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四级作文真题解析及范文
2013年12月英语四级作文题目一
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashorteasyonthepicturebelow.Youshouldstartyoureasywithabriefaccountoftheincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeandthenexplaintheconsequencesofoverusingit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
Peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingsticksinordertosee.
例文1
TheOverusingofCellPhones
Asthedrawingpresents（描述图画内容）,thereisamanwalkingacrossthestreetabsorbedlyfocusingonhiscellphonewithoutnoticingthesurroundings.Thissortofphenomenonisnotuncommonandrareinsomemetropolis,especiallyamongtheyoungsters.
Whatthepictureillustratesistheprevailingsituationthathaslongexistedintoday'sChina.Thatisthemobilephoneobsession.Withtheadventofinformationage,peoplearebecomingincreasinglyfascinatedontheelectronicproducts,especiallythecellphones.Notsurprisingly,youcouldeasilynoticethatmostofusareobsessedinsendingmessages,playingonlinegameswiththeirmobilephones.Itcannotbedeniedthatthisphenomenonmaynegativelyimpacttherelationshipamongpeople,andthereforetheywillbecomeestrangedandisolated.
Personally,inviewoftheoveruseofmobilephones,Iholdthatweindividualsshouldraisethenecessaryawarenessthatgoodrelationshiparereinforcedbysincereandface-to-facecommunication.
例文2
Thispictureportraysanironicsituation（描述图画内容）:
ontheroad,standsaman,whoiscompletelyconcentratingonhiscellphonewhereasusingastickfordirection,whichimpliestheunprecedentedpopularityorevenoverusingcellphonesnowadays.
Exaggeratedasthepictureis,thephenomenonbehinditisratherthought-provoking.（图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）Withthedevelopmentofhigh-techequipment,especiallysmartphones,peopleingrowingnumberstendtobecomeaddictedtotheexcessiveuseofthem.AccordingtoasurveycarriedoutinChinaDailyseveraldaysago,almost47%ofcitizensexplainthattheywouldexperiencecertainkindofanxietywithoutcellphonesathand.Meanwhile,theoverusingcellphones,firstlywouldexertdetrimentalimpactonthehealthofus.What'sworse,itwouldperformanegativecharacterininterpersonalrelationshipsincewehavelesstimetocommunicate.
statistics
Judgingfromtheevidenceabove,certainmeasuresshouldbetaken.Firstly,certaininstitutionsinChinashouldlaunchrelevantcampaignstolimittheexcessiveuseofcellphones.Moreover,we,ascollegestudents,shouldputemphasisonitrightfromourselvesasastart.
例文3
Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethat（描述图画内容）therearemanypeoplecrossingthestreet.Insteadoflookingattheway,theyarestaringattheircellphonesandusingwalkingstickstosee.Itisobviousthattheyarefascinatedwithcellphoneswhileevenignoretheirsecurity.
Welearnfromthecartoonthatcellphoneshavebeenincreasinglywidespreadinpeople'slife.（图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）Cellphonesareofgreatbenefittoallofus. Oneofthemostobviousadvantagesisthatwecancontactwithourfriendsandrelativesmoreconvenientlythaneverbefore.However,itismobile-phones'advantagesthatleadsomepeopletooveruseorbeaddictedtothem,whichtendstoexertanegativeimpactonourlife.Forexample,oversusingcellphoneswillreduceface-to-facecommunicationamongpeople.Itseemsthatmostofusenjoytheconvenienceofcontactattheexpenseofinterpersonalrelationships.Moreover，entertainingelectronicgames,magnanimousinformationandabewilderingvarietyofsocialnetworkingtoolsinmobilephoneshaveoccupiedmuchofourtime.Informationdistributiontoolsandsocialnetworkingtools,inparticular,haveattractedallofourattention,whichtemptsustokeepoureyesonthescreenaroundthecornerofeverysecond.Then,donotexpectustotalkwiththepeoplearoundus,wedon'thavetime!
This,hasresultedinaphenomenonof"alienationbetweenacquaintancesandfamiliaritybetweenstrangers".
Scienceandtechnologyandmoderntoolsshouldbeservedasan"angel"toimproveourlivingstrandard,ratherthanadeviltodisturbournormallifeandcommunication.Justimagine,liveonedaywithoutmobilephone,willyouberelaxed?
Oranxious?
（279words）
参考译文：
如图所示，我们可以看到有很多的人正在过马路，他们没有仔细看路，却都盯着自己的手机并且用一根拐杖代替他们看路。
很明显，他们都着迷于手机，甚至忽视了自身安全。
我们从图画得知手机已经在人们的生活中越来越普遍。
手机对于我们有巨大的好处，最明显的好处之一，就是我们可以比以前更加便利地联系朋友和亲人。
然而，正是手机的诸多好处导致一些人过度使用或者是沉迷于手机，而这往往会给我们的生活造成一些负面的影响。
比如，过度使用手机将会减少人与人之间的面对面的沟通。
似乎我们大多数人都是以牺牲人际关系来享用联系的便利性。
再者，手机上得娱乐性的电子游戏，海量的信息和各种各样的社交网络个您根据也已经占据了我们很多的时间。
尤其是信息传播工具和社交网络工具已经占据了我们所有的注意力，这使我们每分每秒地将目光锁定在屏幕上。
那么，就别指望我们很周围的人聊天了，我们没有那个时间！
这也导致了一个现象：
"熟悉人的陌生化，陌生人的熟悉化"！
科技和现代工具应该是提高我们生活质量的"天使",而不应该是影响我们正常生活和沟通的"魔鬼"。
设想一下，如果过一天没有手机的生活，你会放松？
还是会焦虑?
