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改错题总结

19.王琰，王鹏----课本40页改错题

VI

DearStudent,

Wethefacultytakenoprideinoureducational

achievementswithyou.Wehavepreparedyoufor

aworldthatdoesnotexist,indeed,thatmustnot1.can

exist.Youhavespentfouryearssupposingthat

failureleavesnorecord.Youhavelearnedthat

whenyourworkgoespoorly,thepainlesssolution

istodropout.Butstartnow,intheworld2.started

whichyougo＾,failuremarksyou.Confrontingdifficulty3.go

byquittingleavesyouchanged.Outsidethecollege,

quittersarenoheroes.

Withusyoucouldargueaboutwhyyourerrors

werenoterrors,whymediocreworkreally

wasexcellent,whyyoucouldtakeprideinroutine

andslipshod（不严谨的）presentation.Mostof

you,afterall,canlookbackonhonorgradesfor

mostofwhatyouhavedone.So,heregradescan

havemeantlittleindistinguishingtheexcellent

fromtheordinary.Buttomorrow,intheworldto

whichyougo,youhadbestnotdefenderrorsbut

learn＾them.Youwillill-advisedtodemand4.from

praiseforthatdoesnotdeserveit,andabusethose5.what

whodonotgiveit.

Foryearswecreatedanaltogetherforgiving

world,inwhichwhateverslighteffortyougave

wasallthatwasdemanded.Whenyoudidnotkeep

appointments,wemadenewones.Whenyour

workcameinbeyondthedeadline,wepretended

nottocare.

Worsestill,whenyouwereboring,weacted

asifyouareinteresting.Whenyouweregarrulous6.were

（喋喋不休的）andtalkedtohearyourselvestalk,we

listenedas＾youweresayingsomethingimportant.7.if

Whenyouweredull,wepretendedyouwere

smart.Whenyouwerepredictable,imaginative8.unimgaginative

androutine,welistenedasiftonewandwonderful

things.Andallthiswhy?

Inspiteyourfantasies,itwasnoteventhatwe9.Despite

wantedtobelikedbyyou.Itwasthatwedidnot

wanttobebothered,andtheeasyway＾waspretense:

10.out

smileandeasyBs.

21.薛磊，杨晨----课本90页改错题

Istronglydisagreewithsomepeople’sassessmentofthedisadvantages

ofchildrengrowingupwithoutaccesstocomputersandtheinternet.

Somehow,generationsofpeopleifallracesandeconomicbackgroundstried1.managed

tosucceedwithoutcomputers.

Iamachildofthe’50sandgraduatedfromcollegein∧mid1970s,without2.the

theaidofacomputerorevenacalculator.Weusedourbrainstoaddand

abstractandsliderules（计算尺）formorecomplicatedmath.Welearnedtospell

words,notusespell-check;welearnedtodiagram（用图解法分析）sentences,

notclickonthegrammar-check.Welearnedpenmanshipsoouthandwriting3.handwritten

paperscouldberead.

Igrewupwithtwosistersonthe“wrongside”ofmyhometown（youknow,

thepoorside）.MyparentsgraduatedduringtheGreatDepressionwitheighth4.eight

gradesofeducationandworkerhardformeagerwages.Wehadatelephone,but

wedidnothavetelevisionuntil1968.Iguessweweredeprived.

Diditaffectme?

No.MysisterandIaresuccessfulbecauseourparents

struggledtoscrapeupforthetuitiontosendustoprivateschool.Theycared5.for删去

enoughtomakesurewelearnedoutfactions,ourspellingwordsanoursentence

diagrams.Theyinstilledinustheloveofbooksandreading.

Ibecamecomputerilliterateat30,.Ianacurioussoul,soIlearnnewapplications6.literate

thatimprovemyworkandhomeenvironments.Iamnotinthedarkageswhenit

comestotechnology.Iembracedit.

Butcomputersandsoftwarearesimpletools.Thearenotanswerstoadeeper

problem.Don’tblamethelackofcomputerand/orInternetaccesstopoorstudent7.for

performance.Computersandsoftwarewillnotmakeastudentbetterifthebasicskills

andparentinginvolvementarenotpartiftheequation.8.parental

Getagrip（请冷静），folks.Teachchildrentoaddsubtract.Teachthemtolive

education,tobecuriousaboutwhat’saroundthebend（转弯处），overthehorizon.

Teachthemrespectforourcountry’svalues,thehistory.Teachthemasensebetween9.of

rightandwrong.

Anoldsayinggoessomethinglikethis:

Giveamanafishandheeatstoday;teachhim

tofishandhewilleatforlife.Whynotchangeittoread:

Giveachildacomputerand

shelearnstodoubleclick.Teachhertoread,write,spellandsubtract,andthedoorsfor10.to

knowledgeopenwide.

