1、高 考 英 语 书 面 表 达涨分手册高 考 英 语 书 面 表 达涨分手册高考英语书面表达评分标准解读“应用了较多的词汇”是指词汇使用的多样性,如高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。“较多的语法结构”是指句式结构的多样性。感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、强调句型、定语从句、非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用,可以使文章的语言充满层次感。“上下文的连贯性”,并能“有效地使用语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”是指段与段、句与句之间以一种明晰的、合乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排,做到在文意与结构上层次分明,条理清楚,连贯流畅。“语言的得体性”是要求考生在表达时应根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等
2、选择使用恰当的英语语言,尤其是不同体裁和题材的文章对用语方面有着不同的要求。高考英语书面表达评分标准第五档(2125分) 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。第四档(1620分) 虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,有些许错误主要是因尝试使用较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。第三档(1115分) 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和
3、词汇能满足任务的要求。 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。 应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。命题解读高考英语书面表达题测试内容正在从知识型向能力型转变,书面表达文体日益多元化。1.文体与实际运用能力紧密结合。其中应用文体占主流。如:山东卷电子邮件“暑期打算”和新课标全国卷征求信“机场接机”等都反映出这一趋势。 2.话题与考生的学习、生活及社会热点联系密切。如:四川卷“学习习惯”;陕西卷“帮助家人做家务”等都是学生熟悉的话题。安徽卷“文明出行”和福建卷“儿童教育”等都是当前的社会热点话题。3.越来越多地采用半开放和开放式作文。如:浙江卷“我自豪的一件事”,提供了一定的素材
4、或主题,让学生在此基础上自由发挥。4.写作的体裁和题材呈多样化。高考作文的体裁有记叙文、议论文、说明文和应用文(其中应用文居多);作文内容的呈现有文字信息、图画、图表等方式;题材涉及中学生的学习、生活、社会活动以及中学生所熟悉的社会热点等。2004-2015年高考英语全国卷书面表达统计年份内容作文主题类型2015告知 栏目介绍;稿件内容长度和交稿日期等信息2015年全国卷I作文:请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿书信告知时间活动流程等2015年全国卷II作文:邀请外教去敬老院的信书信2014询问信息完整性2014年全国卷I作文:就暑期学习询问有关情况书信从家庭,工作,业余生活描述十年后的我2014年全国
5、卷II作文:十年后的我记叙文2013说明自己情况,询问是否可以帮助接机2013年全国卷I作文:问朋友是否可以帮助接机借机书信介绍代卖中国结,外观、象征意义、大小尺寸2013年全国卷II作文:请朋友代卖中国结书信2012夏令营申请信2012年全国卷I作文:申请参加夏令营书信(申请)告知生日party相关消息,邀请来参加2012年全国卷II作文:生日party邀请信书信(邀请)2011向语言辅导中心寻求帮助2011年全国卷I作文:向语言辅导中心寻求帮助书信(求助)报刊征求意见,给主编写信2011年全国卷II作文:给主编的信书信(建议)2010邀请当评委,并且通知相关时间及安排2010年全国卷I作文
6、:写信邀请当评委书信(邀请)学校招聘外教,告知朋友招聘要求2010年全国卷II作文:写信告知招聘信息书信(招聘)2009告知几个事情的留言条2009年全国卷I作文:英语留言条留言介绍前门大街位置交通特色等2009年全国卷II作文:回信介绍前门大街改造情况书信(介绍)2008询问熊猫相关情况2008年全国卷I作文:给动物园工作人员的信书信根据信息完成回信,怎样学习中文2008年全国卷II作文:怎样学中文的回信书信(建议)2007根据条件描述理想中笔友,理由2007年全国卷I作文:找笔友书信(人物)宾馆信息介绍2007年全国卷II作文:宾馆介绍说明文(宾馆)2006根据图片给出信息进行描述2006
7、年全国卷I作文:图书馆介绍的信书信(图画)自我介绍2006年全国卷II作文:申请志愿者的信书信(申请)2005动物园是否迁址:正反两方面观点2005年全国卷I作文:就动物园搬迁问题给报社的信书信询问旅游广告信息的完整性2005年全国卷II作文:英文电子邮件书信2004邀请外国学生报名参加才艺大赛,告知信息2004年全国卷I作文:给美国朋友介绍才艺比赛的信书信(信息介绍)借宿你家表示欢迎并安排活动流程2004年全国卷II作文:给朋友介绍活动安排的信书信(活动安排)写信请假2004年全国卷III作文:写信请假书信写信介绍汉语班的情况2004年全国卷作文:写信介绍汉语班的情况书信(信息介绍)第一讲
8、审题准,要点全,抓住阅卷老师第一眼.保基本分下笔千言,离题万里,作文将会打入“低分冷宫”。要点全而不漏则是得高分的基本保证,漏掉要点作文档次就会被降低。一、审题要准1审文体:记叙文、说明文、应用文,还是议论文。2审人称:倘若人称不对,阅卷老师会扣掉2-3分。3审格式:考生必须清楚信的结束语和落款怎么写。4审要点:要弄清什么内容该写,哪些内容该详写,哪些内容该略写。5审时态:时态错误过多,阅卷老师会从考生应得的分数中扣除3-5分。二、要点要全1认真审题,确定要点拿到题目后,考生首先要整体把握本篇书面表达的中心内容和重点是什么,要求最大篇幅是多少;其次要弄清哪些是次要信息,只需要交代一下;最后确定
9、可以在哪里补充一些内容,以使文章内容丰富,上下文连贯。2巧妙构思,列出提纲列提纲通常有三种方法:一是中文列提纲法;二是英文列提纲法;三是不完全列提纲法,这种方法通常适用于那些语言基础很好的考生,为了不浪费写作时间,每一个要点通常只需要列出一些零星的单词或短语。三、(新课标全国卷)假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:李明:高个子,戴眼镜航班号:CA985到达:8月6日上午11:30注意:1.词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头语和结束语已为你写好。(一)、审题本文为提纲作文
