英语书面表达高分与技巧完整.docx

1、英语书面表达高分与技巧完整英语书面表达高分与技巧一. 审题1、审体裁：明确用什么文体、什么格式。2、审人称：明确用什么人称。3、审时态：明确本文的主要时态，使全文时态一致。4、审要点：明确写什么，要确保要点齐全。既要列出已知要点，还要列出隐含要点，更应列出要点。二. 写作建议1、正确性：书面表达必须坚持正确第一的原则，保证所写句子在语法上、结构上是正确的、得体的，尤其是文章的开头和结尾。2、条理性：在确保正确的前提下，适当运用一些连接词或连接句，使文章条理清晰。同时还要学会分段。3、多样性：在确保正确的前提下，要追求句型表达的多样性。4、复杂性：在确保正确的前提下，要追求词汇词组及句型的复杂性

2、。5、规范性：要用黑色笔答题，不乱涂乱划，不超出答题区域，字迹要端正，标点符号不乱用。三. 短语优先原则书面表达时，能用短语时，尽量用短语。它会使文章增加亮点 ，提升文章的档次，也会给阅卷老师留下一个好印象。1、因为没有 因为生病了他昨天没有参加会议。 He didnt come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill. He didnt attend the meeting yesterday on account of his illness. He was absent from the meeting yesterday owing to

3、/ due to his illness. His illness accounted for his absence from the meeting yesterday. His illness prevented him from attending the meeting yesterday.2、喜欢 当他是孩童时，就喜爱学习。 When he was a child, he liked to learn everything. As a child, he was fond of learning. When he was a child, he was addicted to kn

4、owledge. As a child, he was mad about knowledge. When he was a child, he was crazy about learning. As a child, he took great pleasure in learning. When he was a child, he had a strong desire/ passion for knowledge.When he was a child, he had a strong appetite for knowledge.3、认为 有75%的学生认为五一节高三学生应该放假。

5、 75% students think that the Senior 3 students should have a holiday on May Day. Most students , about 75%, hold the view that the Senior 3 should have a holiday on May Day. The majority of the students accept the idea that the Senior 3 should have a holiday on May Day. In the opinion of most studen

6、ts, about 3 out of 4, the Senior 3 students should take some days off on May Day. From the point of most students view, As far as they are concerned, 4、感谢 如果能考虑我的申请，我不胜感激。 Ill thank you if you can think about my application. Ill be grateful / thankful to you if you can think about my application. Il

7、l thank you from the bottom of my heart if you can take my application into consideration. Ill appreciate it if you can take my application into account.5、尽力 我们将尽力按时完成任务。 Well do our best to finish our task in time. Well do whatever we can to finish the task in time. Well make great efforts to finis

8、h the task in time. Well devote our efforts to finishing the task in time. Well spare no efforts to finish the task in time.6、突然想到了 我突然想到了一个好注意。 Suddenly I had a good idea. All of a sudden, I thought of a good idea. All of a sudden, I came up with a good idea. All of a sudden, a good idea occurred t

9、o me. All of a sudden, a good idea flashed across my mind.7、非常吃惊 污染如此严重，他非常吃惊。 The pollution was so serious. He was very surprised. He was very surprised to see the pollution was so serious. He showed great surprise to see how serious the pollution was. To his great surprise, he found it was so seri

10、ously polluted. What surprised him most was that it was so seriously polluted.四一二三原则1) 1st, 2nd, 3rd, at last (反对）2）first, second, third, last（不推荐）3）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐） 4）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 5）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 6）first an

11、d foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 7）most important of all/ first of all, moreover, finally 8）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 9）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）五多变句式原则多变句式指：写作时要适当使用复合句、非谓语形式、被动语态、倒装句、强调句型等，使文章更精彩。1、合并句子： 1）高考临近，我们没有心情去游玩。 The College Entrance Exam i

12、s coming near. We have no interest in going anywhere. The College Entrance Exam is on the way so we have no desire to go anywhere. With the College Entrance Exam drawing near, we have no appetite to go anywhere. 2) 他喜欢踢足球，也喜欢打篮球。 He enjoys playing football. He also enjoys playing basketball. Not onl

13、y does he enjoy playing football, but also he enjoys playing basketball.2、改变语态：1）他在英语方面已经取得了很大的进步。 He has made rapid progress in English. Rapid progress has been made in English.2) 我们应尽力阻止环境遭到破坏。 We should make great efforts to prevent the environment from being destroyed. Great efforts should be ma

14、de to prevent the environment from being destroyed.3、使用短语：1）我英语好，我愿意为大会做志愿者（volunteer). Im good at English, so Id like to be a volunteer for the meeting. With a good knowledge of English, Id like to be a volunteer for the meeting.2) 这辆汽车质量好，价格也合理。 The quality of the car is good, and the price of the

15、 car is reasonable. In addition to the good quality, the price of the car is also reasonable.4、使用非谓语形式：1）我愿意在下周五举行的会议上做志愿者。 I would like to be a volunteer for the meeting which will be held next Monday. I have a strong desire to be a volunteer for the meeting to be held next Monday.2) 当我发现这么多人坐在教室里，

