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高分作文常用连接词

高分作文常用连接词

1．表层次

First,firstly,tobeginwith,inthefirstplace,second,secondly,tostartwith,still,furthermore,third,thirdly,what’smore,lastbutnotleast,also,andthen,nextbesides,andequallyimportanttoo,moreover,besides,inaddition,finally

2．表转折

Although,though,yet,atthesametime,but,despitethefactthat,evenso,incontrastneverthelesseventhoughontheotherhandotherwiseinsteadstillregardless

3．表因果

Thereforeconsequentlybecauseof,forthisreason,thus,hence,dueto,owingto,so,accordingly,thanksto,onthisaccount,since,as,onthataccount,inthisway,for

4．表递进

Furthermore,moreover,likewise,whatismore,besides,also,notonly…butalso…

5．表举例

Forexample,forinstance,foronethingthatistoillustrate

6．表解释

Asamatteroffact,franklyspeaking,inthiscase,namely,inotherword

7．表总结

Insummary,inaword,thus,ashasbeensaid,inbrief,inconclusion,inotherwords,toconclude,finally,insimplerterms,inshort,onthewhole,toputitsimply,inall,therefore,tosummarize.

8．表强调

Ofcourse,indeed,surely,asamatteroffact,aboveall,mostimportant,inparticular,thatistosay,certainly,infact,anyway,inthiscase,naturally,obviously,nodoubt,actually,clearly

9．表比较

Incomparison,likewise,however,similarly,equally,inthesameway,unlike

10．表时间

Afterawhile,afterward,andthen,presently,atlast,simultaneously,atlength,atthattime,since,sofar,eventually,finally,subsequently,then,further,thereafter,inthefirstplace,inthepast,untilnow,meanwhilelately.

图表作文

1．图表类型

表格TABLE（每个后面都是配有原图的这个可以在WORD文档中做出这些图表来的，请注意每一个都要添置图样这样利于你的PPT教学）

柱状图BARCHART

饼状图PIECHART

坐标曲线图GRAPH

2．图表作文的写作步骤：

根据图表的要求一般可以分三段来写

第一段大体描述出图表反映的总的情况

第二段是对数据进行比较和分析，并做出归纳，找出变化的原因和结果

最后一段是写出自己的结论和建议

3．例文

Averagenumberofhoursofastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek

a.图所示为1990年1995年2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述变化

b.请说明发生这些变化的原因（可以从计算机的用途、价格、或社会发展等方面加以说明）

c.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

图略

Asthebarchartshows,theaveragenumberofastudentinacertainuniversityspentonthecomputerperweekincreaseddramaticallyduringtheyearsof1990to2000.asearlyas1990,astudentonlyspentonehouronaverageonthecomputereachweek.Thenfiveyearslater,thenumberincreasedfourtimes.Finallyintheyear2000,anaveragestudentwassittinginfrontofthecomputerscreenforasmanyastwentyhourseveryweek.

Severalfactorscontributetothesharpincreaseintheamountoftimeemployedincomputeruse.First,thecomputerhasvarietyofapplicationsnowadays.Also,withthedevelopmentofsociety,computerskillshavebecomeamustforemployment.Finally,thegraduallyloweredpriceofcomputersmakesitpossibleforthecomputertofinditswaytothecommonhome.Allthisresultsintheboomofcomputeruse.

However,thecomputermayalsocausesomeproblems.Thecomputer,inmyopinion,maybeaddictive,theeffectofwhichisnotonlyphysical,butalsomental,turningthestudentinhumanaswellasweak.Somyprincipleistousethecomputer,butdonotoverdoit.

4．图表作文常用词组和句型

a.文章开头

Accordingtothetable/chart/graph/figureswecanseethat…

Asisshownin

｝thetable/chart/graph/figuresthat…

Ascanbeseenfrom

Thetable/chart/graph/figuresshowsthat…

Itcanbeseenfrom

Wecanseefromthetable/chart/graph/figuresthat…

Itisclearfrom

Itisobviousfrom

b.数据的描述

上升：

increase,rise,goup,grow,boom,beontherise/increase

下降：

decrease,drop,fall,godown,

稳定：

remainsteady/stablefrom…to…

Thereislittle/hardlyany/nochangeinthenumberof（carssold）from…to…

/between…and…

达到最高点：

（themonthlyprofit）peakedin（December）/reachedahighpoint

降到最低点：

（thefigures）reachedthebottom/alowpoint

c.表变化速度和程度的形容词和副词

Slow,slight,gradual,steady,quick,fast,rapid,significant,vast,dramatic,sharp

Thenumberofincreaseddramatically/rosegradually/fellsharplyfromJunetoDecember.

Therewasarapid/significant/slightincrease/dropinthenumberof…from…to…

5.例文2

Studythefollowingtablecarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformation

giveninthetable.

a.statethechangesinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears;

b.givepossiblereasonsforthechanges.

c.Drawyourownconclusions

图略也是一个表格

ChangesinPeople’sDiet

Ascanbeseenfromthetable,greatchangestookplaceinpeople’sdietfrom1986to1990.thecompositionofgrain,fruitandvegetablesdecreasedyearbyyearwhilethatofsomehigh-energyfood,suchasmilkandmeat,increasedsteadily.

Whyweretherechangedinpeople’sdiet?

Thereweretwomajorreasons.First,peoplecouldaffordtobuymoreexpensivefoodwithbetternutritionbecauseoftheimprovementoftheirlivingstandards.Second,peoplepaidmoreattentiontothequalityoftheirdiet,becausetheyknewitwasofgreatbenefittheirhealthtoeatinascientificway.Therefore,theyweretryingtheirbesttoimprovethestructureoftheirfood.

