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大学英语四级写作

大学英语四级写作续智贤

四级考试题型比例

听力（35%）阅读（35%）、完型填空或改错（10%）、作文和翻译（20%）。

四级考试各题型分值

听力249分，阅读249分，完型填空或改错70分，作文142分。

2008年6月四级范文

Recreationalactivities

1娱乐活动多种多样

2娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性

3作为大学生，我的看法。

Recreationalactivitiesneverfailtofascinatehumanbeings,wealwaysconsiderrecreationalactivitiesassomethingtorelaxourselvesorsomethingthatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.

Mostofus,however,haveformedadifferentpictureofrecreationalactivities.Somepeoplethinkthattheyareusefulandcanofferussomethingofvalueorkeepusfit.Youwillneverfeelbored.Yourlifewillalwaysbecolorful.

Theothersideofthepictureisquitetheopposite.Othersholdtheopinionthatrecreationalactivitiestakeuplimitedpreciousstudents’timewhichcanotherwisebeusedforstudy.Therefore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceandself-humiliation.

Perhapsthereisanelementoftruthinboththesepictures.Afterathoroughconsideration,formypart,Iaminfavoroftheformerview.Oneofthethingsthatfascinatesmemostaboutrecreationalactivitiesisthepopularbeliefthatthey,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom!

LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags

1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用

2.造成的问题

3.限制使用的意义

TherewasatimewhendisposableplasticbagswerewidelyusedinChina.Whereveryouwantedtobuysomething,thiskindofbagswereofferedforfreeforthesakeofyourconvenience.Andrecentlytheproblemsofusingdisposableplasticbagshavebeenbroughtintopublicfocus.

Forastart,ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlypollutedbyso-called“whitepollution”,thetruthisbeyondquestion.Andthereasonisnotfartoseek,thesebagsarethrownawayafterthefirstuse,andweoftenseethebagsflyingintheskyinwindydays.

What’smore,plasticbagsmaydogreatharmtoourhealth,formostofthemaremadeofsomecertainchemicalmaterialsthatmaycauseseriousdisease.Andsuchcasesoftenappearinnewsbroadcastorinnewspapers.

Inthelightoftheseriousness,somepropermeasureshavebeentakeninourcountry.Astrictlimitontheusingofdisposableplasticbagshasbeentakenofficially,notonlyinbigsupermarketsbutinsmallshopsaswell.

Admittedly,thislimithasmadeitpossibleforthepublictorealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionandenableweChinesepeopletocherishthebeautyofourcommunities.Meanwhile,tosomedegree,thechancesthatwewillbeknockeddownbysomecertainillnessesareremote.

⏹结构合理三段式;中心突出主题句；层次清晰导航语；词汇闪光亮点句。

写作常用角度

⏹生活角度

⏹wealwaysconsiderrecreationalactivitiesassomethingtorelaxourselvesorsomethingthatcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.

排列组合

⏹Sthwillmakeourlifemoreenjoyable,thatistosay,sthcanaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.

生活的乐趣

⏹Forthemajorityofpeople,readingorlearninganewskillhasbecomethesourceoftheirhappinessandcontentment

⏹对大多数人来讲，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们快乐的来源

⏹Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeandhavemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpactondevelopmentoftheirpersonalcharacter.

⏹而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。

时间角度

⏹Collecting,byoccupyingsparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom.

⏹Itprovidesrelaxationforleisurehours,asjustlookingatone'streasuresisalwaysajoy.

⏹Aproperpart-timejobdoesnotoccupystudents’toomuchtime.Infact,itisunhealthyforthemtospendalloftimeontheirstudy.Asanoldsayinggoes:

AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.

⏹What‘smore,livinginschoolcansavethemagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandschooleveryday,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.　　

⏹而且，生活在学校里能节省大量每天往返于学校和家的路上的时间，这会使他们有更多的时间和精力放在学习上。

⏹Furthermore,studentslivingintheirownhomewouldhaveaccesstoacomfortablelifeandhavemoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeirparents,whichhavebeneficialimpactondevelopmentoftheirpersonalcharacter.

⏹而且，学生生活在自己家中，有舒适的生活，并有更多机会和父母交流，这对他们个性的培养是有利的。

知识角度

Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.

⏹Forpeoplewhowanttoadoptahealthyandmeaningfullifestyle,itisimportanttofindtimetolearncertainnewknowledge.Justasanoldsayinggoes:

itisnevertoolatetolearn.

⏹　　对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：

活到老，学到老

⏹Themajorityofstudentsbelievethatpart-timejobwillprovidethemwithmoreopportunitiestodeveloptheirinterpersonalskills,whichmayputtheminafavorablepositioninthefuturejobmarkets.

⏹大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

⏹Manyparentsbelievethatadditionaleducationalactivitiesenjoyobviousadvantage.Byextrastudies,theymaintain,theirchildrenareabletoobtainmanykindsofpracticalskillsandusefulknowledge,whichwillputtheminabeneficialpositioninthefuturejobmarketswhentheygrowup.

