届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点12书面表达读后续写.docx

1、届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点12书面表达读后续写考点12 书面表达读后续写Writing 1（2020河北高三月考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。A few seconds remained and the score was tied. Players gathered near the goal. Suddenly Devin saw a clear opening to the goal. He struck the ball hard and held his breath as it flew toward th

2、e upper corner of the net.Goal!Three seconds later, the judge blew the whistle. Game over.Championship game, here we come! said Tara, slapping hands with Devin. Cant wait till Thursday.Devin grinned. Thursday would be hugethe big soccer game in the afternoon, and the schools autumn concert in the ev

3、ening. Ms. Poltis had chosen Devin to sing a song alone.Great work, Coach said as the team gathered. Be here by 6:30 on Thursday to warm up. Its a night game, Coach explained. Under the lights.Devins heart sank. The concert was at 7:00. Same time as the game. He couldnt possibly do both. His teammat

4、es were super excited. They were on the edge of a title. He couldnt disappoint his team by skipping the game.That night, Devin lay in bed, staring at the ceiling. The lyrics struck him and he began to sing:No matter how hard the struggle, I will never let you down.He liked the song, and he appreciat

5、ed how kind Ms. Poltis always was. Devin knew the words by heart, but the thought of singing alone made him tremble. Sometimes he was nervous about participating in sports, too, but that always went away as soon as a game started. Hed never sung a solo before. It was a relief to know he didnt have t

6、o now. The soccer game was a perfect excuse. But so was Ms. Poltis. It was long time before he fell asleep.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1The next morning, Devin went straight to the music room._Paragraph 2On Thursday evening, Devin felt a little nervous to see so many peop

7、le in the concert hall._【答案】The next morning, Devin went straight to the music room. I am not the best singer and I have to. Devin hesitated with his eyes fixed on the floor. Ms. Poltis smiled warmly, I choose you because you work hard, like the person in the song. So dont be nervous! Devin raised h

8、is head and looked at her, tears welling up in his eyes. It was at that moment that Devin made his final decision. Later that day, Devin went to his coach and teammates. Unexpectedly, they welcomed him and promised that they would spare no effort to win the title.On Thursday evening, Devin felt a li

9、ttle nervous to see so many people in the concert hall. Devin took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage. The bright light coming on, Devin calmed down and sang with confidence. Devin handled the solo perfectly. Hardly had he finished the last word of the song when a wave of applause erupted from

10、 the audience. Devin smiled at Ms. Poltis and felt proud of the choice he had made. No matter how hard the struggle, you have to make a decision and never let yourself down.【分析】本文以人物的心理活动为主要线索展开。Devin所在的足球队周四晚上有一场比赛，他们有望获得冠军。同时，周四晚上学校举行秋季运动会，Devin有独唱节目。Devin面临着艰难的选择。最终，Ms. Poltis的话让Devin做出了选择：他参加了秋季

11、音乐会，并成功地进行了独唱。通过这件事，Devin明白了一个道理：无论多么艰难的挣扎，你都要做出决定，永远不要让自己失望。【详解】1. 段落续写：由第一段首句内容“第二天早晨，Devin直接去了音乐教室”可知，第一段可描写在音乐教室里发生的事情。同时结合第二段首句“星期四晚上，看到这么多人在音乐厅里，德文有点紧张。”可知，第一段还要叙述Devin下定决心参加音乐会的内容。由第二段首句内容“星期四晚上，看到这么多人在音乐厅里，德文有点紧张。”可知，第二段可描写Devin在音乐会上的表现和他的心理活动等方面的内容。2. 续写线索：面临选择去音乐教室下决心参加音乐会登上舞台表演成功感悟3. 词汇激活

12、行为类抬头：raise ones head/look up下决心：make the final decision/make up ones mind/determine to do 欢迎、迎接某人：welcome sb./give sb. a warm welcome情绪类紧张：feel nervous/feel stressed out/be nervous骄傲：feel proud of/take pride in【点睛】高分句型1 Devin raised his head and looked at her, tears welling up in his eyes.（tears+现在

13、分词构成独立主格结构）高分句型2 It was at that moment that Devin made his final decision.（强调句型It is +被强调部分+that+其余部分）高分句型3 Hardly had he finished the last word of the song when a wave of applause erupted from the audience.（hardlywhen一就。hardly否定词置于句首，主句部分倒装。）Writing2（2020浙江杭州市学军中学高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