Fromtheabove,wecanseethatpeople’slivingstandardimprovedgreatlyinthefiveyearsbetween1986and1990sinceourcountryhadbeenopenedtoinvestment,tradetechnicalandeconomiccooperationwithothercountriesonthebasisofequalityandmutualbenefit.Wecanalsoexpectthattheirlifeissuretobemoreprosperousintheyearstocome.

6.例文3

Directions:

studythegraphbelowandwriteacompositionofabout120wordson“FireCausesinLondonintheyear2002”.Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheinformationgiveninthegraph.

Yourcompositionshouldbein3paragraphs:

a.Thefirstparagraphintroducesthecauses

b.Thesecondparagraphreportstheinformationgiventhechart

c.Thethirdparagraphconcludesthecompositionbygivingsomesuggestions

此为一个饼状图略

FireCausesinLondonintheyear2002

FireisoneofthemostterriblekillersinLondon,asinothercitiesoftheworld.Ascanbeseenfromthechartabove,carelesssmokers,defectiveinsulationsandchildrenplayingwithmatchesarethethreemajorcausesoffiresinthatcity.

Intheyear2002,manyfireaccidentstookplaceinLondon.Smokerswerethebiggestcauseofall,whichaccountedfor50%ofthefires.Anothermajorfactorwaschildrenplayingwithmatches.Theywereresponsiblefor37.5%ofthefireincidents.Another12.5%ofthefiresresultedfromdefectiveinsulation.

Fromthechart,wecanconcludenomatterwhatthetypeoffirewas,carelessseemstobetherootcause.Therefore,smokersshouldbeadvisedtobemorecarefulwiththecigaretteends.Besides,weneedtokeepaclosereyeonourchildrenandwarnthemofthedangersofplayingwithmatches.Workersshouldalsobeinstructedtotakeagoodcareofinsulation.

提纲式作文

提纲式作文是历年四、六级考试中最常见的题型。

它要求考生根据给出的题目和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述，表达提纲的主旨。

它的优点是提纲既体现了文章的层次，又规定了各段大体的内容，为考生提供了一条思路，稍加思考、计划、整理就可成文。

但缺点它的限定性较大，不理解提放所展现的内容或词汇，就会感到难以下笔。

一、写作步骤和技巧：

1．写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、内容以及问题。

即对文章总体的把握

2．每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次（全文3-5段为佳），关键是将给定的提纲转化为主题句。

如果提纲知识对一文章的提示和概括，不是主题句，这学要根据提纲的性质写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句

3．然后围绕主题句进行扩展，运用材料支持主题句。

材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。

应当注意的是，所选材料要与文章的主题相符，能充分说明问题。

在有多个例证的段落中，还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。

二、审题和构思

MyViewonJob-hopping

a.有些人始终喜欢从事一种工作，因为……

b.有些人喜欢经常换工作，因为……

c.我的看法

显而易见，这是一道提纲式的作文题。

可以通过以下审题和构思过程完成这篇作文：

1．分析题目和提纲可知，要写出“不换工作“的原因，然后给出自己的看法，重点是原因和看法。

2．根据提纲，文章可分三段，第一段是“喜欢做一种工作的“的原因；第二段写出”喜欢经常换工作“的原因；第三段”我的“看法。

根据以上分析，可以把提纲转换为主题句如下:

★somepeopletendtosticktotheirpositionallthetime

★somepeoplearedifferent.Theyareinthehabitofjob-hopping.

★asfarasIamconcerned,Iamnotinfavorofconstantjob-hopping.

3．以材料支持各段主题句。

第一段的材料可以是：

喜欢那份工作的各种原因：

有发展前途、工资高等；第二段经常“跳槽”的原因：

不能施展自己的才能，谋求更高的收入等；第三段也要说明原因，并总结归纳，圆满结尾。

三、参考范文：

MyViewonJob-hopping

Somepeopletendtosticktotheirpositionsallthetime,astheythinkthelongeroneworksinaparticularfield,themoreskillfulonewillbeatit.Somehavebeenteachersalltheirlives.Somedevotealltheirenergytoscientificresearch.Suchpeoplelovetheirworkandturnouttobespecialistsintheirownfields.Theyareusuallyhighachievers.

Somearedifferent.Theyareinthehabitofjob-hopping,fortheyalwaysgoafterwhatisnewandstimulating.Theyneverseemcontentwiththeirpresentsituations.Theyliketomeetmorepeople,makemoremoneyandnewacquaintances,sotheyhopfromjobtojob.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamnotinfavorofconstantjob-hopping.Ibelieveinafamousproverb,“Arollingstonegathersnomoss.”Iwanttobeprofessionallystrong.AndIrespectthosewhodevotethemselvestotheiraffectionatejobsthroughouttheirlife.

四、四六级写作中常见的写作模式

1．对立观点式（92/01，92/12，95/01，96/01，98/06，99/06，2000/06）

A有人认为X是好事，为什么？

B有人认为X是坏事，为什么？

C我的看法

模式1

Somepeoplebelieve（argue,recognize,think）that观点1because…Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat观点2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.

Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,论据1.

Moreimportantly,论据2.

Mostimportantofall,论据3.

Insummary,…

OrFromabove,wecanpredictthat

模式2

PeopleholddifferentviewsaboutX.somepeopleareoftheopinionthat观点１，whileotherspointsoutthat观点２.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.

Foronething,论据1.

Foranother,论据2.

Lastbutnotleast,论据3.

Toconclude,总结观点。

OrFromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.

2．批驳式观点

A.一个错观点。

B.我不同意。

Manypeoplearguethat错误观点。

Bysayingthat,theymean对这个观点的进一步解释。

Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat正确的观点。

Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.（以下参照上文的写法）。

3．社会问题现象式（93/01）

A.一个社会问题或现象及产生的原因

B.对社会和我们的生活的影响

C.