10、,审题时要注意以下几点:1本文为一封征求信,人称以第二、第三人称为主。2书信格式已给出。3时态以一般将来时为主。(二)、拟点1说明写信目的告知他你叔叔李明去他所在城市开会带去他想要的那幅中国画。2请求Peter接机。3介绍李明外貌特征。4说明航班号、飞机到达时间。 参考范文Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painti
11、ng you have been looking forward to.Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport since this is his first visit to the US? Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he
12、 will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua四 (浙江高考)请以“One Thing Im Proud of”为题,用英语写一篇100120个词的短文,记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下:1记述事情经过;2简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意:文章的标题已给出(不计入总词数)。(一)、审题本文为开放性作文,从体裁来看为记叙文。1人称为第一人称。2时态:举事例部分应用一般过去时,发表感想时应用一般现在时。(二)、拟点1开头点出自己永远不会忘记如何成为一名优秀乒乓球选手。2描述自己如何成为一名
13、优秀乒乓球选手。3表达自己的感受以及从中获得的启示。参考范文 One Thing Im Proud ofI still remember how I became a good table tennis player.The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good.Later on, I often watched them care
14、fully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve
15、our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect.”五、(宁夏银川一中高三二模)假定你是李华,你校外事处招募暑假“志愿家庭”,接待来你市参观访问的美国中学生代表。请用英文写份承接申请,内容包括:1介绍家庭成员及居住、交通条件;2说明英语交流沟通水平;3安排美国朋友参加的家庭活动。注意:1词数100左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头与结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。(一)、审题1本文为,体裁属于。2时态以和为主。3人称为第人称。4书信格
16、式已给出。(二)、拟点(用汉语列出本文的写作要点)1234六、以下为一位考生的习作,根据“审题准、要点全”的原则,修改本文。Dear Sir,I sincerely hope that my family can have the honor to be a host family.I lived with my parents who were caring and friendly. Our home is next to the city center, which easy shopping access and convenient transportation are availa
17、ble. We can offer one separate room for the students. So I believe I will be a qualified host. If I am given the chance, I will invite our guests to join in our family gettogether. Whats more, you can have a tour around the city, getting the students to know more about real life and culture in China
18、.Yours,Li Hua1补写下面缺少的两个要点(1)说明英语交流沟通水平。(2)表达愿望。 2将下列表达错误给以改正(1)时态错误:句应改为:(2)语法错误:句应改为:_(3)人称错误:句应改为:3请重新完成本文Dear Sir,I sincerely hope that my family can have the honor to be a host family.Yours,Li Hua第二讲 表达明、错误少,不给阅卷老师添烦恼.少丢分阅卷老师提醒考生:如果你的作文不能写得漂漂亮亮、洋气十足,但一定要写得像模像样!一、考场作文10大错误1主谓一致错误误:Qianmen Street,
19、 a famous one in Beijing, have a history of 600 years.正:误:My hobby is widespread, which include drawing, collecting stamps and so on.正:误:Dr. Smith, together with his wife, are to arrive on the evening flight.正:2时态、语态错误误:In the morning, we had bicycled in the suburbs to plant trees.正:误:It is high tim
20、e that we do something to reduce pollution.正:误:One day I toldMr. Wang, my maths teacher, was ill.正:误:Children whoraise in poor families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.正:3句子成分残缺误:If no selfconfidence, all our dreams would merely daydreams.正:误:Our library in the
21、 center of the school.正: 误:There are many students dont support the project.正:4用词不当误:Doing a parttime job always effects study.正:误:During my summer vacation, I spent half a month in the country and played very happy.正:误:As a matter of fact, we all against all forms of terrorist activities.正:5句子粘连:指两
