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届高三英语湖南省上学期月考读后续写汇编含详解
2021高三英语湖南省上学期月考读后续写汇编(含详解)
2021届湖南省衡阳市第一中学高三上学期第二次月考
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Thereareanumberofvolunteerorganizationsouttherethatdealinthingslikeclothingdonationandthesaleofusedbooks.RetiredschoolteacherCathyhasbeenamemberofsuchanorganization,VNSA,since2012.HerdutiesinvolveworkingthroughouttheyeartohelppreparethebooksfortheirFebruarysaleandactingaspersonnelmanagerforthesale.Thatmeansshehelpscoordinate(协调)alltheothervolunteerswhohelpoutbefore,during,andaftertheevent.
Itwasbeforethe2019booksaleandCathyonceagainfoundherselfsittingamongatoweringpileofbooksandsortingthroughthemtoensurethattheywouldbeingoodenoughconditiontoresell.Asshewassorting,shecameuponabook,wrinkledandbroken.Thoughshedidn’tlikedoingit,theonlyremainingchoiceforherwastothrowitaway.
Agreedybookloverherself,Cathyfeltguiltyaboutthrowingawayanybook.Beforeshethrewitaway,shedecidedtocheckformoreseriousdamageinsidethatmightjustifyhergivingitup.Sheopenedthecoverandwentthroughthepageswhenshenoticedsomethingunusual.
Goingthroughthepages,Cathywassurprisedtoseethataparthadbeenhollowedout(挖空)insidethebook.Obviously,somethingwashiddeninthatratherexpertlyhollowedspace.Shelookeddownandsawthatthebook’spreviousownerhadhiddenfourpackagesinthespace,eachcontainingten$100bills.Cathy’sfirstthoughtwasthatthebillsweretoymoneythatperhapsakidhadhiddeninsideaspartofsomechildishgameorsomething.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
ButCathysoonrealizedthatthesewerereal$100bills.
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LuckilyforCathy,thebookalsocontainedthenameofthebookowner.
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【答案】ButCathysoonrealizedthatthesewerereal$100bills.Whoeverhadownedthebookhadchosentohide$4,000insidethebook.Cathy’ssecondthoughtuponseeingthemoneywasthatthiswassufficienttodocharity.Shedidn’tbotherconsideringkeepingthemoneyherself.Itjustdidn’tfeelrighttokeepitforanyreason.Regardlessofhowmuchgoodshethoughtshemightbeabletodowiththemoney,Catchydecidedthattheonlyrealisticchoicelefttoherwastoreturnittoitsowner.
LuckilyforCathy,thebookalsocontainedthenameofthebookowner.Usingthisname,Cathymightbeabletofinditsrightfulowner.Still,itwouldtakealittledigging.Thankfully,thebook’spreviousownerhappenedtohaveaprettyunusuallastname.ThismadeCathy’sInternetsearchmucheasier.Afteronlyabouttenminutesonline,Cathyfoundthem.Themoneybelongedtoaman.SothankfulwasheforCathy’shonestythatheactuallyendedupdonatingagenerousamounttoVNSAtoshowhisgratitude.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达考查读后续写。
【详解】1.通读全文,读懂原文。
通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题,即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。
2.构思情节,谋篇布局。
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性,构思好情节发展,发展须符合情节内在的逻辑.应该符合现实发生的真实性。
第一段围绕Cathy捡到钱后的心理活动;第二段续Cathy如何寻找钱的主人。
3.理清逻辑,优化语言。
这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑,写作不必追求高大上的词汇,相反,朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语.不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格,必须采用适当的描写侧重点.续写要抓住续这一核心,按照情节的发展进行延续,写作手法上必须以叙为主,描写上以动作描写为重心,情节的发展合乎逻辑地推进。
【点睛】续写部分描写详略得当,且使用了大量高级词汇和高级句子,如sufficient,botherdoingsth.foranyreason;regardlessof;realistic;以及Whoeverhadownedthebookhadchosentohide$4,000insidethebook.使用了主语从句;Cathy’ssecondthoughtuponseeingthemoneywasthatthiswassufficienttodocharity.使用了动名词短语和表语从句,为文章增色不少。
2021届湖南省湖南师大附中高三月考(三)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
JackandRoseweresittingfacetoface.Atthismoment,thelandlordcameinandasked,“Areyousureyoudonotrentthehouseanymore?
”Hekeptsilentandsheonlyshookherhead.Theyweregoingtodivorce,soitwasobviousthattheywouldnotcontinuerentingthehouseanymore.
Thenthelandlordbeganexaminingthehouse.Afterlookingaround,hescreamed,“Goddamn!
Seehowyouhaveruinedmyhouse?
Thewallsarefullofnails!
HowcouldIrentthehousetoothers?
"
Jacksaid,"Theroomistoosmallandcanhardlyaccommodateallloadsofourstuff.Sowecouldonlyhangthemonthewalls."Thelandlorddidnotlistentohimandturnedarounduptothefloor.
Rosebeganlookingaroundherfamiliarroom.Fouryearsago,shebecamehisbridehere.Onthenightoftheirmarriage,hefeltdeeplyguiltytoher,saying,“Ifeelsosorryforyouforhavingyouliveinthissmallroom.InthefutureIwillearnalotofmoneytobuyourownhouse.”
