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2021高三英语湖南省上学期月考读后续写汇编(含详解)

2021届湖南省衡阳市第一中学高三上学期第二次月考

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Thereareanumberofvolunteerorganizationsouttherethatdealinthingslikeclothingdonationandthesaleofusedbooks.RetiredschoolteacherCathyhasbeenamemberofsuchanorganization,VNSA,since2012.HerdutiesinvolveworkingthroughouttheyeartohelppreparethebooksfortheirFebruarysaleandactingaspersonnelmanagerforthesale.Thatmeansshehelpscoordinate(协调)alltheothervolunteerswhohelpoutbefore,during,andaftertheevent.

Itwasbeforethe2019booksaleandCathyonceagainfoundherselfsittingamongatoweringpileofbooksandsortingthroughthemtoensurethattheywouldbeingoodenoughconditiontoresell.Asshewassorting,shecameuponabook,wrinkledandbroken.Thoughshedidn’tlikedoingit,theonlyremainingchoiceforherwastothrowitaway.

Agreedybookloverherself,Cathyfeltguiltyaboutthrowingawayanybook.Beforeshethrewitaway,shedecidedtocheckformoreseriousdamageinsidethatmightjustifyhergivingitup.Sheopenedthecoverandwentthroughthepageswhenshenoticedsomethingunusual.

Goingthroughthepages,Cathywassurprisedtoseethataparthadbeenhollowedout(挖空)insidethebook.Obviously,somethingwashiddeninthatratherexpertlyhollowedspace.Shelookeddownandsawthatthebook’spreviousownerhadhiddenfourpackagesinthespace,eachcontainingten$100bills.Cathy’sfirstthoughtwasthatthebillsweretoymoneythatperhapsakidhadhiddeninsideaspartofsomechildishgameorsomething.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ButCathysoonrealizedthatthesewerereal$100bills.

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LuckilyforCathy,thebookalsocontainedthenameofthebookowner.

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【答案】ButCathysoonrealizedthatthesewerereal$100bills.Whoeverhadownedthebookhadchosentohide$4,000insidethebook.Cathy’ssecondthoughtuponseeingthemoneywasthatthiswassufficienttodocharity.Shedidn’tbotherconsideringkeepingthemoneyherself.Itjustdidn’tfeelrighttokeepitforanyreason.Regardlessofhowmuchgoodshethoughtshemightbeabletodowiththemoney,Catchydecidedthattheonlyrealisticchoicelefttoherwastoreturnittoitsowner.

LuckilyforCathy,thebookalsocontainedthenameofthebookowner.Usingthisname,Cathymightbeabletofinditsrightfulowner.Still,itwouldtakealittledigging.Thankfully,thebook’spreviousownerhappenedtohaveaprettyunusuallastname.ThismadeCathy’sInternetsearchmucheasier.Afteronlyabouttenminutesonline,Cathyfoundthem.Themoneybelongedtoaman.SothankfulwasheforCathy’shonestythatheactuallyendedupdonatingagenerousamounttoVNSAtoshowhisgratitude.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达考查读后续写。

【详解】1.通读全文,读懂原文。

通读全文首先要解决好五个W和一个H的问题,即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。

2.构思情节,谋篇布局。

按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性,构思好情节发展,发展须符合情节内在的逻辑.应该符合现实发生的真实性。

第一段围绕Cathy捡到钱后的心理活动;第二段续Cathy如何寻找钱的主人。

3.理清逻辑,优化语言。

这一部分侧重点为语言逻辑,写作不必追求高大上的词汇,相反,朴实自然、地道、贴切的词语便是好的词语.不同的写作对象应采用不同的语言风格,必须采用适当的描写侧重点.续写要抓住续这一核心,按照情节的发展进行延续,写作手法上必须以叙为主,描写上以动作描写为重心,情节的发展合乎逻辑地推进。

【点睛】续写部分描写详略得当,且使用了大量高级词汇和高级句子,如sufficient,botherdoingsth.foranyreason;regardlessof;realistic;以及Whoeverhadownedthebookhadchosentohide$4,000insidethebook.使用了主语从句;Cathy’ssecondthoughtuponseeingthemoneywasthatthiswassufficienttodocharity.使用了动名词短语和表语从句,为文章增色不少。

2021届湖南省湖南师大附中高三月考(三)

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

JackandRoseweresittingfacetoface.Atthismoment,thelandlordcameinandasked,“Areyousureyoudonotrentthehouseanymore?

”Hekeptsilentandsheonlyshookherhead.Theyweregoingtodivorce,soitwasobviousthattheywouldnotcontinuerentingthehouseanymore.

Thenthelandlordbeganexaminingthehouse.Afterlookingaround,hescreamed,“Goddamn!

Seehowyouhaveruinedmyhouse?

Thewallsarefullofnails!

HowcouldIrentthehousetoothers?

"

Jacksaid,"Theroomistoosmallandcanhardlyaccommodateallloadsofourstuff.Sowecouldonlyhangthemonthewalls."Thelandlorddidnotlistentohimandturnedarounduptothefloor.

Rosebeganlookingaroundherfamiliarroom.Fouryearsago,shebecamehisbridehere.Onthenightoftheirmarriage,hefeltdeeplyguiltytoher,saying,“Ifeelsosorryforyouforhavingyouliveinthissmallroom.InthefutureIwillearnalotofmoneytobuyourownhouse.”

