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向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客Deareditor,IamLiHua,areaderofyourpaper.,评分的四大纬度,内容,语法,思想,框架-组织结构,要点全，拓展有度，有效,连接词，作文结构紧凑；

流畅,准确，复杂语法结构，高级词汇，多种句型,开放能引起读者的共鸣,灵魂,常见错误:

1.单词拼写或用错：

GiveyousomeadviseIjustprovideyoumyownsuggests.Theycanattactvisitors.,advice,suggestion,attract,问题:

2.时态语态问题WemaygivenittothePEcompany.WemaygiveittothePEcompany.3.主谓一致问题Thesportstadiumsisverygreatandishighlyspokenofbytheforeigners.Thesportstadiumsareverygreatandarehighlyspokenofbytheforeigners.,4.逐字翻译问题Thestadiumscanopentopeoplefordoexerciseuse.Thestadiumscanbeopenedtopeoplefordoingexercises.,问题:

5.词性混淆问题Itcancreativemoney.Itcancreate/bringinmoney.Manypeoplecanusethemtostrongourbody.Manypeoplecanusethemtostrengthenourbody.6.介词短语的运用问题Iamwritingtomakesomeadviceforhowtomakefulluseofthesportsstadium.Iamwritingtomakesomeadviceonhowtomakefulluseofthesportsstadium.,问题:

句子结构不完整Onlymakefulluseofthemdoesitmakesense.OnlybymakingfulluseofthemdoesitmakesenseThe29thOlympicGameswhichhostedinBeijingwereheldsuccessfully.The29thOlympicGameswhichwerehostedinBeijingwereheldsuccessfully.,1.审题2.列提纲/要点3.连词成句4.连句成篇5.润色修正6.定稿,写作步骤:

体裁时态结构要求,字数内容,信息2信息3信息4,开头正文结尾,1.审题:

体裁人称时态要求结构,字数内容,一般现在时,Para.1Para.2Para.3,抓要点,120个左右,信息1,信息5,08年奥运会刚刚落幕.征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.你想写一些建议.,向公众开放，用于健身,总结，意愿,书信格式,租给体育公司，创造经济效益,开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客,第一,三人称,08年奥运会刚刚落幕.征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.你想写一些建议,2.列提纲/要点,开头信息1,08年奥运会刚刚落幕.征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.你想写一些建议.,.,Wanttowritesomeadvice/WouldliketogiveyousomeadviceContributesomesuggestionstoyou.,CollectsomeadviceHowtouse/makeuseof/makethebestofthestadiums.AftertheOlympicGamesAfterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames.,The2008BeijingOlympic/wereover/finished/heldsuccessfullyinBeijing.,向公众开放，用于健身.租给体育公司，创造经济效益.开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客,2.列提纲/要点,.,Useitas/beusedfor/as;

takeitas;

openitforPlacesofinterest/touristattractionsAttracttourists/appealtovisitors/beattractionforvisitors,Giveto/Rentto/berentedtoSportcompany/companieswhichorganizematches/organizingmatchesMake/createmoney;

bringinmoney/makemoreprofits,Open/beopenedtothepeople/public/openthemtopublic.Beusedfor/as;

bemadeto;

Dosomeexercise/buildourbodies/strengthenourbodies,信息2信息3信息4,向公众开放，用于健身,租给体育公司，创造经济效益,开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客,正文,2.列提纲/要点,.,信息5,总结，意愿,结尾,Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned./frommypointofview.IwouldappreciateIwouldyouwillthinkof/takeintoconsideration.,开头信息1,08年奥运会刚刚落幕.征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议.你想写一些建议.,.,3.连词成句,The2008BeijingOlympicGameswereover/finished.The29thOlympicGameswereheldsuccessfullyinBeijing.Beijinghostedthe29thOlympicGameswithagreatsuccess.,The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.Beijingachieveditsdreamofhostingthe29thOlympicGamessuccessfully.,CollectsomeadviceHowtouse/makeuseof/makethebestofthestadiums.AftertheOlympicGamesAfterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames.,YouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakeuseofthestadiumsafterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGames.IhearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterBeijinghostedthe29thOlympicGamessuccessfully.,Wanttowritesomeadvice/WouldliketogiveyousomeadviceContributesomesuggestionstoyou.,Iwouldliketogiveyousomeadvice.Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou,4.Useitas/beusedfor/as;

openitforPlacesofinterests/touristattractionsAttracttourists/appealtovisitors/beattractionforvisitors,3.Giveto/Rentto/berentedtoSportcompany/companieswhichorganizematches/organizingmatchesMake/createmoney;

bringinmoney/makemoreprofits,信息2信息3信息4,向公众开放，用于健身,租给体育公司，创造经济效益,开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客,正文,3.连词成句,2.Open/beopenedtothepeople/public/openthemtopublic.Beusedfor/as;

Dosomeexercise/buildourbody/strengthenourbodies,2.Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubliccanbuildtheirbodies/strengthentheirbodies,3.Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanywhichorganizematches.Itcanbringinmoremoney/makemoreprofits,4.Theycanbeusedastouristattraction.Itcanattractmanyvisitors.,.,信息5,总结，意愿,结尾,Inmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned./frommypointofview.IwouldappreciateIwouldyouwillthinkof/takeintoconsideration.Inaword,3.连词成句,Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefulluseofthestadium.Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepconsideration,4.连句成篇,Para.1:

The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithagreatsuccess.Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums.Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.,Para.2:

Thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.Thepubli