雅思写作完全攻略TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting上海新东方.docx

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雅思写作完全攻略TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting上海新东方

雅思写作完全攻略

TotalSolutionofIELTSWriting

俞伟国

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雅思考试作文某些题型

题型

分值

字数规定

建议时间

小作文

图表作文（Report）

1/3

>150words

20mins

大作文

议论文（Essay）

2/3

>250words

40mins

学时安排：

MarkingSystem

EssayWriting

Introduction

Body

Conclusion

Structure

ReportWriting

近年雅思考试中华人民共和国大陆考区作文某些得分状况（FromMatClark）

Band4orbelow：

15%-20%Band5：

60%Band6：

15%-20%Band7：

<5%Band8orabove：

Rare

KeyLanguageFeaturesinMarkingSystem

TaskResponse：

1.Noevidenceofdigression/irrelevantcontent

2.AdequateWords

3.Position+SupportingIdeas+Development

CoherenceandCohesion

1.Logicaloverallstructure

2.TopicSentence

3.Cohesivedevices

LexicalResource

1.Accurateness

2.AuthenticVocabulary（Less-commonVocabulary）

3.Variety

GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy

1.Accurateness

2.ComplexSentence

3.Variety

ChapterOne－EssayWriting

第一章.议论文完全攻略

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

PartOne－Introduction

－闪亮开篇－

－Version5.7－

StructureofIntroduction

1.BackgroundInformation

（1）.Lead-inSentence（Introducethesubjectofthetopic）

（2）.PublicOpinion

2.Statement（Stateyourposition）

1．主体背景（BackgroundInformation）

（1）Inthelastcentury，thefirstmanwalkingonthemoonsaid：

“Itisabigstepformankind”.However，somepeoplethinkitmadelittledifferencetopeople’slives.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

（.4.8）

______________________________，when________________________________________________________________

forthefirsttime，he_____________________________________________________thatitwasagreatstepformankind.Nowadays，however，somepeoplebelievethatitactually_____________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

Paraphrase办法之一－详细化（笼统概念－缩小范畴）

（2）Foodcanbeproducedmuchmorecheaplytodaybecauseofimprovedfertilizersandbettermachinery.However，somepeoplethinkthemethodsusedtodothismayhavenegativeeffectsonlocalcommunitiesandbedangeroustohumanhealth.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

（.2.5）

Nowadayspeoplecan_______________foodfarmore________________________________________more_______________fertilizersandmachinery.Nevertheless，somepeopleholdthemethodsusedmay____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

Paraphrase办法之二－单词转换（优先考虑三大词类：

）

Paraphrase办法之三－句型转换（办法1）

（办法2）

（3）Manypeoplesayteachersshouldonlyteachstudentsacademicsubjects；Otherssayteachersshouldalsotaketheresponsibilityofteachingstudentstojudgewhatisrightandwrong.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyourownopinion.（.3.18）

Somepeopleholdtheopinionthat_______________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

Whilesomearguethat_________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

句型转换（办法3）

（4）Somepeoplebelievethatairtravelshouldbeprohibitedasitusesupfuelresourcesandcausespollution.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?

Youshoulduseyourownexperiencetosupportyourargument.（.2.18）

Accordingtosome__________，airtravelshouldbe_________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

Paraphrase思路顺序：

单词转换>句型转换>详细化

（5）Somepeoplebelievethatscientificresearchshouldbeconductedbythegovernmentratherbyprivatecompanies.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

（.12.10）

Somepeopleproposethat______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill:

句型转换（办法4）

（6）.Inmodernsociety，therearemoreandmoreoldpeople，doyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighitsdisadvantages?

（.2.12）

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

信息量偏少TopicIntroduction写作对策

追根溯源法－Factor（s）[因]－Phenomenon（Subject）[果]

2.总论点（Statement）

Topic－Ifchildrenbehavebadly，shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished?

AverageExample：

Inmyopinion，theparentsshouldnotbepunished.

DecentExample：

Inmyopinion，theparentsshouldnotbepunishedexceptthat（unless）theyarethosewhopurposefullyteachthechildtobehavebadly.

