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08一二模作文
08一模作文
1.文段表达(共15分)昌平
再过三个来月,就要开奥运会了。
作为北京的中学生,我们已经为迎奥运做了许多事情。
就这个话题,记述一下你在校外曾经做过的、印象最深的一两件事,比如用英语做事情,环境卫生等,并谈谈你的感受或体会。
Beijing2008OlympicGames,hold,month,lot,example,think
注意:
请不要写出真实校名和姓名。
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Onepossibleversion:
BeijingOlympicGameswillcomeinaboutthreemonths,andwehavedonealottomeetit.Forexample,wehavedonesomecleaningintheneighborhoodandremoved(clearedup)somerubbishadsinthestreets.OnceIhelpedaforeignerwholosthisway.IthinkwearegoingtoshowtheworldaNewBeijingandaGreatOlympics,we’llalsoshowthatweChineseareGreatpeople.
朝阳2.2008年奥运会即将来临,全国人民都在为奥运会而努力。
某家英文杂志特邀你撰稿。
内容包括:
你的心情如何?
你做了什么有意义的事?
奥运会结束后,你打算怎样继续弘扬奥运精神?
注意事项:
1、内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑,可适当发挥。
2、英文提示词语供选用,词数不少于60。
提示词语:
OlympicGames,learnalot,workhard,ready,help,develop
Possibleversion
I’mveryexcitedthatthe2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijingandI’mproudofmycountry.Ioftentrymybesttodosomethingforit.EveryFridayIteachtheoldpeopleEnglishwithmyclassmatesafterschool.Atthesametime,Ialsolearnalotfromthem.IthinkIshouldworkharderatmylessonsinordertohelptheoldbetter,evenaftertheGames.I’llbealwaysreadytohelpothersasusualbecausetheOlympicsmeanstogive,tohelpandtodeveloptogether.
崇文看电视已成为我们生活的一部分。
但对我们学生来说看电视也有许多弊端。
请就此谈谈你的看法。
Useful,harmful,havenotimeto…,bebadfor…,wearglasses,TVprogrammes,unhealthy
WatchingTVhasbecomepartofourlife.Itisuseful.Yet,itcanalsobeharful.Ifwespendtoomuchtimeonit,wemayhavenotimetostudyordootherimportantthings.Itcanharmoureyes,too.SomestudentswearglassesbecausetheywatchTVforlonghours.SomeTVprogrammesareunhealthyandsomestudentsmaycopywhattheyseeonit.So,Idon’toftenwatchTV.
大兴"世界无烟日"(Non-smokingDay)那天,某中学对该校学生吸烟情况进行了一次调查,结果如图所示。
请就此话题用英语写一篇短文。
要求:
1.对调查结果进行描述。
2.说明吸烟对健康的影响。
3.表明自己的看法并提出建议。
提示词语:
didsurvey(调查);about...3%ofthestudents;smokeforfun;health;giveup;stop
Onepossibleversion:
OnNon-smokingDay,aschooldidasurveytofindouthowmanystudentssmoke.Herearetheresults:
3%ofthestudentssmokeoften.(Thesestudentssaythattheyjustsmokeforfunandbecausetheylookcooldoingit.)Nearlyeveryoneknowsthatsmokingisreallybadforeveryone’shealth,especiallyforyoungpeople.Westudentsshouldnotsmoke.Thosewhosmokeshouldgiveupsmoking.(Andifourfamilymemberssmoke,weshouldtrytostopthem.)Studentswhohaveneversmokedshouldnevertryit.(90w)
房山 我们大家都有慈爱的父母,在学习和生活中他们给了我们很大的帮助。
请谈谈你的父母是怎样关心、帮助你的。
你的感想如何?