Theroomwasonly13squaremeterswithtwonailsonthewallnexttothedoor,oneforhertohangherbagandtheotherforhangingumbrellas.Atthattime,shethrewallherstuffsuchasherbagandumbrellaontheflooroncesheenteredtheroom,staringatthewholemessandfeelingterriblyupset.
Therewerethreenailsontheleftwall,onwhichhehunghisclothesyesterday.Aftershelivedintheroom,heremovedalltheclothesboxesandboughtheradeskinthesparedroombecauseheknewshelovedwritinganddrawing.
Therewerefournailsontherightwallthatwereusedtofixtheirweddingphotoframe.Butnowtherewereonlyfournailswithouttheframe.Shestillrememberedhegothurtonhisfingerswhentryingtodrivethenailshome.Itwasherwhopushedhimtoreceiveaninjectionagainsttetanus(破伤风)。
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thelandlordtriedtopry(撬动,撬开)thenailsoutwhencomplainingatthesametime.
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Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.
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【答案】Thelandlordtriedtopry(撬动,撬开)thenailsoutwhencomplainingatthesametime.Afterthenailswereremoved,thewallswereleftwithnumerousholes.Seeingthis,Rosefeltharshlyheartbrokenasifherheartwaspiercedthroughthoseholesandbleedingnonstop.Allofasudden,shesprangfromherseatandexclaimed,"Stop!
Stop!
Wewillcontinuerentingthehouse!
”Jacklookedatherwithgreatsurprise,andthenturnedround,tearsoverhisface.
Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedRose,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme?
”Shedustedtheashoffherhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,“Yes!
Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive."Rosefinallycametounderstandthattheirmarriagewaslikeawallfullofnumerousholes.Butifallthenailswerestillintheirownplaces,thewallwasstillundamagedandreliable.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文。
文章讲述了Jack和Rose这一对夫妻由于决定离婚而不再租赁房东的房子,房东抱怨他们把房子的墙上钉了太多的钉子。
他们开始回忆房间里这些钉子的来历以及它们背后的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“房东一边抱怨一边试图把钉子撬出来。
”可知,第一段应该描写钉子被拔出来以后发生的事情,可以写Jack和Rose在钉子被拔出来以后的心理感受以及所做出的反应。
由于下一段的开头是“Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.(他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。
)”可知,续写的第一段中应该写出他们最终决定和好,重新租回房子。
②由第二段首句内容“他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。
”可知,第二段应描写他们和好以后的事情,并且为不离婚的决定给出一个合理的解释。
2.续写线索:
(房东)拔钉子——伤心——决定续租——重新挂东西——复合原因——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.大叫,呼喊:
exclaim/shoutloudly/yell
②.突然起身:
spring/standupsuddenly
③.续租:
continuerenting/continuetorent
情绪类
①.伤心,心碎:
harshlyheartbroken/Extremelysad
②.惊讶地:
withgreatsurprise/inshock
③.愿意做:
bewillingtodosth./wouldratherdosth.
【点睛】[高分句型1].Jacklookedatherwithgreatsurpriseandthenturnedround,tearsoverhisface.(tearsoverhisface是独立主格结构作伴随状语)
[高分句型2].Shedustedtheashoffherhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,“Yes!
Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive."
(saying是现在分词作伴随状语)
2021届湖南省雅礼中学2021届高三月考(三)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
WorkisaveryimportantpartoflifeintheUnitedStates.Whentheearlyimmigrantscametothiscountry
theybroughttheideathatworkwasthewaytoGodandheaven.ThisattitudestillinfluencesAmericatoday.Workisnotonlyimportantforthesalary,butalsoforsocialandpsychologicalworking,beingproductive.FormostAmericans,theyarewhattheydo.Whathappens,then,whenapersonretiresattheageofsixty-fiveorseventy?
It’seasytoimaginethatretirementisnoeasything.Retireesoftenfeeltheyareunproductiveandnolongerneededbyothers.
Oncepeopleretire,theymayalsogetintofinancialtrouble.ManypeoplerelyonSocialSecuritycheckseverymonth.Duringtheirworkingyears,employeescontributeacertainpercentageoftheirsalariestothegovernment.Whenpeopleretire,theyreceivethismoneyasincome.Thesechecksdonotprovideenoughmoneytoliveon,however,becausepricesareincreasingveryrapidly.Afterretirement,theyhavetochangetheirlifestyles.Theyhavetospendcarefullytobesurethattheycanaffordtobuyfood,fuel,andothernecessities.
Ofcourse,notallseniorcitizensfeelsadwhentheyareinfaceofretirement.Workingforsomanyyears,theyeventuallyhavetimetospendwiththeirfamiliesortoenjoytheirhobbiessuchasreading,travelingorjoiningsomeseniorcitizenclubs.Somecontinuetoworkparttime;otherschoosetodovolunteerworklikehelpingyoungpeopletogetstartedinnewbusiness.
Americangovernmentistakingstepstoeasetheproblemsofretiredpeople.Theyarebuildingnewhousing,offeringdiscountsinstoresandmuseumsan