英语写作文章结构.docx

1、英语写作文章结构来源：高考资源网英语写作解题与构思看到一个英语作文题，在动笔之前要试探如下问题：一时态不同的文体需要不同的时态：记叙文（一般过去时为主）；应用文（一般此刻时和一般未来时为主）；议论文（一般此刻时为主）；书信（视书信内容而定）；图表作文（一般过去时和一般此刻时为主）。二措词写作文既要注意词能达意，又要注意措词适当得体。专门是书信类的作文，这点尤其重要。三内容认真读题，肯定要点四段落作文一般包括一个开头段、一至两个扩展段和一个结尾段。1. 开头段：语言精练，而且直接切入主题。一般在开头段写四句左右即可。开头段的作用：归纳陈述主题，提出观点或论点，表明写作用意。【写作要点】写开头段时

2、考生应该避免的若干问题:1) 开头偏离主题太远；2) 利用抱歉或抱怨之文句；3) 内容不具体，言之无物；2. 中间段：篇幅一般比开头段和结尾段长 1) 段落中必然具有主题句；讨论的内容主次分明；2) 段落内容应该维持完整、统一，没有说明不足的地方或多余冗长的细节；3) 内容顺序安排合理，逻辑性较强；段落之间连贯自然；4) 词与句型运用合理而且有转变。3. 结尾段结尾段要干脆利落，深化主题。结尾段的写作方式很多，常常利用的有如下四种：1.总结归纳：简要总结归纳文章要点，以便深化主题印象。1) Taking into account of all these factors, we may rea

3、ch the conclusion that .2) Judging from all evidence offered，we may safely come to the conclusion that2.重申主题：再次强调和肯定文章开头论述的中心思想。3.预测展望：立足当前，放眼未来。4.提出建议：提出解决问题的途径、方式或呼吁人们采取相应的行动。五学生作文中的常见问题：1. 不一致（Disagreements）所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致，时态不一致及指代不一致等例Once people have money , he can do what he want to .

4、人一旦有了钱，他就可以想干什么就干什么剖析：本句是典型的指代不一致和主谓不一致。people是集体名词，却用了he指代，而he是第三人称单数，谓语却用了原型。可改成Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do).2. 修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers）受中文思维影响，不考虑英语适应的不同。提示：要特别注意形容词和副词的位置。例I very much like these present at the meeting girls.我超级喜欢这些参加会议的女孩。 可改成I like these girls present a

5、t the meeting very much.3. 句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）：常常缺少连词或主语例 speaks very loudly so that can be heard by all of us.He speaks very loudly so that he can be heard by all of us.例 are many people think it is important to enter a good university.改成：There are many people who think it is important to ent

6、er a good university.4. 悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers）所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten只点出十岁时，但没有说明” 谁”十岁时按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died.例 To do well in college, good grades are essential

7、.改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades.5. 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等例 Some people against the idea. 剖析：against 系介词，误作动词。改为：Some people are against the idea.例2 As a result of it rained heavily, people had to stay indoors. 剖析：of系介词，误作连词。改为：As a res

8、ult of the heavy rain, people had to stay indoors.6. 指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。例1. Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。)读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将成婚，谁将当伴娘。若是咱们把易于引发误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。那个句子

9、可改成：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.例2. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself. 剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改成：We can also know society by serving it ourselves.7. 综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述错误以外，还有诸如时态，语态，标点符号

10、，大小写等方面的错误。例Today, Money to everybody was very importance, ours eat, cloth, live, go etc.六短文改错短文改错题所涉及到的高频考点，恰好也是中学生在写作中常常出现的错误。即：1）词法内容：包括名词、代词的数与格，反身代词，动词时态语态，非谓语动词、短语动词的用法，不规则动词的转变形式，形容词的比较级，形容词副词的区别，介词的误用等。2）句法内容：包括主谓一致、指代一致，并列连词，从属连词等引导各类从句的关联词语，感叹句，疑问句，祈使句的结构等。3）行文逻辑：包括句子的肯定、否定、推理、判断等。下面提供的每篇范

11、文皆设置了10处错误（划线句无错），请修改后再学习之。范例1】假设你是一名大学生叫李华，对最近几年来大学毕业生就业情形很有已见，请按照下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的观点。字数100左右。开头已给出 。学生心态向往城市，不愿下乡。就业现状城市人才过剩；农村渴求人才。就业前景农村天地广阔，可施展才华。Dear editor, I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtain empl

12、oyment in big cities, unwilling work in the countryside.As matter of fact, there are no enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunter in big cities while in the countryside talented people badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting us. Rural areas are a vast world, which you could put your abi