14、It was 7 a.m. on 12 May 1998.Mohr had already scanned several packages listing dangerous materials aboard the train. The presence of gas would mean taking extra precaution when braking the 6,200-ton train. With explosive gas on board, it would be disastrous if the train came off the track. After a f

15、inal inspection, Mohr jumped aboard. He was heading east, into a sun that promised a beautiful day for their 276-km run to Peru, Indiana.At around noon that day, Marshall prepared to tackle some yardwork. It was a beautiful day for it, she thought, gazing past the houses across the street. Some 45 m

16、eters away, railroad tracks shone in the sun.Marshall began working in a patch (地块） of soil. Sitting next to her, cheerfully running her hands through dirt, was her 19-month-old daughter, Emily. For a while, she kept turning to check on Emily, who played close at hand. Eventually, though, Marshalls

17、absorption in her work became total.Mohr approached the town where Marshall lived at about 1:45 p.m. and slowed the train to the 40-kmph speed limit. He activated the flashing lights and warning bell. Mohr had been through the town hundreds of times, but he grew extra cautious rounding the first cur

18、ve.As the train came out of the curve, Mohr noticed a small dot on the track about 200 meters ahead. He thought it might be a dog. Although it was against the rules to do so in the town, he began lightly tapping his horn. Come on, puppy, move, he urged.The toots (嘟嘟响） of a train whistle startled (使受

19、惊吓） Marshall from her yardwork. Thats odd, she thought. They dont usually blow the whistle through town. She glanced over to check her daughter, and her heart skipped. Emily was nowhere in sight.Now, as the train approached within 100 meters of the object on the rail, Mohr narrowed his eyes, trying

20、to make out what exactly was lying ahead. Then shock ran through him like electric current.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1 My God! he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him. “Its a baby!_Para 2 The child was now just 36 meters ahea

21、d._【答案】Para 1My God! he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him. “Its a baby!Mohr had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve. He had to risk an emergency stop. Hard as he try, the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish, whose

22、 enticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.Meanwhile, Marshall rushed towards her daughter, nervous but desperate, fearing the train would run into her beloved.Para 2The child was now just 36 meters ahead.Mohr pulled the brake with his whole efforts.The sound of wheels grinding against t

23、he rails rang through the sky. The situation was quite dangerous.As the train was almost stopped, he immediately opened the left door of the engine cab quickly and swiftly jumped from the moving train and ran back to the child. She lay crying by the tracks.A great relief sweeping over Mohr, he lifte

24、d her from the dirt hurriedly. It was only then that Mohr noticed the train had stopped and Marshall was just coming to her baby.With the baby in his arms,Mohr began to walk towards the mother.【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了火车司机Mohr，在一次驾驶火车全速前进时，他注意到远处的铁轨上有个黑点，他以为是一条狗，后来证实这个黑点是一个婴儿。他要在保证火车安全的情况下，救下这个婴儿。【详解】1.段落续

25、写：由第一段首句内容“我的上帝! ”当一张小脸转向他时，他大叫起来。“是个婴儿！”，可知，第一段可描写火车司机Mohr的心理感受及其采取的措施，同时可以描写婴儿妈妈Mashall的现场反应。由第二段首句内容“这时火车距离婴儿只有36米了。”可知，第二段可描写火车司机Mohr努力减速火车直至火车停下，然后救婴儿，最终婴儿平安得救。2.续写线索：看见婴儿决定刹车跳车救孩子孩子得救3.词汇激活行为类.做决定：make a decision/make up his mind/keep in mind that.刹车：pull the brake/stop the train with effort.救

26、孩子：save the child/ rescue the child/save the babys life情绪类焦急：anxious/have ones heart in ones mouth【点睛】高分句型1. Mohr had an instant decision to make, applying full emergency brakes with half the train still wrapped around a curve. （applying.为现在分词作状语）高分句型2. Hard as he try, the train kept moving just as

27、a cat saw a fish, whose enticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.（as引导的让步状语从句，whose之后为非限制性定语从句）Writing3（2020江苏南京市高三月考）阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age, not so long ago, when we childre

28、n could go home for lunch and find our mothers waiting. At the time, I didnt consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be. Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I realized it.Our lunch time when I was in the third gr

29、ade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that she needed a narrator