Topic－Somepeoplethinkthatitisbeneficialforstudentstogotoprivatesecondaryschools.Butothersfeelthatithasnegativeeffectsonthem.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyouropinion.（.6.24）

Frommypointofview，itisanidealchoicetosendchildrentoprivatemiddleschools______________________________

Exercise1：

Topic－Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

句型转换（办法5）

Exercise2：

Topic－Shouldcollegestudentsbeencouragedtotakeuppart-timejobs?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

句型转换（办法6）

3.Report－Introduction写作对策

Fartoolittlehasbeendonetopreventanimalsandplantsfromdyingoutwhilepeoplehavenoticedthisproblemforalongtime.Whypeopledolittleactionaboutit?

Giveyoursuggestionsonhowtosolvethissituation.（.12.3）

Today，thephenomenonthat____________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________hasarousedgrowingconcern.

Inmyopinion，alotoffactorscontributetotheproblemandinthisarticle，Iwouldliketo___________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

*Thisphenomenon，asfarasIamconcerned，canbeattributedtothefollowingcauses，whichcouldberegardedastheappleofdiscord.

StructureofReportIntroduction

1.Lead-inSentence（Paraphrasethefirstsentenceinthetopic）

2.PlanA：

EssayStatement

PlanB：

LinkingSentence

Exercise1：

Thedevelopmentoftechnologiesiscausingenvironmentalproblems.Somepeoplebelievethatthesolutionisforeveryonetoadoptasimplerwayoflifewhileotherssaythattechnologiescansolvetheseproblems.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyourownopinion.（.2.12）

Exercise2：

Topic－Pressureontheschoolanduniversitystudentsisincreasingandstudentsarepushedtostudyhardwhentheyareyoung.Doyouregardthephenomenonaspositiveornegative?

（.4.2）

Exercise3：

Topic－Today，inmanycountries，thereisinsufficientrespecttooldpeople.Whatarethereasons?

Whatproblemsitmightcause?

（.7.8）

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PartTwo－Body

－中流砥柱－

－Version6.5－

分论点规定：

1.字数规定：

Onecomplexsentencepreferred.Around20words.

2.分论点四项基本原则：

（1）.内容原则：

分论点应当体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。

Example：

Topic-Transnationalmarriage

Statement：

Theproblemsthattransnationalmarriagemaybringaboutgreatlyoutweighitsbenefits.

SupportingIdea：

Marriageshouldbebasedontruelove.（X）

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

LanguageSkill：

因果关系高分句型－主语，+非限制性定语从句（描述主语特性/因），+谓语（+宾语）（由主语特性所导致effect/果）

（2）.语言原则：

分论点语言规定简洁概括书面语。

Example：

Topic-Raisingpets

①Ifweraisepets，wemustspendalotoftimetotakecareofthemandwealsohavetospendalotofmoneytofeedthem，soit’snotgood.（X）

②________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

（3）.构思原则：

分论点应当具备实质性详细内容，避免使用大而空泛概念。

Example：

Topic-Globalization

Globalizationisbeneficialforthedevelopmentofthesociety.（X）

Globalizationbringsaboutfiercecompetition，hencestimulateslocalcompaniesindevelopingcountriestotaketheinitiativetoimprovethequalityoftheirproducts.

（4）.比较原则：

在具备比较性质Topic中，分论点应当体现主体特性而非共性。

Example：

Topic-Somepeoplethinkchildrencanhavebettereducationinboardingschoolsfarfromhome，whileothersclaimthatadayschoolisabetterone.Discussthebothviewpointsandgiveyouropinion.

Studentscanlearnalotofvaluableknowledgeinboardingschools.（X）

Boardingschoolscanbettercultivatethestudents’independenceandpracticalhands-onability.

分论点构思四大黄金原则

1.经济原则

Shouldcollegestudentsbeallowedtogetmarried?

Gettingmarriedinsuchanearlyagewouldimposeaheavyfinancialburdenonthecollegestudents’livesandinturnbringsnegativeeffectstotheirstudies.

Moreandmoremeasureshavebeentakentoimprovesecurityandreducecrimeinurbanareas.Doyouthinkitsbenefitsoutweighitsdrawbacks?

Youshouldlistyourreasonsinyouressay.（.2.25）

（1）.Adoptingmoresecuritymeasurescreatesasaferandmorestablesocialenvironmentbyreducingcrime，____________

___________________________________________________________________________________________________

（2）.Adoptin