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大学英语作文竞赛获奖作文集
2010年英语作文竞赛
获奖作文汇编
2010EnglishCompositionCompetitionforCollegeStudentsSponsoredbytheCollegeofInternationalCulturalExchanges
上海电力学院国际交流学院
2010年6月
2010年国际交流学院作文写作竞赛
国际交流学院行政及教务领导在加强学校内涵建设中，始终把提高学生的教育质量放在首位，努力抓好学生素质的提高，在2009-2010学年第二学期中开展一次大学生英语作文竞赛，并组织外语系国交教研室的老师进行了认真、细致、公正地评阅。
为了促进和提高广大学生的英语写作能力和水平，现在把在本次竟赛中获奖同学的作文整理如下，供大家阅读参考。
一、作文比赛评审结果
国际交流学院2009-2010学年第二学期英语作文竞赛获奖名单
序号
班级
姓名
学号
获奖结果
1
200902W2
张璐
20093551
一等奖
2
200902W2
管灏磬
20093570
3
200902W2
周梦瑶
20093561
4
200902W2
李瑞琪
20093552
5
200705W2
周夏晖
20073517
6
200702W1
戴辰
20073404
7
200902W2
杨凯旋
20093554
二等奖
8
200902W2
王汉洮
20093543
9
200902W2
蔡文弢
20093571
10
200905W1
胥倩
20093595
11
200802W2
王洋
20083517
12
200705W2
钱进
20073525
13
200802W1
曹碧野
20083507
14
200715W2
王冬
20073574
15
200715W1
沈郁蔚
20073553
16
200815W1
刘智劲
20083597
17
200815W1
吴岳
20083602
18
200815W1
潘洁
20083623
三等奖
19
200905W1
徐雯雯
20093598
20
200905W1
周杰
20093589
21
200805W1
陈茂松
20083571
22
200802W1
胡晓梅
20083501
23
200805W1
严珅玫
20083562
24
200805W1
张陶
20083565
25
200802W2
李韵秋
20083533
26
200802W2
魏玉庭
20083552
27
200802W2
叶翊翔
20083520
28
200802W2
张岩
20083530
29
200705W2
赵安娜
20073519
二、作文写作竞赛参赛试题
1、注意事项：
本次参赛对象只限于国际交流学院所属各班学生。
每位参赛者可以从以下试题中任选一题，每篇参赛作文的字数不得少于250字，必须书写在空白的A4纸上，文字必须清晰可辨。
内容必须紧扣规定的每篇作文试题要求，否则作离题作文处理。
评委将根据参赛者作文的内容、语法、用词、连贯、流畅、切题等进行评判，最后评出29位获奖学生由国际交流学院发给奖状。
2、参赛试题
Topic1：
人们为什么要上大学？
Topic2：
大学生必须去上课吗？
Topic3：
你认为一个人要想取得成功最重要的品质是什么？
Topic4：
你是否为自己的空闲时间进行计划过？
Topic5：
你是否同意成功的标志就是赚到很多的钱？
Topic6：
地球上很多资源都慢慢消失，你从中选一个认为保护它的必要性
Topic7：
如果你有2周的出国时间，你最想去哪个国家？
Topic8：
如何看待名人收入高的问题
Topic9：
在今天阅读能力和写作能力哪个更重要？
Topic10：
学生出国留学的目的和意义？
Topic11：
你和你父母一代有什么不同吗？
Topic12：
你喜欢单独学习还是一起学习？
三、作文竞赛获奖作文选登
1、Topic：
你认为一个人要想取得成功最重要的品质是什么？
Directions：
Inyouropinion,whatisthemostimportantcharacteristic（forexample,honesty,intelligence,asenseofhumor）thatapersoncanhavetobesuccessfulinlife?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplesfromyourexperiencetoexplainyouranswer.Whenyouwriteyouranswer,youarenot limitedtotheexampleslistedintheprompt.
［参考提纲］
诚实最重要
（1）诚实能够获得老板的信任，可以获得升迁的机会；
（2）诚实能够获得同事的信任，这样才可以更好的进行工作；
（3）诚实可以获得客户的信任。
这样可以更好的发展事业。
[获奖范文1]
你认为一个人要想取得成功最重要的品质是什么？
200715W1王冬
Inmyopinion,honestyisthemostimportantcharacteristicthatapersoncanhavetobesuccessfulinlife.
