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英语满分作文句法分析表1

Whenacountrydevelopsitstechnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?

SentenceNo.

句首

句中

句末

1.Overall,Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressed.

Overall,副词

expressed分词，后置定语

2.Iwouldliketobeginbypointingoutthat“traditionalskillsandwaysoflife”arenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity.

bypointingoutthat…

介词短语

宾语从句“traditionalskillsandwaysoflife”arenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity（注意beof结构）

3.Inmanyways,thehistoryofcivilizationisthehistoryoftechnology:

fromthediscoveryoffiretotheinventionofthewheeltothedevelopmentoftheInternet,wehavebeenmovingonfrompreviouswaysofdoingthings.

Inmanyways,

介词短语

介词短语fromAtoBtoC

fromthediscoveryoffiretotheinventionofthewheeltothedevelopmentoftheInternet,

含有介词的名词短语：

waysofdoingthings

4.Sometechnologies,suchasweaponsofmassdestruction,areofnegativeimpact.

插入语

suchasweaponsofmassdestruction,

beof结构

areofnegativeimpact

5.Others,suchasmedicaladvances,positivelyhelppeopletolivebetterorlonger,andsoverymuchhelptraditionalwaysoflife.

插入语

suchasmedicaladvances,

并列句

andsoverymuchhelptraditionalwaysoflife

6.Surely,fewpeoplewouldseektopreservesuchtraditionaslivingincaves.

副词

Surely,

7.Interestingly,technologycanpositivelycontributetothekeepingaliveoftraditionalskillsandwaysoflife.

副词

Interestingly,

含有动名词的名词短语

…thekeepingaliveof…

8.Forexample,thepopulationsofsomeislandsaretoosmalltohavenormalschools.

介词短语

Forexample,

9.Ratherthanbreakingupfamiliesbysendingchildrentothemainland,educationauthoritieshavebeenabletousetheInternettodeliverschoolingonline.

介词短语Ratherthanbreakingupfamiliesbysendingchildrento…

10.Inaddition,theInternetandmodernrefrigerationtechniquesarebeingusedtokeepalivethetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon.

介词短语

Inaddition,

含有介词的名词短语

thetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon

11.Itcannowbeorderedfrom,anddeliveredto,anywhereintheworld.

插入语，并列关系

anddeliveredto,

12.Inconclusion,withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ithinkitisbynomeans“pointless”,inanyway,totrytokeeptraditionsalivewithtechnology.

介词短语

Inconclusion,

介词短语，插入语

withoutsuggestingthat…

插入语，强调

inanyway,

介词短语

withtechnology

13.Weshouldnotignoretechnology,becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife.

原因状语从句becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife

★本文核心词汇分析

本文的关键词/短语一共三个，处理技巧分析如下

technology

thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflife

keepthemalive

1.原词重现technology

1.重现“traditionalskillsandwaysoflife”

1.替换词preserve

2.微调Sometechnologies

2.previouswaysofdoingthings

2.contributetothekeepingaliveof（第7句）

3.省略Others，

3.traditionalwaysoflife

3.重现keepalive（第10句）

4.原词重现technology（第7句）

4.suchtraditionaslivingincaves

4.重现trytokeeptraditionsalive（第12句）

5.替换词theInternetandmodernrefrigerationtechniques（第10句）

5.重现traditionalskillsandwaysoflife（第7句）

5.替换词supportourwayoflife（第13句）

6.原词重现technology（第12句）

6.thetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon（第10句）

7.原词重现technology（第12句）

7.ourwayoflife（第13句）

8.原词重现technology（第13句）

9.代词替换it（第13句）

点评：

不是所有词都可以找到替换词，很多基础词汇可能没有合适的替换词。

提醒：

没有把握坚决不要找同义词替换，以免出现表达不当甚至偏题或跑题。

建议：

多想想代词替换法和词汇短语微调（不改变核心词，如本文部分词汇、短语的处理方法）

指点迷津：

1.语法学习初级阶段应该以简单句为核心，如何把简单句写好（精确）并增加变化是关键；简单句都无法亮化的话，针对从句、复杂句的训练都是徒劳。

2.介词短语、非谓语动词、插入语是增加单句句子信息含量以及句法变化的主要手段。

3.传统的语法学习要么思维错误要么过于繁杂，往往以词汇为中心，而不是站在句子的整体高度（atthesentencelevel）

4.以句首、句中和句末为特点的语法分析简化了语法学习，学习效果却要好得多。

按照写句子的顺序，任何句子都必须先想好句首如何书写（主要是三种：

比如以介词短语开路，从句开路，或者副词打开一个句子；当然，也可以考虑含有动名词的名词短语作为主语），再想想句子中间的写法（三种：

并列句为主，其次是插入语，最后是定语从句），最后再考虑句末增加一些什么变化（三种：

介词短语，非谓语作状语或者后置定语，从句）

5.从句的学习应该尽量简化：

建议重点学习三种状语从句（原因、条件和让步）；名词性从句的学习以背诵固定的句型为主；形容词性从句也需要重点训练。

6.分析的文章越多就越是头脑清醒，也可以多掌握一些搭配和从句；大小作文大抵如此，小作文更简单。

英语满分作文句法分析表2

Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatareyouropinionsonthis?