22、个或两个以上的独立分句没有适当的标点符号或连接词连接的句子。误:The two tourists are sightseeing in a boat, they are littering into the water.正:误:On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.正:误:There were so many people waiting to get a ticket the hall was increasingly crowded.正:6汉式英语误:There are two boys ar
23、e waiting for you.正:误:At this school studying, I really very happy.正:误:All the students had started reading English before I didnt get up.正:7平行错误:两个或两个以上的并列成分(并列单词、短语或分句)必须用等同的语法形式表达出来,否则平行结构会受到破坏。误:Crawling down a mountain is sometimes harder than we climb up.正:误:Youll get a good score if you study
24、 hard and by usinggood method.正:误:Then I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer.正:8悬垂错误:指充当状语(往往在句首)的分词、不定式或介词短语与句子的主语不能形成逻辑上的主谓或动宾关系。误:To win the game, many risks must be taken.正:误:Written in a hurry, we found the book full of mistakes.正:误:In order to improve Engli
25、sh, Jennys father bought her a lot of tapes.正:9赘词错误:由于英汉表达的不同,像汉语可以说“再重复一遍”,但相对应的英语却不能说repeat again,again就是赘词,此类错误在考生写作中也是比比皆是。误:At last, the lost boy returnedback.正:误:On one day, he went to the cinema.正:误:I wentfor fishing with my father last Sunday.正:10单词拼写和词形变化错误误:Our English teacher is friendly
26、but very strick with us students.正:误:The car hitted the old man and drived away.正:误:People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water.正:二、避免错误的2点注意1确定主语注意:汉语中的主语不一定是英文中的主语。北京八月多雨。英文中不说“Beijing rains much in August.”而说“It rains much in Beijing in August.”英文中主谓语有时需要倒装,汉语则不需要。Only then di
27、d I realize how important it is to study English.2确定谓语动词三、以下句子含有考生常犯的错误,请改正。1Many students are like play computer games.2Eat at school is very convenient for students.3There are many students are planting trees on the hill.4My English teacher is ill, so Mr Wang will instead of her.5While having our
28、dinner, the doorbell rang.四、(陕西高考)假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记,记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点:1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。请改正下面作文的错误考生作文I am an 18yearold middle school student. But I seldom helped my parents with the housework. Felt very sorry for that, I thought I should do something for my parents.On last Sunday,
29、I went for shopping and bought some fishes, vegetables and fruits in the supermarket. When I got to home, I did my best to cook the fishes prepare for some nice food. Then I wiped the dust off the furniture, sweeping, and moped the floor. When my parents saw these, they were surprising. They were ve
30、ry happy said, “We are proud of you, baby!” I fell very tired, I very happy. I think its our duty to help parents do some housework.五、以下是考场三档作文,标有序号的句子中含有一些低级错误,请改正这些错误。求诊病文As the saying goes, sticks and stones may break our bones. But sometimes words can hurt us too.Many years before I didnt know about this, but a thing happened changed my opinion. Once I didnt get good result in my exams, and mother feel angry and punished me. She beat me with a stick and then said, “I was really d
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