为表达对父母的感激之情,你应该怎样做?
have,kindparents,give,help,studyandlife,cook,wash,takegoodcareof,encourage,housework,study
Onepossibleversion:
Weallhavekindparents.Theygiveushelpinourstudyandlife.Theycookmealsandwashclothesformeeveryday.TheywilltakegoodcareofmealldayifIamill.Theyareverystrictwithmeandtheyoftenhelpmewithmylessons.WhenIfailinmyexam,theyarenotangrywithme.Instead,theywillpraisemeformyhardworkandencouragemetokeepon.
IthinkIamtheluckiestchildintheworldandIamverygratefultomyparents.Inordertoreturntheirkindness,IthinkIshouldhelpmyparentswithhouseworkafterIfinishdoingmyhomework.AndIcandomorecookingandwashing.Iwillstudyhardandtrytomakemydreamcometrue.
丰台 你校与一所澳洲中学联合举办以“友谊”为主题的征文交流活动,要求投稿者描述一个自己最好的朋友,介绍在你们的交往过程中他/她对你的帮助,以及你的感受。
提示词:
mybestfriend,clever,playtogether,help,think,happy,friendship,important,
A.15分
MybestfriendisJinZimei.We’reclassmates.Jinisquitetall.Sheisgoodatmath.Sheoftenhelpsmewithmathbothinclassandafterclass.WhenIfindamathproblemtoodifficultandgotoherforhelp,shealwaysexplainsitcarefullytome.Withherhelp,Igotabettergradeinthemathtestlastterm.
I’mveryhappytohaveafriendlikeher.Ithinkfriendshipisimportanttome.
(80w)
MybestfriendisJinZimei.We’reclassmates.Jiniskindandveryinteresting.WhenI’millandmissclasses,shecomestomyhometohelpmewiththelessons.SometimesI’mintroubleandfeelsad.Thenshetriestotalktomeaboutsomethinginterestingandhelpsmetoforgetthesadstory.ThosearejustpartofthehelpI’vehadfromher.Sheisthepersonwhooftenthinksaboutothers.
I’mveryhappytohaveafriendlikeher.Ithinkfriendshipisimportanttome.
(92w)
B.13分
MybestfriendisJinZimei.Sheistallandclever.Sheisgoodatmath.Sheoftenhelpsmewithmath.
Wealsoplaytogether.WebothlikewatchingbasketballonTV.YaoMingisourfavoritestar.Wehaveagoodtimewhenweplayortalktogether.
Myfriendmakesmehappy.Ithinkfriendshipisimportanttome.(62w)
篇章重心偏移,主要信息点“帮助”叙述不足。
怀柔家长为了使自己的子女健康成长,都会制定这样或那样的家庭规矩。
比如:
每天自己整理房间,按时回家,按时完成作业,不能看太多电视,不准打电子游戏等。
请说明你家里有那些家规,并谈谈你对这些家规的看法以及对家长的希望。
提示词语:
makesomerules,clean,bymyself,ontime,toomuch,playcomputergames
MyFamilyRules
平谷北京的2008年奥运会使全国上下掀起健身热潮。
工作、学习之余,有的
人打球,有的人跳舞……。
请结合你自己的情况谈谈你最喜欢的健身(keepfit)项目和喜欢它的理由,通过健身你在哪(些)方面发生了变化,你有何感受。
提示词语:
keepfit,interesting,inthepast,since,begintodo,strongerandstronger,physicaltraining
Apossibleversion:
Everyonewantstokeepfit.SodoI.Ilikeplayingbasketballofallsports.Playingbasketballisveryinteresting.Anditcanmakemekeepfit.Besides,whenIplayitwithothers,weusuallybecomegoodfriends.
Inthepast,Iusedtobeillandcouldn’tgotoschool.SinceIbegantoplaybasketball,Ihavebecomestrongerandstronger.AndIalsodowellinmysubjects/study.
Ithinkphysicaltrainingcannotonlykeepusfit,butalsohelpusworkorstudywell.Weshouldkeepondoingit.
石景山MyfriendshipwithMary
Inourlives,wemayhavemanyfriends.Andgoodfriendsreallymeanalottous.