16、我很紧张。 When I found that so many people were sitting in the classroom, I was very nervous. Finding so many people seated in the classroom, I was very nervous.3) 我不得不呆在家里，照料我生病的母亲。 I had to stay at home and look after my sick mother. I had to stay at home looking after my sick mother. I had no choice

17、but to stay at home looking after.5、使用名词性从句：1) 他没有出现，使每个人失望。 To everyones disappointment, he didnt turn up. What disappointed everyone was that he didnt turn up. It disappointed everyone that he didnt turn up. The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everyone.2) 他又迟到了，这使老师非常生气。 He was late again

18、and it made the teacher very angry. His being late again made the teacher very angry. It made the teacher very angry that he was late again. The fact that he was late again made the teacher very angry.6、使用定语从句：1）新华词典,词汇11,000个， 价格11元。 There are 11,000 words in the Xin Hua Dictionary. The price of it

19、 is 11 yuan. There are 11,000 words in the Xin Hua Dictionary, the price of which is 11 yuan. The Xin Hua Dictionary, which charges 11 yuan, has a collection of 11,000 words. 7、使用状语从句：1）合理安排时间，使学习更有效。 Arrange your time properly. It will make your study more efficiently. Arrange your time properly so

20、 that you can make your study more efficiently.2) 天下大雨，但他们仍继续工作。 It rained heavily, but they still went on with the work. Although it rained heavily, they still went on with the work. Despite the heavy rain, they still went on with the work.8、使用倒装结构： 在旧社会，人们饥寒交迫。这些日子一去不复返了。 People suffered from cold

21、 and hunger in the past. The days are gone forever. Gone forever are the days when people suffered from cold and hunger.9、使用强调句型： 生日这天，我们常能收到许多生日礼物及生日祝福。 On birthday, we usually receive a lot of nice presents and good wishes. It is on birthday that we usually receive a lot of nice presents and good

22、wishes.六长短句原则写作中要注意长短句结合，简单句为主，复合句为辅，不要一味追求长句及复合句。适当的短句，可使文章长短结合，抑扬顿挫。七主题句原则写作时要突出主题，开门见山，把主题句放在文首或段首，使读者一目了然。 I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. As we all know, a good learning environment is necessary if we want to study English well.八多实少虚原则 写作时，一定要写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实

23、词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大、比较空的词。 比如说“很好”，不应只说very nice. 还可说：generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted,等形容词。又如：“走出房间”一般的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间：slip out of the room 小姐走出房间：sail out of the room 小孩走出房间：dance out of the room 老人走出房间：stagger out of the room 匆匆走出房间：hurry out of th

24、e room 冲出房间：rush out of the room所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！ I. 用于文章主题句 1. 不用说 It goes without saying that. = It is needless to say that = Needless to say, = It is obvious that= Obviously, 例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。 It goes without saying that it is worthwhile to get up early.2. 不可否认 There is no denying that = No one

25、can deny that There is no doubt that There is no possibility of doing. It is impossible to do. It is out of the question to do There is no point/ sense of doing Its no use / good doing例不可否认,成功关键在于健康的身心。 There is no denying that success lies in a healthy body and mind.3.就我的看法；我认为 In my opinion, / Per

26、sonally, = from my point of view, . = As far as I am concerned, 例就我的看法，打电脑游戏既花费时间也有害健康。 In my opinion, playing computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.4. 人们普遍认为 it is generally/ commonly accepted/ thought that 例如：人们普遍认为教育不应该随着毕业而结束 。 It is commonly accepted that educati

27、on shouldnt end with graduation.5. 俗语说得好：Well goes an old saying, “”= As an old saying goes (runs, says), = An old saying goes, = Its an old saying that. 例俗话说得好: “诚实为上策”。 As an old saying goes, Honesty is the best policy. 6. 以下 (A) 用下列方法 in the following ways. (B) 有三个主要理由。 for three major reasons. (

28、C) 要, 至少我们可做三件事。 To , there are at least three things we can do. 例: 我用下列方法增加信心。 I increase my confidence in the following ways. 人们学外语有三个理由。 People learn a foreign language for three major reasons. 为了维护健康,我们每天至少可做三件事。 To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.6. 正成为增长的趋势 Th

29、ere is a growing tendency for sb to do 例如：近年来，人们买汽车呈增长的趋势。 There is a growing tendency for people to buy private cars in recent years. 学生考试作弊现象呈增长趋势。 There is a growing tendency for students to cheat in the exam.II. 用于文章承转句 1. 基于/考虑到 In view of = Considering 例如：考虑到这些严重的状况， 我们必须采取一些措施来阻止河流被污染。 In vie

30、w of such a serious situation, something must be done to prevent the rivers from being polluted. 基于这个理由 For this reason, 为了这个目的 For this purpose, 例如：基于这个理由,我已决定把改变注意。 For this reason, I have decided to change my mind.2. 此外, besides /in addition/ moreover/ whats more/ furthermore 例如此外我们还应该考虑他们提出的一些建议

31、。 In addition, we should take their suggestions into consideration.3. 相反地 on the contrary, = by contrast/ in contrast, 例相反地,我们应该帮助那些处于困境中的学生。 On the contrary, we should help those students who are in trouble. 与上面的观点相反，大部分学生认为英语课应该用英语授课。 Contrary to the above opinion, the majority of the students prefer their English classes to be taught in English.III. 用于文章结论句 1. 总而言之