Firstofall,whenyouhavehonesty,thenmanypeoplearewillingtocommunicatewithyou.Asweallknow,therelationshipwithotherpeopleamongyoudecidesyoursuccess.Becauseofyourhonesty,yourbosstrustsyouverymuch.Thenyoucanbepromoted.Honestycanhelpyougetthetrustofyourworkmates,andinthatcircumstance.Youcandoyourworksmoothly.
Noonewouldliketomakefriendwithaliar.
Asforabusinessman,youmustbehonesttoyourpartnerandyourcommerce,onlyinthatway,theywillbeinterestedininvestmentwithyou,inordertodevelopyourcareerandmakeitbetterandbetter.Youmustbehonest.
Notonlytoday,ourancestorbegantoprovetheimportanceofhonestylongtimeago,suchasabasiccharacteristicofahuman.Therearesomanyfamouspeopleintheworldwhoareverysuccessfulintheircareerandtheirfamilyrelationshipandtheirfriendshiphavethecharacteristicofhonesty.
So,myfriends,ifyouwanttohaveanexcellentlife,pleasebeahonestperson!
Trustme,thatisnotaexaggeration
[获奖范文2]
KeepWellAlltheTime
200715W1沈郁蔚
Ilikethesentence‘Lifeisajourneyinsteadofcompetition’verymuch.Whatweneedtodoistoenjoythebeautyoruglyscenealongthewholeday.Todayyouwillneverrepeatinyourhistoryorthewholehumanbeinghistory.Whynotenjoyyourtoday?
Itisimpossibletomakesureallthingsalongjourneyarebeautiful,but,ifwecanchangeamoodtoviewit,itwillbemuchdifferent.AslongasIhavedonemybesttodowhatIcan,whyshouldIcomplainmyselfanddepressmyself?
Othersmaypraiseyouorfindfaultwithyou.Doesallthisinterfereyoumuch?
Nooneisperfect.Thereisnoneedtocompareyouwithothers.Whensomeoneisbetterthanyouinthisaspect,youmustbebetterthanheorsheinsomeotheraspect.Thatistosay,weshouldbelieveinourselvesandenjoyourselves.Nothingisimportantexceptgoodmoodinourheart.Todayisnotsogoodforsomereasons,butsunwillriseuptomorrowmorningasusual.Whynottowelcomethebeautifulsunshinewithbeautifulmood?
Wheneverencounteradifficulty,pleasedon’tforgettotellyourselfthateverythingwillpassawayourbadsituation.Thefreshairisneverlatetomeetyouinthenextmorningexceptyougettinguptoolate.
Keepwell,girlsandboys.Throwallbadmoodsandthoughtsaway.Lifeisbeautifuljustbecauseitisfullofdifficultiesandchallenges.Therefore,noneedtotaketooseriouslywithyourcurrentdifficulty.Comeon,youaretheuniqueandbestoneinthewholeworld.
[获奖范文3]
你认为一个人要想取得成功最重要的品质是什么？
0805W1陈茂松
Troughreadingplentyofstoriesofmanysuccessfulpeopleallovertheworld,Irealizedthat,besidesopportunities,theyalmosthaveonesimilarquality——persistence.
Onone’swaytothesuccess,moreorless,therewillbevariouskindsofdifficultiesandtroublewhicharethemosthorribleenemiestoyourgoalsandambitions.Whenpeoplemeetwithhugechallenge,theywillbesituatedindifferentdirections,oneofwhichisbackingoffandtheotherisovercoming.Whiletothepeoplewhoselectedtogetoverandfightwiththeenemies,theywillbesurroundedbyalotofpressandstruggles,andmeanwhileitwillnurtureonequality——persistence,anditwillalsohelpyouinthefutureinmanyaspects,notonlyinworkbutalsointhewholelifeifyoucatchandpossessthiskindofquality.
ASisknowntoeveryone,luckisaveryimportantfactorinone’slife,andsomepeoplewillholdanoppositeopinion——youwillnevergetsuccesswithoutluck,alsoyouarepersistent.Butfrommyperspective,withnoluck,youalwaysinsistdoingyourworkandpursingyourgoals,youwillbesuccessfulinanyareas.
