1、大学英语四级真题作文大学英语四级真题作文【题型概述】四级考试中作文占试卷总分的15%,旨在考察学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力。要求考生在30分钟内写出一篇不少于120词的短文,做到“内容切题,表达清楚,意义连贯,文理通顺,语言正确”。作文内容涉及日常生活、科技、社会、文化等方面的一般知识,通常由汉语提纲、图表、关键词等形式加以限定。四级作文评分标准:四级作文采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法,从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判,既考虑作文是否切题和充分表达思想,也考虑语言错误是否造成理解障碍。阅卷人员就总的印象给出分数,而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。13-15分:切题。表达思
2、想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。(几乎全对)10-12分:切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。(对中有错)7-9分:基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。(对错相当)4-6分:基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差,有较多严重的语言错误。(错中有对)1-3分:条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。(几乎全错)0分:白卷,作文与题目毫不相关,或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想。注: 字数不足应酌情扣分。【解题思路】作文是整个考试过程中要求考生首先完成的题目,因此考生须注意把握好
3、答题节奏。考虑到时间紧张,不推荐考生打草稿再誊写的答题方式,建议考生采用以下答题步骤:1) 在1分钟内完成审题,确定文章思路。2) 在头脑里大致拟出文章提纲。3) 下笔成文。此外,考生须注意以下事项:审题细致:内容紧扣主题,涵盖提纲要点。表达清楚:结构一目了然,句子完整,句子间逻辑明朗、层次清晰。语法正确:用词得体、恰当,句法结构正确,避免重大语言错误。定位合理:79分只需切题和大致正确1012分需少犯语法错误,且具备一定的句式变化;1315分需要内容丰富,语言准确,有亮点。卷面整洁:字迹清楚,尽量避免错误连笔、草书或涂改。一定使用黑色字迹的钢笔或中性笔书写。The title大写:第一个单词
4、以及实意词的首字母不大写:a/an/the prep. to (do) and/but/or/for/so3 paragraphsNarration (narrative writing) who/when/where/what/whyDescription(describe what sb/sth is like)Exposition (explanation) deduction (a general statement +supporting details)comparison(similarities)contrast(differences)Argumentation(a cent
5、ral argument + examples/facts/details)cause-effect analysis审题 -拟提纲-写主题句 -确定写作方法很多时候,真题最能显示命题规律和趋势。回顾历年四级作文真题,其话题侧重考生熟悉的校园热点和社会热点,题型大至可分为以下5类:A、观点对比型此类作文题目要求学生针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其利弊,或通过比较两种不同观点来阐明自己的观点,表明自己对该事物或现象的看法。如:2013年12月英语四级作文 题目一:网络对人际交流的影响The Impact of the Internet on the Way People Communicate
6、Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. Yo
7、u should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad.”have
8、 positive or negative influence/impact onon the Internet/play an important role in.influence + obj have influence oninterpersonal communication/relationships via blogsbe +adjV+ adv. , which is a good thing make it easier for people to communicate with othersmake people unwilling to have face-to-face
9、 communicationuse it in the right wayon the one hand, on the other handas well as +NP in places far away from ustake the right attitude toward1.AWhat this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the phenomenon that the Internet has penetrated into our life. There is no consensus of opinions among peopl
10、e regarding whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. Some people hold the attitude (opinion/view/belief) that we shouldnt spend too much time on our computer terminal instead of relating to people in the real world. The reasons can be listed as follows. In the first place,
11、it will make people addicted to computers and the Internet to spend too much time on these. What is more, it will influence peoples family affection and friendship.Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every sword has two edges.” On the contrary, others are under the impression that electronic communic
12、ation can replace face-to-face contact. There are some reasons behind this attitude. For one thing, these useful and powerful communication tools have made it much faster, easier and cheaper to keep in touch with family and friends in other countries (and also to do international business).For anoth
13、er, people cannot live without the Internet and Wi-Fi nowadays.From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the former opinion rather than the latter one. From what has been discussed above, we may naturally arrive at the conclusion that we shouldnt spend too much time on their computer t
14、erminal. Instead, we should communicate with people in the real world.1.BDue to the wide use of computers and the development of the Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact.As electronic commu
15、nication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as computers, mobile phones and pads. However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully. Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child. We know
16、that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this. For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, and a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication.Therefore