2013年12月英语四级作文题目二
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.YoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountoftheimpactoftheInternetonthewaypeoplecommunicateandthenexplainwhetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
破题解析：
本次四级作文形式仍为漫画题，探讨因特网等现代信息技术对人们交流模式的影响。
话题贴近日常生活，难度中等。
题目要求简述网络的影响，并解释“电子通讯能否替代面对面的交流”，考生需要明确给出正面或反面的观点。
如选择“可以替代”，可考虑从信息技术先进程度、交流方式多样化（文字、语音、视频）等方面举例论述。
如选择“不可替代”，则可强调信息技术无法实现的方面，如面对面情感交流、文字信息内容传达的不完整性，或是网络技术的不稳定、不可靠等方面。
例文1
Fromthecartoongivenabove,wecanobservethattherearetwopeopleinfrontofacomputer.Withhiswifestandingbehind,themaniswritinganE-mailtotheirsonwhichstates,"DearAndy-Howareyou?
YourmotherandIarefine.Webothmissyouandhopeyouaredoingwell.Welookforwardtoseeingyouagainthenexttimeyourcomputercrashesandyoucomedownstairsforsomethingtoeat.Love,MomandDad."WelearnfromthecartoonthattheInternethasexertedagreatimpactonthewayofpeople'scommunication.（图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵，想表达什么用意）
Peopleusedtocommunicatefacetoface,makecallsorwriteletters.Whileinmodernsociety,peoplearemorepronetocommunicatevia,asthecartoondepicts,InternettoolslikeE-mails,QQormicroblogs.Peopleholdthatthesewaysofcommunicationaremoreconvenientandareabletosavethemanenormousamountoftime.Herecomesaquestion,“whetherelectroniccommunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact?
”Definitelynot.Whenenjoyingtheconvenienceofofelectroniccommunication,peoplehavebegantorealizethatittendstoweakentheaffectionbetweenpeople,reduceworkingefficiencyorevenbringaboutsomemisunderstandingsorfrictions.Moreover,communicatingthroughelectronictoolswillbelikelytomakepeoplesolitaryorevensufferfromcertainmentaldisorders.
Whatthecartoondepictedcanbetragic:
thefamilycouldhavecommunicatedfacetofacehappilywithoutE-mail.Butnow, afamilylivingtogetherseemstobeathousand-mileapart.Perhaps,weshouldtakeamomenttothink,"DoesanyonetherewanttofallvictimofconvenienceoftheInternetandelectroniccommunicationtools?
" （275words）
Gotoextremes/moderate/sensible/reasonable/positive/optimistic/takemeasures/proper/appropriate/
Actionsshouldbetakentodo…
参考译文：
通过这幅所给的题目，我们观察到有两个人在电脑前。
男子的妻子站在后面，而男子则正他们的儿子写邮件，并说到：
"亲爱的安迪，你好！
你妈妈和我一切都好，并且很想你，也希望你一切都好。
我们期待下次在你电脑崩溃或者是下楼取东西吃的时候再次见到你。
爱你的妈妈，爸爸。
"
我们从这幅图画得知互联网对人们的沟通方式带来了巨大的影响。
人们过去习惯于面对面的沟通、电话沟通或者是书信沟通。
而现代社会，人们更倾向于像图画所画的那样，用诸如邮件、QQ或者是微博这样的互联网工具进行沟通。
人们认为这样的沟通方式更加方便，节省时间。
现在，就由这样一个问题了：
"电子交流是否会取代面对面的沟通呢？
"答案是否定的！
人们在享受电子沟通带来的便利性的同时，也已经开始意识到了这会削弱人与人之间的情感，降低工作效率有时候甚至会带来一些误会和摩擦。
再者，电子沟通也会使人变得孤僻甚至是产生更加严重的心理疾病。
图画中所描绘的场景，是可悲的:
如果没有互联网，此刻他们可能其乐融融的在一起聊天呢。
然而现在，同处一室的家人，正式因为互联网的便利性，却变得相距千里。
或许我们应该花点时间想一个问题：
"有人想成为互联网和电子沟通工具的便利性的牺牲品吗？
"
例文2没有描述图画内容，因此不符合图画作文的要求，
Themoderntechnologyhasgreatlyalteredthemodeofcommunicationamongpeople.WiththehelpoftheInternet,peoplecaneasilycontacteachotheranytimeanywhere.However,thesideeffectisthatmanypeoplehavebecomeover-dependentontheInternetandneglectedface-to-facecommunication.
AsfarasI'mconcerned,electroniccommunicationcannotfullyreplacethedirectcontactamongpeople.Althoughitseemstobringeveryonetogether,itactuallyestrangespeopleanddecreasestheeffectivenessofcommunication.Atypicalexampleisthat,traditionally,peopleworkinginthesameofficesimplywalktoothersandtalk.Today,however,co-workerstendtosende-mailsorinstantmessagesthroughtheInternetevenwhentheyaresittingnexttoeachother.Aswordscanneverconveythefullmessage,itusuallytakesmuchmoretimeandroundsofconversationthanface-to-facecommunication,inwhichpeoplecandiscussmoredirectlywithlesslossofinformation.
Toconclude,theInternetenablesmoreeffectivecommunicationinsomesituations,butover-dependenceonitactuallypullspeopleapart.
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