届高三英语湖南省上学期月考读后续写汇编含 详解.docx

1、届高三英语湖南省上学期月考读后续写汇编含 详解2021高三英语湖南省上学期月考读后续写汇编（含 详解）2021届湖南省衡阳市第一中学高三上学期第二次月考阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。There are a number of volunteer organizations out there that deal in things like clothing donation and the sale of used books. Retired schoolteacher Cathy has been a member of such an org

2、anization, VNSA, since 2012. Her duties involve working throughout the year to help prepare the books for their February sale and acting as personnel manager for the sale. That means she helps coordinate (协调) all the other volunteers who help out before, during, and after the event.It was before the

3、 2019 book sale and Cathy once again found herself sitting among a towering pile of books and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in good enough condition to resell. As she was sorting, she came upon a book, wrinkled and broken. Though she didnt like doing it, the only remaining choice

4、 for her was to throw it away.A greedy book lover herself, Cathy felt guilty about throwing away any book. Before she threw it away, she decided to check for more serious damage inside that might justify her giving it up. She opened the cover and went through the pages when she noticed something unu

5、sual.Going through the pages, Cathy was surprised to see that a part had been hollowed out (挖空)inside the book. Obviously, something was hidden in that rather expertly hollowed space. She looked down and saw that the books previous owner had hidden four packages in the space, each containing ten $10

6、0 bills. Cathys first thought was that the bills were toy money that perhaps a kid had hidden inside as part of some childish game or something.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills._Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book own

7、er._【答案】But Cathy soon realized that these were real $ 100 bills. Whoever had owned the book had chosen to hide $ 4,000 inside the book. Cathys second thought upon seeing the money was that this was sufficient to do charity. She didnt bother considering keeping the money herself. It just didnt feel

8、right to keep it for any reason. Regardless of how much good she thought she might be able to do with the money, Catchy decided that the only realistic choice left to her was to return it to its owner.Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. Using this name, Cathy might

9、 be able to find its rightful owner. Still, it would take a little digging. Thankfully, the books previous owner happened to have a pretty unusual last name. This made Cathys Internet search much easier. After only about ten minutes online, Cathy found them. The money belonged to a man. So thankful

10、was he for Cathys honesty that he actually ended up donating a generous amount to VNSA to show his gratitude.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达考查读后续写。【详解】1通读全文，读懂原文。通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题， 即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。2构思情节，谋篇布局。按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，发展须符合情节内在的逻辑应该符合现实发生的真实性。第一段围绕Cathy捡到钱后的心理活动；第二段续Cathy如

11、何寻找钱的主人。3理清逻辑，优化语言。这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑，写作不必追求高大上的词汇，相反，朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格，必须采用适当的描写侧重点续写要抓住续这一核心，按照情节的发展进行延续，写作手法上必须以叙为主，描写上以动作描写为重心，情节的发展合乎逻辑地推进。【点睛】续写部分描写详略得当，且使用了大量高级词汇和高级句子，如 sufficient， bother doing sth. for any reason；regardless of； realistic；以及Whoever had owned the book had chosen

12、to hide $ 4,000 inside the book.使用了主语从句； Cathys second thought upon seeing the money was that this was sufficient to do charity.使用了动名词短语和表语从句，为文章增色不少。2021届湖南省湖南师大附中高三月考（三）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jack and Rose were sitting face to face. At this moment, the landlord came in and asked, “Ar

13、e you sure you do not rent the house any more?” He kept silent and she only shook her head. They were going to divorce, so it was obvious that they would not continue renting the house any more.Then the landlord began examining the house. After looking around,he screamed, “Goddamn! See how you have

14、ruined my house? The walls are full of nails! How could I rent the house to others?Jack said,The room is too small and can hardly accommodate all loads of our stuff. So we could only hang them on the walls.The landlord did not listen to him and turned around up to the floor.Rose began looking around

15、 her familiar room. Four years ago, she became his bride here. On the night of their marriage, he felt deeply guilty to her, saying,“I feel so sorry for you for having you live in this small room. In the future I will earn a lot of money to buy our own house.”The room was only 13 square meters with