SentenceNo.

句首

句中

句末

1.Theissueofchildrendoingpaidworkisacomplexandsensitiveone.

含有介词以及动名词的名词短语Theissueofchildrendoingpaidwork…

含有代词one,指代（referencing）是一种重要的逻辑衔接手段acomplexandsensitiveone

2.Itisdifficulttosaywhohastherighttojudgewhetherchildrenworkingis‘wrong’or‘valuable’.

固定句型

Itisdifficulttosay…

宾语从句

…whohastherighttojudge…

宾语从句

whetherchildrenworkingis‘wrong’or‘valuable’

3.Opinionswillalsodifferasto‘learning’benefits:

nodoubtteachersandfactoryowners,forexample,wouldhavevaryingconcerns.

冒号后面是同位语从句，是对前面句子内容的解释；另外，forexample做插入语使用

4.Animportantconsiderationisthekindofworkundertaken.

句末出现分词作后置定语（undertaken）

5.Youngchildrendoingarduousandrepetitivetasksonafactoryproductionline,forexample,arelesslikelytobe‘learning’thanolderchildrenhelpinginanoldpeople’shome.

含有动名词的名词短语Youngchildrendoingarduousandrepetitivetasksonafactoryproductionline

插入语

forexample

程度控制arelesslikelytobe‘learning’thanolderchildren（分词结构作后置定语）helpinginanoldpeople’shome

6.Therearehealthandsafetyissuestobeconsideredaswell.

可数名词issues（可数名词一般不可以单独使用，需要添加冠词或使用复数）

不定式作后置定语tobeconsidered（逻辑衔接）aswell

7.Itisanunfortunatefactthatmanyemployersmayprefertousetheservicesofchildrensimplytosavemoneybypayingthemlessthanadultsanditisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged.

含有同位语从句Itisanunfortunatefactthat…simplytosavemoney（介词短语）bypayingthemlessthanadults

并列句连接词and

含有强调句

itisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged

8.However,inmanycountrieschildrenworkbecausetheirfamiliesneedtheadditionalincome,nomatterhowsmall.

副词However,逻辑转折

原因状语从句

becausetheirfamiliesneedtheadditionalincome,

让步状语从句nomatterhowsmall（省略itis）

9.Thiswascertainlythecaseinthepastinmanyindustrializedcountries,anditisverydifficulttojudgethatitiswrongforchildrentodaytocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway.

代词this（referencing,避免重复）

并列句连接词

and

含有宾语从句的并列句itisverydifficulttojudgethatitiswrongforchildrentodaytocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway

10.Nevertheless,inbettereconomiccircumstances,fewparentswouldchoosetosendtheirchildrenouttofull-timepaidwork.

副词Nevertheless，（逻辑转折）

插入语

inbettereconomiccircumstances

11.Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant,thenchildrencanacquirethesebyhavinglight,part-timejobsorevendoingtaskssuchashelpingtheirparentsaroundthefamilyhome,whichareunpaid,butundoubtedlyofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment.

条件状语从句Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant,

含有介词短语

byhavinglight,part-timejobsorevendoingtaskssuchashelpingtheirparentsaroundthefamilyhome

插入语

whichareunpaid,

并列句but（省略are）undoubtedlyofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment

★本文核心词汇分析

本文的关键词/短语一共四个，处理技巧分析如下:

children

paidwork

completelywrong

valuableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility

1.原词重现children

1.原词重现

paidwork

1.原词重现wrong

1.原词重现

valuable

2.原词重现children

2.同根词

working

2.灵活替换

itisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged

2.替换

‘learning’benefits

3.原词重现，增加形容词作对比Youngchildren

3.替换

thekindofworkundertaken

3.原词重现wrong

3.替换

‘learning’

4.原词重现，增加形容词作对比olderchildren

4.替换

doingarduousandrepetitivetasks

4.基本重复

Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant

5.原词重现children

5.替换

theservicesofchildren

5.指代

these

6.代词them

6.动词work

6.替换…（are）ofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment

7.原词重现children

7.灵活替换tocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway

8.代词their

8.原词重现，添加形容词full-timepaidwork

9.原词重现children

9.灵活替换（unpaid）jobs

10.原词重现children

10.灵活替换

（unpaid）tasks

11.原词重现children

12.代词their

13.原词重现children

英语满分作文句法分析表3

Happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.

Whyisitdifficulttodefine?

Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?

SentenceNo.

句首

句中

句末

1.Happinessisverydifficulttodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople.

原因状语从句

becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople

2.Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships.

时间状语从句

Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinessto…

固定搭配

link…to…

宾语从句

othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships

3.Yetothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldorrelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruehappiness.

并列连词，yet,逻辑转折

插入语

ratherthan

并列连词

either…or…

The（only）waytodo=wayofdoing

4.Becausepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferentways,itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatistrueforeveryone.

原因状语从句

Becausepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferentways

固定句型

itisdifficultto…

定语从句

itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatistrueforeveryone.

5.However,iftherearedifferentkindsofhappinessfordifferentindividualsthenthefirststepinachievingitwouldbetohaveadegreeofself-knowledge.

副词however,逻辑转折

条件状语