雅思写作完全攻略TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting上海新东方.docx

1、雅思写作完全攻略TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting上海新东方雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国雅思考试作文某些题型题型分值字数规定建议时间小作文图表作文(Report)1/3150words20mins大作文议论文(Essay)2/3250words40mins学时安排：Marking System Essay WritingIntroduction Body Conclusion Structure Report Writing 近年雅思考试中华人民共和国大陆考区作文某些得分状况(From Mat Clark)Band4

2、or below：15%-20% Band5：60% Band6：15%-20% Band7：句型转换详细化(5) Some people believe that scientific research should be conducted by the government rather by private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(.12.10)Some people propose that_Language Skill:句型转换 (办法4 )(6). In modern society，there ar

3、e more and more old people，do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages?(.2.12)_Language Skill：信息量偏少Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法 Factor(s) 因Phenomenon (Subject) 果2. 总论点(Statement)TopicIf children behave badly，should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?Average Example：In m

4、y opinion，the parents should not be punished.Decent Example：In my opinion，the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.TopicSome people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others f

5、eel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion. (.6.24)From my point of view，it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools _Exercise1：TopicShould college students be allowed to get married?_Language Skill：句型转换 (办法5 ) Exercise2：TopicShou

6、ld college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs?_Language Skill：句型转换 (办法6 )3. ReportIntroduction写作对策 Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out while people have noticed this problem for a long time. Why people do little action about it?Give your suggestion

7、s on how to solve this situation. (.12.3)Today，the phenomenon that _has aroused growing concern. In my opinion，a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article，I would like to _*This phenomenon，as far as I am concerned，can be attributed to the following causes，which could be regarded a

8、s the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A：Essay Statement Plan B：Linking SentenceExercise1：The development of technologies is causing environmental problems. Some people believe that the solution is for everyone t

9、o adopt a simpler way of life while others say that technologies can solve these problems. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (.2.12)Exercise2：TopicPressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to study hard when they are young. Do you regar

10、d the phenomenon as positive or negative?(.4.2)Exercise3：TopicToday，in many countries，there is insufficient respect to old people. What are the reasons?What problems it might cause?(.7.8)欢迎光临俞教师BLOG： Part TwoBody中流砥柱Version 6.5分论点规定：1. 字数规定：One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原

11、则：(1). 内容原则： 分论点应当体现为一种_并且与总论点为_关系。Example：Topic- Transnational marriageStatement：The problems that transnational marriage may bring about greatly outweigh its benefits.Supporting Idea：Marriage should be based on true love. (X)_Language Skill：因果关系高分句型主语，+非限制性定语从句(描述主语特性/因)，+谓语(+宾语)(由主语特性所导致effect/果)

12、(2).语言原则：分论点语言规定简洁概括书面语。Example：Topic- Raising pets If we raise pets，we must spend a lot of time to take care of them and we also have to spend a lot of money to feed them，so its not good. (X) _(3). 构思原则：分论点应当具备实质性详细内容，避免使用大而空泛概念。Example：Topic- GlobalizationGlobalization is beneficial for the develo

13、pment of the society. (X) Globalization brings about fierce competition，hence stimulates local companies in developing countries to take the initiative to improve the quality of their products. (4). 比较原则：在具备比较性质Topic中，分论点应当体现主体特性而非共性。Example：Topic- Some people think children can have better educatio

14、n in boarding schools far from home，while others claim that a day school is a better one. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion. Students can learn a lot of valuable knowledge in boarding schools. (X) Boarding schools can better cultivate the students independence and practical hands-on

15、ability.分论点构思四大黄金原则1.经济原则Should college students be allowed to get married?Getting married in such an early age would impose a heavy financial burden on the college students lives and in turn brings negative effects to their studies.More and more measures have been taken to improve security and reduce crime in urban areas. Do you think its benefits outweigh its drawbacks?You should list your reasons in your essay. (.2.25) (1). Adopting more security measures creates a safer and more stable social environment by reducing crime，_(2). Adoptin