2、Topic：
你是否为自己的空闲时间进行计划过？
Directions：
Somepeopleprefertoplanactivitiesfortheirfreetimeverycarefully.Otherschoosenottomakeanyplansatallfortheirfreetime.Comparethebenefitsofplanningfree-timeactivities withthebenefitsofnotmakingplans.Whichdoyouprefer-planningornotplanningforyourleisure time?
Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainyourchoice.
［参考提纲］
为自己的空闲时间进行计划
（1）更好的利用时间。
去哪里玩等等
（2）节省金钱。
有些时候一些地方很便宜，有些时候特别贵
（3）和朋友玩的更愉快，开心。
因为大家有计划。
[获奖范文1]
HaveYouPlanedforLeisureTime?
200802W2李韵秋
Todaythehighspeedpaceoflifestylebecomesthehotspot.Soitisthetimetotalkabouthowtospendourleisuretime.Peopleinevergrowingnumbercherishtheirbeliefitisnecessarytomakeaplantospendourleisuretime.Theythinktimeislimited,weshouldn’tletitpasseasily.Othersnot,intheireyes,leisuretimeissupposedtorelax.Makingaplantospendinaleisuretime,issoundsridiculous.
Inmyeyes,weshouldmakeaplanforourleisuretime.Apparently,planningmakeseverythingeasier,asfarasleisuretime,whichisnotexception.Sparetime,ofcourse,wecanrelaxourselvesandadjustourselvestodoourworkbetter.Butitisalsoimportanttothinkthathowtouseoursparetimeinagoodway.Hereismyopinion.Firstly,wecanchoosesomelightmusic.Inarelaxsurroundings,wecanbecomeclam,anystressofworkseemstobedisappeared.Secondly,makeanap.Justalittlesleepcanrelaxoureyes,anditcangetridofthesenseoftired.Moreover,itisagoodwaytoadjustourselvestoagoodwordcondition.Lastbutnottheleast,wecanalsoplayalittlewhilecomputergames.Somebodymaythinkitisnotfairtoarrangeplayingcomputergamesinourschedule.ButIdon’tthinkso.Playinggamesisfunnyandexciting.Butwhatweshouldlearnistocontrolourselvesnottoloseourselvesinplayinggames.SowhatIthinkisthatcomputercanalsohelpfultoself-control.
Inoneword,leisuretimeislimitedtous.Makeaplantospendourleisuretimeisalsoimportant.Therearemanywaystoplanit.Afterallwhatwecareaboutisdowereallyrelaxourselvesinourleisuretime?
[获奖范文2]
PlanningForYourself
200805w1张陶
SinceIgraduatedfromjuniorschool,Irealizedhowluckywearethatwehavesomanyholidaysandsparetime.Wedon’tneedtoworryaboutthefinancialproblemsofthefamily,wedon’tneedtostayathomealldaylong,studying.Whatweneedtodoistoplanforourselvesasparentsarealwaysbusywiththeirbusiness.I’mtheonewholikemakingplans.Ienjoyitverymuchandhavegainedalotfromit.
Travelingismyfavoriteactivityinmyleisuretime.Howevertheonlywaytohaveawonderfultripistomakeaproperplanforit.
IwenttoYangzhouwithmyclassmaterecently.Wedidn’tjoinatravelagencybutplaneverythingforourselves.Ibookedtheroomfirstandmadealistoftheplaceswhichareworthgoing.Sincetimewaslimited,wemadeaplanindetail,consideringalmosteverythingwedoinalmosteveryminute.Duringthetime,Ilearnedalotaboutthecity,aboutwhatitisfamousforandsoon.Whenwefinallygotthere,weweresoexcitedtoseewhatwehadlearnedfromtheinternetturnedoutintoreal.Andinsuchastrangecityweneverfeltlost.Weknowalmostalltheimportantroadsandknowhowtogetthedestination.Ofcourse,wemadeitawonderfultrip.Planningmakesthingsperfect.
Exceptthistravelexperience,I’dliketohavemanyotheractivitiestomakemyleisuretimerichandfull.ThemostimportantisnotwhattheactivityisbutwhatI’vegainedfromit.During
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