17、, though electronic communication brings convenience to our life, I still dont think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. 1.CThe Impact of the Internet on the Way People Communicate网络对人们沟通产生的影响The Internet does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the
18、 way of peoples living and thinking. As is subtly revealed in the portrayal,there are two parents sitting in the front of computer,who are chatting with their child on the Internet. What a meaningful picture!From my perspective, the electronic contact cannot replace face to face communication owing
19、to the following factors. To begin with, over-reliance on electronic contact will damage the interpersonal relationship, for the cold machine never replaces a warm-hearted greeting face to face. For example, the aged parents would like their only son who works far away from home to come back home mo
20、re often rather than to talk with him on the Internet occasionally. Whats more, face to face communication is preferable because it is beneficial to build a harmonious society, for it attaches more importance to human affection and feelings instead of convenience and speed.Hence, it is necessary for
21、 us to use the Internet in a reasonable way. After all, the Internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach. If we want to keep our interpersonal relationship more effectively, we should spend more time with othe
22、rs face to face in real life. Only in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool on the net but also make our relationship closer. 1.DThe Impact of the Internet on the Way People CommunicateBeing a product of high-technology, the Internet and computers are being more and more w
23、idely used in our everyday life. They can offer us fast and convenient service for communication.In recent years, computers and the Internet have become popular among university students. Quite a lot of them use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of going home to
24、 see them in person or writing letters. Which, of course brings conveniences to them, but I dont think it is good to do so. Internet makes electronic communication convenient, but it will never replace face to face contact. Both electronic communication and face-to-face contact are important in our
25、life. What we should do it to apply each communication ways in the right way.Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way, but it is face-to face contact that deepens the feelings and emotions between people. B图片描述型这一类型的作文首先要求考生首先要简短描述图片内容,找出
26、图片中的重点。其实,要求考生能就突出的这一重点发表自己的见解。根据要求,可以列出如下Outline:第一段:简短描述图片内容,引出主题手机控第二段:多角度出发,论述手机控的后果第三段:个人认为如何正确使用手机2013年12月英语四级作文 题目二:手机控For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mob
27、ile phone in peoples life and explain theconsequence of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.The Increasing Use of the Mobile Phone in Peoples Lifebe/get addic
28、ted to their mobile phoneoveruse sth. use sth increase the use of. make good use ofkeep in touch with contact sblack self-discipline their lack ofpay attention to +V-ing2A The Increasing Use of the Mobile Phone in Peoples LifeThis picture portrays such an ironic situation: people are crossing the st
29、reet looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see, which implies the unprecedented popularity or even the overuse of cell phones nowadays.Exaggerated as the picture is, the phenomenon behind it is rather thought-provoking. With the development of high-tech equipment, especia
30、lly smart phones, people in growing numbers tend to become addicted to them. According to a survey carried out in China Daily several days ago, almost 47% of citizens explain that they would experience certain kind of anxiety without cell-phones at hand. Meanwhile, the overuse of cell-phones, firstl
31、y, would exert detrimental impact on our health. Whats worse, it would have a negative influence on interpersonal relationships since we have less time to communicate.Judging from the evidence above, we should take certain measures. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launch relevant campa
32、igns to limit the excessive use of cell-phones. Moreover, as college students, we should make good use of our mobile phone.2B From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many people crossing the street. Instead of looking at the way, they are staring at their cell phones and using walking sticks to see. It is obvious that they are fascinated with cell phones or even ignore their security. We learn from the cartoon that cell phones have been inc
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