⏹　　许多家长相信额外的教育活动有许多优点，通过学习，他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识，当他们长大后，这些对他们就业是大有好处的。

E角度

⏹Bytakingamajor-relatedpart-job,studentscannotonlyimprovetheiracademicstudies,butgainmuchexperience,experiencetheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbooks.

⏹　　通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到

⏹Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatlearningnewskillsandknowledgecontributesdirectlytoenhancingtheirjobopportunitiesorpromotionopportunities.

⏹现在越来越多的人开始相信学习新的技术和知识能直接帮助他们获得工作就会或提升的机会。

健康角度

⏹Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatsomecertainsportscontributedirectlytoourbodyhealthbygivingussomephysicalexercises.

主题句的写法

⏹Manypeoplebelievethatinternationaltourismproducepositiveeffectsoneconomicgrowthandlocalgovernmentshouldbeencouragedtopromoteinternationaltourism.

⏹许多人认为国际旅游对经济发展有积极作用，应鼓励地方政府发展国际旅游。

主题句一

⏹Sthisveryimportant.

⏹Sthisofgreatimportance.

⏹Sthplaysanimportantroleinpeople’slife/study

主题句二

⏹Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson…inmorethanoneway.

⏹Sthmaybringaboutnegativeimpactson…

万能理由之坏处

TVtakesuplimitedpreciouschildren’stimewhichcanotherwisebeusedformorevaluableactivitiessuchassportsorhomework.Therefore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceandself-humiliation.

⏹如今，很多年轻人沉浸在电脑游戏中，以至于废寝忘食，产生了许多消极结果。

⏹Manyyoungsterstodayaresopreoccupiedwithcomputergamesastoforsakefoodandsleep,resultinginahostofadverseconsequences.

坏处之---压力

⏹…Underconsiderablepressurefrom…therefore…willonlyaddtotheirburden.

坏处之---钱，精力

⏹…callsformoneyandenergy,bothofwhicharenotaffordableforus.

坏处之---环境污染

⏹Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.

⏹污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。

⏹Someofthe…arepoisonousanddangeroustohealth.

坏处之---犯罪

⏹…arelikelytocommitacrime

个性，技能，孤僻，心理

⏹Moreover,childrenwillhavelesstimetoplayandcommunicatewiththeirpeersduetoextrastudies,consequently,itisdifficulttodevelopandcultivatetheircharacterandinterpersonalskills.Theymaybecomemoresolitaryandevensufferfromcertainmentalillness.

⏹而且，由于要额外地学习，孩子们没有多少时间和同龄的孩子玩耍和交流，很难培养他们的个性和交际能力。

他们可能变得孤僻甚至产生某些心理疾病。

万能理由之重要性

Punctualityisanecessaryhabitinallpublicaffairsincivilizedsociety.Withoutit,nothingcouldeverbebroughttoaconclusion;everythingwouldbeinastateofchaos.（抽象）

⏹Keepingmentalhealthisanimportantconditioninallpublicaffairsincivilizedsociety,especiallytouniversitystudents.Withoutitnothingcouldbebroughttoaconclusion,everythingwouldbeinastateofchaos.

⏹Andrecentlytheissueofdisorderinbrainshasbeenarousedwideconcernoncampus.

具体

⏹Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatcomputerandothermachineshavebecomeanindispensablepartofoursociety,whichmakeourlifeandworkmorecomfortableandlesslaborious.

⏹人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为我们社会必不可少的一部分。

它们使我们的生活更舒适，减少了大量劳动。

机会

⏹Assheisnotrich,thechancesthatshewilleverbeabletoaffordsuchpurchasesareremote.

2008年12月四级

⏹Thechancesthatwewillbeknockeddownbysomecertainillnessesareremote.

2008年12月六级

⏹Therefore,thechancesthatIwillsufferfrommentaldiseaseareremote.

万能理由之喜欢

⏹Catsneverfailtofascinatehumanbeings.

⏹Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.

⏹最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

⏹Aninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.

⏹一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

万能理由之影响

⏹Antiqueshopsexertagreatfascinationonagreatmanypeople.

2008-6四级写作

⏹Recreationalactivitiesexertagreatfascinationonagreatmanypeople.

⏹

2007-12六级写作

⏹Digitalproductshaveexertedaprofoundinfluenceonusinmorethanoneway.

2008-6六级写作

⏹Additionally,e-productsexertasubtleinfluenceontheteenagers,becauseofthis，theyoftenprefertochoosemoderne-booksthantraditionalbooks

万能理由之表示结论

⏹Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove，wecancometotheconclusionthat...

⏹Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat

⏹Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,Iamfullyconvincedthat

⏹从上述讨论中，我们可以自然地得出这样的结论_______

⏹Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat_________.

单一内容，论述好坏

⏹Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatadvantagesofbicyclefaroutweighitsdisadvantagesanditwillstillplayessentialrolesinmodernsociety.

⏹通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：

自行车的优点远大于缺点，并且在现代社会它仍将发挥重要作用。

单一内容，趋利避害

⏹Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.W