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届高考读后续写练习5篇高二
2019届高考读后续写练习5篇(高二)
读后续写
一、考纲解读
提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
二、原题分析
①原文材料350词以内,所续写文章150词左右。
②原文多是情节丰富的记叙文,偶有少量的议论文。
③原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语,所续写短文应使用5个以上。
④续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已经给出。
⑤续写部分分为两大类别:
1)半开放性质。
必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。
2)完全开放性质。
可以依据文章的思路,自己发挥。
三、注意事项
①词数要求。
②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。
③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。
④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。
⑤上下文的连贯性。
四、评分原则
①本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
②评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
③词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。
④评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:
(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;
(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;
(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
⑥如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。
续写导练
(一)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
WhenIwaselevenyearsold,Ihadabigaccident.IgetscaredevennowwhenIthinkaboutthattime.Iwentskatingnearmyhouse.Thereweremanypeople,andIsawsomeofthemfallingontheice.
Itwasmyfirsttimetogoiceskating,soIwasnervous.Iwaswonderinghowtoskate.
Iwentwithafriendwhowasveryskillful.Hespentsometimeteachingmehowtoskate,butIdidn’tlearnmuch.Heleftmeandskatedallaround.Assoonasheleft,Ifelldown.Ienviedtheotherpeoplebecausetheycouldskatewell.
IwasboredbecauseIkeptfallingsoItookoffmyskatesandjustwalkedaroundontheiceinmyshoes.Itwascoldandmyhandswerefrozen.
Suddenly,Isteppedonsomethingthatwasnothard.WhatwasitItwasaweakplaceintheice.WhenIsteppedthere,Isankundertheice.IthoughtthatIwasgoingtodie,butIdidmybesttograbsomethingtogetoutfromundertheice.Itriedtograbtheedgeoftheice,butitwasverydifficultforaneleven-year-old.
Itseemedlikeaverylongtime,likeayear.Then,fortunately,someonehelpedme.Hegrabbedmyarmsandpulledmeup.So,IlivedandI’mstillalivetoday.
Ithankedhim.Atthattime,myfriendcameback.Iwasannoyedathimbecausehewassupposedtotakecareofme,buthedidn’t.Hewasembarrassed.WhenItookataxihome,thetaxidriverwassurprisedandaskedwhathadhappened.Ididn’twanttosayanythingbecauseIwastiredandscared.Evennow,wheneverIthinkaboutthattime,Ifeeluncomfortable.Idon’twanttogoskatingagainevennow.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
ItwaslongbeforeIwentskatingonceagain,________________________________________________
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Paragraph2:
However,eversincethenIhaven’tfoundanytimetogoskating,___________________________________
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续写导练
(二)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
MrBrownlivedinahouselessthantwomilesawayfromhisoffice.Hewasthereforeabletodrivehomeeverydayforlunch.Everytimehedroveinthemiddleoftheday,hefoundcarswereparkedintheroadoutsidehishouse,andtherewasnoroomforhisowncar.Hehadtodrivetwoblocksfartherbeforehecouldfindaplacetopark.Thenhehadtowalkhome.Thismadehimveryangry.
Hehadputupaboardwhichread“NoParking!
”inthegardenfacingtheroad,butnobodyseemedtopayattentiontoit.Peopleonlyobeyedapolicenotice,butnotaprivateone.Therewerenoparkedcarswheretherewasablueboardwithwhitelettersonit:
PoliceNotice—NoParking!
MrsBrownsuggestedthatheshouldstealapolicenotice.Buthedarednot,beingafraidofgoingtoprison.Shethensuggestedthathemakeonejustlikeapolicenotice.Hesaidhewasnotapolicemanandcouldn’tusetheword“police”.Hedecidedthathemustfindawayoutandstartedthinkinghard.Forseveraldays,thesmellofpaintfilledthehouse.Onenightheshowedhislifeanewnoticeboard.Itwaspaintedinwhitelettersonablueboard:
PoliteNotice—NoParking!
“Oh,”MrsBrownsaid,“butyoutoldmeyouweren’tgoingtousetheword‘police’.That’sexactlylikeapolicenotice.”
“Isit?
”heasked.“Lookagain.”
Shebegantolaugh,“Youarereallyratherclever.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
WhydidMrsBrownsayherhusbandwasreallyratherclever___________________________________
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Paragraph2:
IfthepolicediscoveredthattheBrownswereusingapolicenotice,_______________________________
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续写导练(三)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mymotherusedtoaskmewhatthemostimportantpartofthebodyis.ThroughtheyearsIwouldtakeaguessatwhatIthoughtwasthecorrectanswer.WhenIwasyounger,Ithoughtsoundwasveryimportanttousashumans,soIsaid,“Myears,Mommy.”
Shesaid,“No.Manypeoplearedeaf.Buttheyaredoingwellintheirlife.YoukeepthinkingaboutitandIwillaskyouagainsoon.”
Severalyearspassedbeforesheaskedmeagain.Sincemakingmyfirstattempt,Ihadcontemplated(深思)thecorrectanswer.SothistimeItoldher,“Mommy,sightisveryimportanttoeverybody,soitmustbeoureyes.”
Shelookedatmeandtoldme,“Youarelearningfast,buttheanswerisnotcorrectbecausetherearemanypeoplewhoareblind.”
Overtheyearsmymotheraskedmeacouplemoretimesandalwaysheranswerwas:
“No,butyouaregettingsmartereveryyear,mychild.”
Thenlastyear,mygrandpadied.Everybodywashurt.Everybodywascrying.MyMomlookedatmewhenitwasourturntosayourfinalgoodbyetograndpa.Sheaskedme,“Doyouknowthemostimportantbodypartyet,mydear”
Iwassurprisedwhensheaskedmethisonthisoccasion.Ialwaysthoughtthiswasagamebetweenherandme.Shesawtheconfusiononmyfaceandtoldme,“Thisquestionisveryimportant.Howyouansweritshowswhetheryouhavelearnedaboutlife.Foreverybodypartyougavemeinthepast,IhavetoldyouwerewrongandIhavegivenyouareasonwhy.Buttodayisthedayyouwillknowtheanswer.”
Ilookpuzzled.
“Allyourpreviousanswers-ears,eyes,hands,heart...Theyareallveryimportanttoyourself.ButthistimeIneedyoutothinkofsomethingthatisimportanttoothers.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
“Mydear,themostimportantbodypart,”shesaid,_____________________________________________
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Paragraph2:
“Mom,Iunderstand.Andyoucancryonmyshouldertoo.”______________________________________
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