24.臧坤，姚海龙----课本185页改错题

WithouthiswifeJane,Hawkinghasalwaysemphasized,

hiscareermightneversoared,Shemarriedhimshortly

afterhehaddiagnosedwithALS,fullyawareofthedreadful,1.__________

progressnatureofthedisease,givinghimhopeandthewillto2.__________

carrywithhisstudies.Theyhadthreechildrenintheearlystages3.__________

oftheirmarriage,andlater,ashebecameincreasinglydisabled,

shedevotedherselftosatisfyhiseveryneed.4.__________

Afteryearsofapparentharmoniousmarriage,however,5.__________

seriousdisagreementsbeganappearing.Astheawardspoured6.__________

inforStephen,Jane----competentandintelligentherself----

begantoresentlivinginhisshadow.Deeplyreligious,shewas

alsooffendedbyhisbeliefintheexistenceofGod.Particularly7.__________

annoyedtoherwashisconceptthattheuniversemightbe8.__________

completelyself-contained,havenoboundaryoredge,no9.__________

beginningorend.Ifthatweretrue,heaskedprovocatively,

“Whatplace,then,foracreator?

”Still,friendswereshocked

In1990whenHawkingabruptlyendedtheir25-yearmarriage,

movinginwithoneofhisnurse.10.___________

答案：

1.had后^been2.progress→progressive3.with→on4.satisfy→satisfying

5.apparent→apparently6.去掉the7.belief→disbelief8.annoyed→annoying

9.have→having10.nurse→nurses

26.张明星，张正孝----课本214页改错题

TheUnitedStateshasamajorracialproblemonits

hands.Theonlywaytosolveisthrougheducation.1.

Blacksshouldknowaboutthecontributionthatblack

individualsandgroupshavedonetowardsbuilding2.

America.Thisisofvitalimportanceforthereself-respect;

anditisperhapsevenmoreimportantforwhite

peopletoknow.Yetifyoubelievethatamanhasno3.

historyworthmentioning,itisdifficulttoconclude4.

thathehasnovalueasaman.

Manypeoplebelievethat,sincetheachievements

oftheblacksdonotappearinhistoricalbooks,theydid5.

nothaveany.Littlehasbeenwrittenaboutthe5,000

AmericanblackswhofoughtintheRevolutionagainst

TheBritish,andtheywereineveryimportantbattle.In6.

theCivilWar,forexamplemorethen200,000black

troopsfoughtintheUnitedStatesforces.How,then,

didtheimageoftheblacksasbravefightingpeopleappear?

7.

Tojustifytheinstitutionofslavery,slaveholders

Hadtocreatethemythoftheslow-wittedblack,incapable

ofself-improvement,andevendissatisfiedwithhis8.

lot.Nothingcouldbefurtherfromthetrue.Theslave9.

foughtforhisfreedomateverychancehegot,and

therewasagreatnumberofrisings.10.

答案：

1.is前加it2.done改为made　　　　3.Yet改为For　

4.difficult改为easy5.historical改为history　6.and改为but　

7.appear改为disappear8.dissatisfied改为satisfied　9.true改为truth

10.was改为were

28.朱朝旭，代永霞----课本236页改错题

I’magreatadmireroftheJapanesebecausethey

knowwherethey’vecomefrom,theyknowwhere

they’reat,andtheyknowwherethey’regoing.And

mostimportant,theyhaveanationalstrategytoget

themthere.

Theyalsoknowtomakegoodcars.Duringthe26.

1970s,theircarswereactuallybetterthanours.That’s

nottrueanylonger,butmanyAmericansstillbelieveit.

HowdidJapanesecarsgetsogood?

Itstartswith

theworkers.Tobegin,laborcostsovertherearemuch27.

higherthanours.Japaneseworkersearnabout6028.

percentsofwhatAmericancounterpartstakehome.29.

Theydon’thaveautomaticcost-of-livingincreasestie30.

totheConsumerPriceIndex,asAmericanworkersdo.

Andtheydon’thavethesamearrayofcompany-paid

medicalbenefitsthatsavedtheconsumerseveral31.

hundreddollarsacar.

Japan’sworkersarealsomoreproductivethan

ours.Idon’tmeanthattheyarebetter,merelythatthey

operatebyadifferentsetofrules.

Therearereallyonlytwojobclassifications

inJapan:

skilledandunskilled.Dependingonthatneeds32.

tobedownonagivenday,aworkermayperforma

varietyofjob.Ifthefloorisclean,he’llpickupa33.

broomandsweepitwithoutworryingaboutthat’spart34.

ofhisjobdefinition.Naturallythissenseof

responsibilityleadstomuchgreatefficiency.35.

答案：

26.（know）how27.（begin）with28.higherlower29.percentspercent

30.tietied31.savedcost32.thatwhat33.cleandirty

34.（about）whetherthat’s35.greatgreater