Theroomwasonly13squaremeterswithtwonailsonthewallnexttothedoor,oneforhertohangherbagandtheotherforhangingumbrellas.Atthattime,shethrewallherstuffsuchasherbagandumbrellaontheflooroncesheenteredtheroom,staringatthewholemessandfeelingterriblyupset.

Therewerethreenailsontheleftwall,onwhichhehunghisclothesyesterday.Aftershelivedintheroom,heremovedalltheclothesboxesandboughtheradeskinthesparedroombecauseheknewshelovedwritinganddrawing.

Therewerefournailsontherightwallthatwereusedtofixtheirweddingphotoframe.Butnowtherewereonlyfournailswithouttheframe.Shestillrememberedhegothurtonhisfingerswhentryingtodrivethenailshome.Itwasherwhopushedhimtoreceiveaninjectionagainsttetanus(破伤风)。

注意:

1.续写词数应为150左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thelandlordtriedtopry(撬动,撬开)thenailsoutwhencomplainingatthesametime.

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Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.

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【答案】Thelandlordtriedtopry(撬动,撬开)thenailsoutwhencomplainingatthesametime.Afterthenailswereremoved,thewallswereleftwithnumerousholes.Seeingthis,Rosefeltharshlyheartbrokenasifherheartwaspiercedthroughthoseholesandbleedingnonstop.Allofasudden,shesprangfromherseatandexclaimed,"Stop!

Stop!

Wewillcontinuerentingthehouse!

”Jacklookedatherwithgreatsurprise,andthenturnedround,tearsoverhisface.

Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedRose,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme?

”Shedustedtheashoffherhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,“Yes!

Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive."Rosefinallycametounderstandthattheirmarriagewaslikeawallfullofnumerousholes.Butifallthenailswerestillintheirownplaces,thewallwasstillundamagedandreliable.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇记叙文。

文章讲述了Jack和Rose这一对夫妻由于决定离婚而不再租赁房东的房子,房东抱怨他们把房子的墙上钉了太多的钉子。

他们开始回忆房间里这些钉子的来历以及它们背后的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“房东一边抱怨一边试图把钉子撬出来。

”可知,第一段应该描写钉子被拔出来以后发生的事情,可以写Jack和Rose在钉子被拔出来以后的心理感受以及所做出的反应。

由于下一段的开头是“Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.(他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。

)”可知,续写的第一段中应该写出他们最终决定和好,重新租回房子。

②由第二段首句内容“他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。

”可知,第二段应描写他们和好以后的事情,并且为不离婚的决定给出一个合理的解释。

2.续写线索:

(房东)拔钉子——伤心——决定续租——重新挂东西——复合原因——感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.大叫,呼喊:

exclaim/shoutloudly/yell

②.突然起身:

spring/standupsuddenly

③.续租:

continuerenting/continuetorent

情绪类

①.伤心,心碎:

harshlyheartbroken/Extremelysad

②.惊讶地:

withgreatsurprise/inshock

③.愿意做:

bewillingtodosth./wouldratherdosth.

【点睛】[高分句型1].Jacklookedatherwithgreatsurpriseandthenturnedround,tearsoverhisface.(tearsoverhisface是独立主格结构作伴随状语)

[高分句型2].Shedustedtheashoffherhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,“Yes!

Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive."

(saying是现在分词作伴随状语)

2021届湖南省雅礼中学2021届高三月考(三)

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

WorkisaveryimportantpartoflifeintheUnitedStates.Whentheearlyimmigrantscametothiscountry

theybroughttheideathatworkwasthewaytoGodandheaven.ThisattitudestillinfluencesAmericatoday.Workisnotonlyimportantforthesalary,butalsoforsocialandpsychologicalworking,beingproductive.FormostAmericans,theyarewhattheydo.Whathappens,then,whenapersonretiresattheageofsixty-fiveorseventy?

It’seasytoimaginethatretirementisnoeasything.Retireesoftenfeeltheyareunproductiveandnolongerneededbyothers.

Oncepeopleretire,theymayalsogetintofinancialtrouble.ManypeoplerelyonSocialSecuritycheckseverymonth.Duringtheirworkingyears,employeescontributeacertainpercentageoftheirsalariestothegovernment.Whenpeopleretire,theyreceivethismoneyasincome.Thesechecksdonotprovideenoughmoneytoliveon,however,becausepricesareincreasingveryrapidly.Afterretirement,theyhavetochangetheirlifestyles.Theyhavetospendcarefullytobesurethattheycanaffordtobuyfood,fuel,andothernecessities.

Ofcourse,notallseniorcitizensfeelsadwhentheyareinfaceofretirement.Workingforsomanyyears,theyeventuallyhavetimetospendwiththeirfamiliesortoenjoytheirhobbiessuchasreading,travelingorjoiningsomeseniorcitizenclubs.Somecontinuetoworkparttime;otherschoosetodovolunteerworklikehelpingyoungpeopletogetstartedinnewbusiness.

Americangovernmentistakingstepstoeasetheproblemsofretiredpeople.Theyarebuildingnewhousing,offeringdiscountsinstoresandmuseumsan

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