13、lities to good use but youll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.However, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city. Yours sincerely , Li Hua范例2】假设你叫李平，是一名成绩优秀的学生，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生作同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引发了反应，团活课上大家就此进行了讨论。

14、此刻请你按照下表把讨论结果向班主任写一封信反映一下，并说出自己的观点。赞同反对你的观点1人人有长处和不足；2相互学习，建立友谊；3帮助他们学习从而使他们建立自信。1部分学习差的学生常违反校规校纪，担心自己会受影响。2老是问问题，使自己不能专心。？注意：1词数：100120，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Zhang,We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a

15、 slower student.Some are for the idea. As they know, everyone has strength as well as weaknesses. Although they are not good at lessons, they might do good in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other, they may develop a friendship. In addition to, top students can

16、help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefit them all.Others, however, dont hold same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keep talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead to them forming the bad habits. Besid

17、es, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies.In my opinion, Id like to choose share a desk with a slower student so that can learn from each other and make progresses together. Yours, Li Ping范例3】假定你是某市居民，名叫李华。你感觉该市出租车行业问题较多，请写一封信给该市市长，内容应包括：问题 (1)停泊点太

18、少，不易打的; (2)讹诈外地乘客; (3)车速过快，事故几回; (4)仍有拒载者; (5)深夜聚集在娱乐场所外等客时制造噪音，影响他人休息。建议 要求采取办法注意：1.字数100词左右。文章开头已给出。 2.参考辞汇：绕道：take a roundabout route Dear Mayor, Im a resident of the city. I feel there are many problems exist in the trade of taxi in our city. First of all, there are still not enough stops in the

19、 streets so its not easy to take a taxi. And taxis often ran very fast, which causes manytraffic accidents. Whats more, some taxi drivers still refuse to pick some passengers without any reason. Another terrible thing often happens is that deeply at night taxis waiting around the entertainment place

20、s make more noise. Many people cant rest well. A friend of mine living in another city once visited me, she told me our city taxi drivers cheated him by taking a roundabout route. What will a guest think of our city after so a bad experience? I think we must take actions. Maybe the first thing to do

21、 is raise the taxi drivers professional morality.We are looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua范例4】下图表反映的是我校2002年与2005年学生健康状况调查的部份数据。请你为某报写一份报告，反映三年间学生健康状况的转变情形，分析其原因并提出相应的改良办法（很多于两条）。注意：1报告必需包括图表中所有内容。 2词数：120左右。A recent survey shows that the health of the students in our school have b

22、een going from bad to worse in the past three years . The number of nearsighted students has increased from % in 2002 to % in 2005 , and that of overweight , from 36% to %. Comparing to 2002 nearly 10% more students lack of sleep because of many homework to do. Besides, over 15% more students have b

23、ecome mentally unhealthy .To improve students healthy, we call for less homework . Only in this way students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from get nearsighted . Properly diets and exercise should also be paid attention so that they wont easily put on weight . With ouir heavy burden

24、s removed , students can then be mentally healthy.One careless move may lose the whole game.一步不慎，满盘皆输。高考资源网来源：高考资源网 过渡性词语要学会利用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂”。恰本地利用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等短处，使文章层次清楚，文字连贯流畅。常常利用的过渡词有：递进型： also, (and)besides, whats more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, whats worse, worse st

25、ill, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only but also等；解释型：that is (to say), in other words, or，namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等；转折型：however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等；列举型：firstsecondfinally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for o

26、ne thing, for another 等举例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take for example等；因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so that, so that等；妥协型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等；顺序型：firstnextand thenfinally, firstthenafter

27、 thatfinally 等；并列型：and, bothand, or, eitheror, as well as, 等时刻型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardlywhen, no soonerthan 等总结型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等观点型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，Im sure 等条件型：if, as

28、 long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等【选词填空】例1】 in my opinion /however /thus/ in the long run / in additionAt present , many high school students are addicted to buying lottery tickets and they seem to have good reasons . _, Id like to talk about my views on the phenomenon._, its disadva

29、ntages are far more than its advantages, despite one of their reasons that they can do something useful for society in this way . High school students cant support themselves financially but depend on their parents for the moment. _, in order to collect money with which to buy lottery tickets, they

30、may try every possible means , even commit crimes ._, if they put their minds on lottery tickets, their lessons will be more or less affected. And_, lottery ticket purchasing may contribute to their wrong understanding that there must be a shortcut to every destination , which will surely do great h

31、arm to their future life.Therefore, I think it is necessary for them to keep away from lottery stations and concentrate on their studies for now.例2】 so far as/ as well as /therefore/ only /just like / still/ howeverAs is apparently shown in the chart above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of students having learning anxieties_ bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep. Coming next is the lack of physical exercise. 40% of the students surveyed wont obey their parents or