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1、08一二模作文08一模作文1文段表达 （共15分）昌平 再过三个来月，就要开奥运会了。作为北京的中学生，我们已经为迎奥运做了许多事情。就这个话题，记述一下你在校外曾经做过的、印象最深的一两件事，比如用英语做事情，环境卫生等，并谈谈你的感受或体会。Beijing 2008 Olympic Games, hold, month, lot, example, think注意：请不要写出真实校名和姓名。 _One possible version:Beijing Olympic Games will come in about three months, and we have done a lot

2、to meet it. For example, we have done some cleaning in the neighborhood and removed (cleared up) some rubbish ads in the streets. Once I helped a foreigner who lost his way. I think we are going to show the world a New Beijing and a Great Olympics, well also show that we Chinese are Great people.朝阳2

3、. 2008年奥运会即将来临，全国人民都在为奥运会而努力。某家英文杂志特邀你撰稿。内容包括:你的心情如何？你做了什么有意义的事？奥运会结束后，你打算怎样继续弘扬奥运精神？注意事项：1、内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑, 可适当发挥。2、英文提示词语供选用，词数不少于60。提示词语：Olympic Games, learn a lot , work hard, ready, help, developPossible version Im very excited that the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing and Im proud of

4、my country. I often try my best to do something for it. Every Friday I teach the old people English with my classmates after school. At the same time, I also learn a lot from them. I think I should work harder at my lessons in order to help the old better, even after the Games. Ill be always ready t

5、o help others as usual because the Olympics means to give, to help and to develop together.崇文 看电视已成为我们生活的一部分。 但对我们学生来说看电视也有许多弊端。请就此谈谈你的看法。Useful, harmful, have no time to, be bad for, wear glasses, TV programmes, unhealthyWatching TV has become part of our life. It is useful . Yet, it can also be ha

6、rful. If we spend too much time on it, we may have no time to study or do other important things. It can harm our eyes, too. Some students wear glasses because they watch TV for long hours. Some TV programmes are unhealthy and some students may copy what they see on it. So, I dont often watch TV.大兴

7、世界无烟日(Non-smoking Day)那天,某中学对该校学生吸烟情况进行了一次调查,结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。要求:1. 对调查结果进行描述。2. 说明吸烟对健康的影响。3. 表明自己的看法并提出建议。提示词语:did survey (调查);about . 3of the students; smoke for fun; health; give up; stop One possible version: On Non-smoking Day, a school did a survey to find out how many students smoke. Her

8、e are the results: 3of the students smoke often. (These students say that they just smoke for fun and because they look cool doing it.) Nearly everyone knows that smoking is really bad for everyones health, especially for young people. We students should not smoke. Those who smoke should give up smo

9、king. (And if our family members smoke, we should try to stop them.) Students who have never smoked should never try it.(90w)房山我们大家都有慈爱的父母，在学习和生活中他们给了我们很大的帮助。请谈谈你的父母是怎样关心、帮助你的。你的感想如何?为表达对父母的感激之情，你应该怎样做？ have, kind parents, give, help, study and life, cook, wash, take good care of, encourage, housewo

10、rk, study One possible version:We all have kind parents. They give us help in our study and life. They cook meals and wash clothes for me every day. They will take good care of me all day if I am ill. They are very strict with me and they often help me with my lessons. When I fail in my exam, they a

11、re not angry with me. Instead, they will praise me for my hard work and encourage me to keep on. I think I am the luckiest child in the world and I am very grateful to my parents. In order to return their kindness, I think I should help my parents with housework after I finish doing my homework. And

12、 I can do more cooking and washing. I will study hard and try to make my dream come true. 丰台你校与一所澳洲中学联合举办以“友谊” 为主题的征文交流活动，要求投稿者描述一个自己最好的朋友，介绍在你们的交往过程中他/她对你的帮助，以及你的感受。提示词： my best friend, clever, play together, help, think, happy, friendship, important, A. 15分My best friend is Jin Zimei. Were classma

13、tes. Jin is quite tall. She is good at math. She often helps me with math both in class and after class. When I find a math problem too difficult and go to her for help, she always explains it carefully to me. With her help, I got a better grade in the math test last term. Im very happy to have a fr

14、iend like her. I think friendship is important to me. (80 w) My best friend is Jin Zimei. Were classmates. Jin is kind and very interesting. When Im ill and miss classes, she comes to my home to help me with the lessons. Sometimes Im in trouble and feel sad. Then she tries to talk to me about someth

15、ing interesting and helps me to forget the sad story. Those are just part of the help Ive had from her. She is the person who often thinks about others. Im very happy to have a friend like her. I think friendship is important to me.(92 w)B. 13分My best friend is Jin Zimei. She is tall and clever. She

16、 is good at math. She often helps me with math. We also play together. We both like watching basketball on TV. Yao Ming is our favorite star. We have a good time when we play or talk together. My friend makes me happy. I think friendship is important to me. (62 w) 篇章重心偏移，主要信息点“帮助”叙述不足。怀柔 家长为了使自己的子女健

