高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作基础试题分析及评分标准.docx

1、高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作基础试题分析及评分标准高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作基础试题分析及评分标准（课程代码0597）I .重写句子（15 points, 1.5 points each）Revise the following sentences according to the requirement. Example: The history of English words is the history of our civilization in many ways. (periodic sentence )In many ways, the history

2、 of English words is the history of our civilization. 1. I like roller-skating. I like ice-skating better. (compound sentence )2. If you sit by the window facing the sun on a sunny winter day, you may feel nice and warm. (loose sentence)3. Mary put the steak on the grill. The charcoal was burning ev

3、enly. (complex sentence )4. His valuable papers were destroyed in the fire. Tom called the insurance company. (complex sentence )5. I asked my friend if we should tip the driver when the bus tour ended. (periodic sentence )6. Your uncle married my aunt. He is rich. She is poor. (simple sentence )7.

4、Jerry is smart. He should be able to handle eighteen credits this semester. (compound sentence )8. I returned to school following a long illness. The math teacher gave me make-up work to do, but the history teacher made me drop her course. (compound-complex sentence )9. Jack applied for a job. He we

5、nt for an interview. He was hired. (parallel structure )10. Meet me in the courtyard for dessert when you finish doing the dishes. (periodic sentence )II. 改写病句（15 points, 3 points each ）Correct the errors in the following sentences. Example: After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television. I re

6、solved never to buy that brand again. After seeing an offensive mouthwash ad on television, I resolved never to buy that brand again. 11.The rain might last for a while, clouds covered the entire sky. 12.In the evening we would swim in the lake and dancing afterward. 13.That woman just bought her do

7、g a milk shake in a red skirt. 14.To pass the course, your term paper must be handed in on time. 15.Harry wouldnt make a good negotiator he doesnt have the patience. III.标出主题句（15 points,5 points each ）16.Choose the best topic sentence from the group below. Write the choice in the blank.A. I eat a lo

8、t of homemade ice cream.B. Homemade ice cream is my favorite.C. I have a homemade ice cream maker.D. I miss homemade ice cream a lot.Answer: 17.Read the following paragraph and underline the topic sentence. Tornados form under very special weather conditions, and these special weather conditions occ

9、ur most often in inland areas, such as the central United States. A tornado forms when a layer of warm, dry air is on top of a layer of cooler, moist air. This combination of dry, warm air above wet, cool air creates a condition that causes the lower layer of air to lift up. As the lower air rises,

10、both layers of air begin to rotate, to turn around and around. The air begins to rotate faster and faster because of centrifugal (离心的) force. The tornado has a center called an “eye” and the air rotates quickly around this eye.18. Read the following paragraph carefully and select the best topic sent

11、ence from the four possible answers that follow the paragraph. Topic Sentence: First, I have the whole week off from the stationery store because its going to be closed. My friends are all staying in town, so there will be plenty to do. Well go to Central Park during the day and rent movies or go do

12、wntown in the evenings. Ive also saved enough money to visit my cousin in Buffalo for a couple of days, and we always have a good time together. This could be the best Easter week I would have had in a long time, especially because I dont have to work.A. I am going to have a very long vacation.B. Ea

13、ster is a very important holiday.C. Easter week is going to be terrific.D. I like wonderful holidays. IV.重新组合段落（5 points, 1 point each ）Rearrange the following numbered sentences so that they will read logically. Put the numbers in proper sequence in the boxes provided below.19. Wines must be drunk

14、quickly once they are opened, otherwise bacteria will use the air to convert the alcohol to vinegar.20. Red wine is made from dark grapes, and white wine from white grapes or from dark grapes whose skins have been removed from the wine press at an early stage.21. Wine is the fermented juice of fresh

15、 grapes.22. The bacteria are killed by a higher alcohol content than is found in wine and that is why sherry and port, the specialties of Spain and Portugal, are fortified by the addition of spirits to make them last longer.23. Wine was made in England in the Middle Ages, but the climate is not real

16、ly suitable for grapevines.24. In winemaking, the grapes are crushed in a wine press and the yeast converts the sugar to alcohol, when there is no air present, by a process called fermentation.25. The most famous winemaking countries are France, Germany and Italy.26. The juice of the wine grape contains sugar, and growths of yeast form on the outside of the grape skins.202