16、two nails on the wall next to the door, one for her to hang her bag and the other for hanging umbrellas. At that time,she threw all her stuff such as her bag and umbrella on the floor once she entered the room, staring at the whole mess and feeling terribly upset.There were three nails on the left w

17、all, on which he hung his clothes yesterday. After she lived in the room, he removed all the clothes boxes and bought her a desk in the spared room because he knew she loved writing and drawing.There were four nails on the right wall that were used to fix their wedding photo frame. But now there wer

18、e only four nails without the frame. She still remembered he got hurt on his fingers when trying to drive the nails home. It was her who pushed him to receive an injection against tetanus(破伤风)。注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The landlord tried to pry(撬动，撬开) the nails out when complaining at the

19、 same time._They hung all the things back to the wall._【答案】The landlord tried to pry(撬动，撬开) the nails out when complaining at the same time. After the nails were removed, the walls were left with numerous holes.Seeing this,Rose felt harshly heartbroken as if her heart was pierced through those holes

20、 and bleeding nonstop. All of a sudden, she sprang from her seat and exclaimed,Stop! Stop! We will continue renting the house!” Jack looked at her with great surprise,and then turned round,tears over his face.They hung all the things back to the wall. Jack asked Rose, “Are you really willing to lead

21、 a tough life with me?” She dusted the ash off her hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying,“Yes! For me,it is not a suffering to live.Rose finally came to understand that their marriage was like a wall full of numerous holes. But if all the nails were still i

22、n their own places,the wall was still undamaged and reliable.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了Jack和Rose这一对夫妻由于决定离婚而不再租赁房东的房子，房东抱怨他们把房子的墙上钉了太多的钉子。他们开始回忆房间里这些钉子的来历以及它们背后的故事。【详解】1. 段落续写：由第一段首句内容“房东一边抱怨一边试图把钉子撬出来。”可知，第一段应该描写钉子被拔出来以后发生的事情，可以写Jack和Rose在钉子被拔出来以后的心理感受以及所做出的反应。由于下一段的开头是“They hung all the things back to

23、 the wall.(他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。)”可知，续写的第一段中应该写出他们最终决定和好，重新租回房子。由第二段首句内容“他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。”可知，第二段应描写他们和好以后的事情，并且为不离婚的决定给出一个合理的解释。2.续写线索：(房东)拔钉子伤心决定续租重新挂东西复合原因感悟3.词汇激活行为类.大叫，呼喊：exclaim/shout loudly/yell.突然起身：spring/stand up suddenly.续租：continue renting /continue to rent情绪类.伤心，心碎：harshly heartbroken / Extremely

24、 sad.惊讶地：with great surprise / in shock.愿意做：be willing to do sth./would rather do sth.【点睛】高分句型1. Jack looked at her with great surprise and then turned round, tears over his face.(tears over his face是独立主格结构作伴随状语)高分句型2. She dusted the ash off her hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on t

25、hem satisfactorily, saying, “Yes! For me, it is not a suffering to live. (saying是现在分词作伴随状语)2021届湖南省雅礼中学 2021 届高三月考(三）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Work is a very important part of life in the United States. When the early immigrants came to this country they brought the idea that work was the way to God

26、 and heaven. This attitude still influences America today. Work is not only important for the salary, but also for social and psychological working, being productive. For most Americans, they are what they do. What happens, then, when a person retires at the age of sixty-five or seventy? Its easy to

27、 imagine that retirement is no easy thing. Retirees often feel they are unproductive and no longer needed by others.Once people retire, they may also get into financial trouble. Many people rely on Social Security checks every month. During their working years, employees contribute a certain percent

28、age of their salaries to the government. When people retire, they receive this money as income. These checks do not provide enough money to live on, however, because prices are increasing very rapidly. After retirement, they have to change their lifestyles. They have to spend carefully to be sure th

29、at they can afford to buy food, fuel, and other necessities.Of course, not all senior citizens feel sad when they are in face of retirement. Working for so many years, they eventually have time to spend with their families or to enjoy their hobbies such as reading, traveling or joining some senior citizen clubs. Some continue to work part time; others choose to do volunteer work like helping young people to get started in new business.American government is taking steps to ease the problems of retired people. They are building new housing, offering discounts in stores and museums an