的动作:
sit坐;
lie躺;
bend/stoop弯腰;
leanagainst..倚靠;
drop/hang/lowerone’shead低头
6.关于heart的动作:
各种心跳:
beat/thump/pound/pump(withexcitement/fear)
其他动作:
miss/skipabeat漏跳了一拍;
break心碎;
melt融化;
ache疼
7.关于foot/knee的动作:
dash/rush冲;
risetoone’sfeet站起来;
struggletoone’sfeet吃力地站起来;
jumptoone’sfeet跳起来;
kneeldown跪下;
getdownononeknee单膝跪地;
slip滑到;
sneak/creep偷偷走;
crawl爬;
wobble/limp/stagger/stumble摇摇晃晃地走
二.添加修饰成分,做到生动描写
1.可以添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词。
①with+情感名词的搭配:
withdelight/excitement/pleasure/happiness/joy/satisfaction/anger/rage/patience/fear/terror/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty
如:
Hereyesshonewithexcitement.她的眼睛中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
②with+身体部位
withitshungryredeyes/itssharpteeth/hershakyhand/herpalelips等等
TheferociouswolfstaredatMacwithitshungryredeyes.
此处用withitshungryredeyes来修饰动作stare,使狼凶狠的形象更加丰满。
ShekissedOliverwithherpalelips.
此处用withherpalelips来修饰动作kiss,体现了母亲当时虚弱的状态,和对Oliver满满的爱。
③in+名词insurprise/amazement/shock/sorrow伤心
inahigh/low/sweet/loud/soft/weakvoice用..的嗓音
Inatoneofsurprise/curiosity/impatience/regret/command命令/sarcasm讽刺用...的语气
Hegazedatmeinsurprise.
④副词suddenly/immediately/instantly/rapidly/firmly/slowly/angrily/happily/excitedly/
Hecarefullyjumpedoverthebrokenglasses.
此处也可以把副词carefully提高句首,强调他的小心,效果更好。
高分表达:
Carefully,hejumpedoverthebrokenglasses.
2.在动作描写中也可以运用明喻、暗喻、拟人、夸张等写作手法,让你的写作更加生动传神。
①ShehowledlongandloudlikeaferociouswolfandthenjumpedatBuck.
此句把她比作凶残的恶狼,用到了明喻的写作手法,使整句的动作描写更有力度,更有画面感。
②Shewenthomeinafloodoftears.她泪如泉涌地回家去了。
此处在动作描写中添加了inafloodoftears夸张描写,生动传神地体现她当时的情感状态。
三.分解动作,形成动作链或者动作面
学生要学会分解动作,形成一个完成的动作链,比如浙江高考读后续写Mac遇到狼上车的动作,不是简单的getinthecar就可以解决的,过于笼统的描述使描写空洞乏味,学生要善于捕捉这个关键的慢镜头,并将Mac的动作按照时间轴分解为jumpoffthebicycle——dashintothebackseatofthecar——slamthedoor———leanagainsttheseat,breathless饱满的动作链,那动作链或者动作面有哪些形式呢?
1.动作链的表达可用状语从句,如when,while,as,before,after引导的时间状语从句来体现。
①WhenIarrivedthere,Iwalkedtothedoorandknocked.
②AsIwaitedatthestop,Iheardabignoise.
2.动作链的表达可用并列谓语动词来体现,即AandB或者A,BandC。
①Shehailedataxi,gotintoitandtoldthedriverherdestination.
②Hereacheddeepintohispocket,pulledoutahandfulofchange,andheldituptothefarmer.
3.动作链的表达可用非谓语来体现。
⑴A-ing,B或者A,B-ing
①Lookingupatthefarmer,theboysaid,“Thankyou.”
②Thedogawkwardlywobbledtowardstheothers,doingitsbesttocatchup.
⑵AandB,C-ing或者A,B-ingandC-ing或者A-ing,B,C-ing
①Thefarmerpickedupthedogandkneltdown,saying,“It’syoursnow.”
②Thestudentscamein,talkingandlaughing.
③Lookingstraightintomyeyes,Mikestrokemyhair,whispering,“YouarethemostbeautifulgirlI’veeverseen.”
⑶Havingdone..,主句
①Havingleftsomethinginthecloakroom,Iwentinsidetogetitandfound....
=AfterIhadleftsomethinginthecloakroom,Iwentinsidetogetitand..
②Havingthoughtaboutthesituationforawhile,IdecidedtoaskRoyaboutthetheft.
=AfterIhadthoughtaboutthesituationforawhile,IdecidedtoaskRoyaboutthetheft.
这个句型可以和after引导的时间状语从句互换
4.动作链可以和情感,环境,心理,语言等结合,形成动作面。
①Burningwithanger,heglaredatmewithhisbigfrighteningeyes,yelling,“You’resuchanidiot.”
此处的burningwithanger是情感描写,glare和yell是动作链,同时将动作和语言描写结合在了一起,形成了饱满的动作面,属于高分表达。
②Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janesatonthegrass,staringatthevastsky,frightenedandravenous饥饿的.
此处将环境描写,动作描写以及情感描写结合在一起,形