17、康成长，都会制定这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：每天自己整理房间，按时回家，按时完成作业，不能看太多电视，不准打电子游戏等。请说明你家里有那些家规，并谈谈你对这些家规的看法以及对家长的希望。提示词语：make some rules, clean，by myself, on time, too much, play computer games My Family Rules平谷 北京的2008年奥运会使全国上下掀起健身热潮。工作、学习之余，有的人打球，有的人跳舞。请结合你自己的情况谈谈你最喜欢的健身(keep fit)项目和喜欢它的理由，通过健身你在哪（些）方面发生了变化，你有何感受。提示词语：k

18、eep fit, interesting, in the past, since, begin to do, stronger and stronger, physical training A possible version: Everyone wants to keep fit. So do I. I like playing basketball of all sports. Playing basketball is very interesting. And it can make me keep fit. Besides, when I play it with others,

19、we usually become good friends. In the past, I used to be ill and couldnt go to school. Since I began to play basketball, I have become stronger and stronger. And I also do well in my subjects/study. I think physical training can not only keep us fit, but also help us work or study well. We should k

20、eep on doing it. 石景山 My friendship with MaryIn our lives, we may have many friends. And good friends really mean a lot to us.I have a friend named Mary. She is 12 years old. We are in the same class. She is tall with big black eyes. When we talk about something, she always looks at me, smiling.Two y

21、ears ago, I came to this small town with my parents because my father found a new job here. Everything seemed strange to me when I went to my new school on the first day. I felt very lonely. Just then, Mary came to me. She invited me to play games with her, and we went home together after school. Wh

22、ats more, she often helped me with my poor English. With her help, I made great progress. Can you believe it? Now, I can communicate with foreigners! Mary was so kind and helpful and we became good friends soon. It was Mary who gave me the greatest help when I was new here. A friend in need is a fri

23、end indeed. That is really true. 通州 你的笔友Kate 昨天给你写了一封e-mail, 向你诉说她与好友之间发生了矛盾，相处很不愉快，希望你能帮助她。假如你是刘梅，请你给她回一封e-mail, 告诉她你也有类似的经历，对她的问题提出你的建议，并谈谈你对朋友之间应如何相处的看法。注意事项：1）提示的词汇供选用；2）词数不少于60；3）信的开头和结尾已给出，文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。提示词语：experience, fight, talk, write a letter, help, shareDear Kate,_Best wishes, Liu MeiI

24、can understand you. I have the same experience as you. Friendship is important to us. But the best friends may have fights. I think you need to have an honest talk with her when there is no one around. If she doesnt want to talk, you could write a letter to her. I think as good friends we should lis

25、ten to their complaints when they are in trouble, and do our best to help them. We should make each other happy and share our lives. 宣武 在我们小的时候，父母和老师们就告诉我们要对别人有礼貌，你是如何做的呢？请举出三个以上的例子，并谈谈你对有关讲礼貌的看法和提出建议。提示词语：young, tell, polite, for example, think, the 29th Olympic GamesOne possible version: Our paren

26、ts and teachers told us to be polite to others when we were very young. Now I am doing things as they tell me. For example, I always wait in line while doing shopping and give my seat to the old on the bus. I never forget to greet teachers when I meet them in or out of the school. And I also say the

27、 words “Thank you”, “Sorry” and “Youre welcome” to others whenever necessary.In my opinion, politeness is very important to us all because it can help us not only get on very well with each other, but also make the society better and warmer, especially in the year of 2008, when the 29th Olympic Game

28、s will be held in Beijing. So I strongly suggest that we all should be polite to each other.延庆 假设你叫露西，昨天收到了朋友Nick的e-mail，得知他马上就要期末考试了，但是每次考试之前他总是紧张，不知道做些什么。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍一下你在考试前的一些做法或体会，并提出你的建议。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。）得分提示词语：have a plan, work hard, rest, not to worry, sure Dear Nick,Thanks

29、for your letter. You asked me for some advice about revision(复习). One possible version: Dear Nick,Thanks for your letter. You asked me for some advice about revision(复习). First, I think you should have a good plan. Keep notes of what you want to revise each day. Second, dont try to go over too much

30、at a time. Work hard two or three hours and then have a short rest. Then do some more studying. When I was preparing for my exam, I also tried to eat healthy food and get plenty of sleep. I went for walks and sometimes I met my friends to talk about other things. And last try to keep calm and not to

31、 worry. Im sure youll be fine.(94word) Yours, Lucy 燕山 今年8月8日，奥运会就要在北京召开了。班里准备开展题为“Something I can do for the 2008 Olympic Games”的讨论。请你准备一篇发言稿，谈一谈盼望奥运会在北京召开的心情，说一说作为北京的中学生，你在做什么？你还有什么打算？hold proud help thousands of showaround history try my best Something I can do for the 2008 Olympic GamesThe 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing. As a student in Beijing, Im proud and I think there are a lot of things I can do to help the Olympic Games. During the games, thousands of foreign friends will come to Beijing. So I am p