IhaveafriendnamedMary.Sheis12yearsold.Weareinthesameclass.Sheistallwithbigblackeyes.Whenwetalkaboutsomething,shealwayslooksatme,smiling.
Twoyearsago,Icametothissmalltownwithmyparentsbecausemyfatherfoundanewjobhere.EverythingseemedstrangetomewhenIwenttomynewschoolonthefirstday.Ifeltverylonely.Justthen,Marycametome.Sheinvitedmetoplaygameswithher,andwewenthometogetherafterschool.What’smore,sheoftenhelpedmewithmypoorEnglish.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogress.Canyoubelieveit?
Now,Icancommunicatewithforeigners!
Marywassokindandhelpfulandwebecamegoodfriendssoon.ItwasMarywhogavemethegreatesthelpwhenIwasnewhere.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Thatisreallytrue.
通州你的笔友Kate昨天给你写了一封e-mail,向你诉说她与好友之间发生了矛盾,相处很不愉快,希望你能帮助她。
假如你是刘梅,请你给她回一封e-mail,告诉她你也有类似的经历,对她的问题提出你的建议,并谈谈你对朋友之间应如何相处的看法。
注意事项:
1)提示的词汇供选用;
2)词数不少于60;
3)信的开头和结尾已给出,文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
提示词语:
experience,fight,talk,writealetter,help,share
DearKate,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Bestwishes,
LiuMei
Icanunderstandyou.Ihavethesameexperienceasyou.Friendshipisimportanttous.Butthebestfriendsmayhavefights.Ithinkyouneedtohaveanhonesttalkwithherwhenthereisnoonearound.Ifshedoesn’twanttotalk,youcouldwritealettertoher.Ithinkasgoodfriendsweshouldlistentotheircomplaintswhentheyareintrouble,anddoourbesttohelpthem.Weshouldmakeeachotherhappyandshareourlives.
宣武在我们小的时候,父母和老师们就告诉我们要对别人有礼貌,你是如何做的呢?
请举出三个以上的例子,并谈谈你对有关讲礼貌的看法和提出建议。
提示词语:
young,tell,polite,forexample,think,the29thOlympicGames
Onepossibleversion:
Ourparentsandteacherstoldustobepolitetootherswhenwewereveryyoung.NowIamdoingthingsastheytellme.Forexample,Ialwayswaitinlinewhiledoingshoppingandgivemyseattotheoldonthebus.IneverforgettogreetteacherswhenImeettheminoroutoftheschool.AndIalsosaythewords“Thankyou”,“Sorry”and“You’rewelcome”tootherswhenevernecessary.
Inmyopinion,politenessisveryimportanttousallbecauseitcanhelpusnotonlygetonverywellwitheachother,butalsomakethesocietybetterandwarmer,especiallyintheyearof2008,whenthe29thOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing.SoIstronglysuggestthatweallshouldbepolitetoeachother.
延庆假设你叫露西,昨天收到了朋友Nick的e-mail,得知他马上就要期末考试了,但是每次考试之前他总是紧张,不知道做些什么。
请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail,介绍一下你在考试前的一些做法或体会,并提出你的建议。
(信的开头和结尾已给出,其字数不计入所完成的短文内。
)
得分
提示词语:
haveaplan,workhard,rest,nottoworry,sure
DearNick,
Thanksforyourletter.Youaskedmeforsomeadviceaboutrevision(复习).
Onepossibleversion:
DearNick,
Thanksforyourletter.Youaskedmeforsomeadviceaboutrevision(复习).First,Ithinkyoushouldhaveagoodplan.Keepnotesofwhatyouwanttoreviseeachday.Second,don’ttrytogoovertoomuchatatime.Workhardtwoorthreehoursandthenhaveashortrest.Thendosomemorestudying.WhenIwaspreparingformyexam,Ialsotriedtoeathealthyfoodandgetplentyofsleep.IwentforwalksandsometimesImetmyfriendstotalkaboutotherthings.Andlasttrytokeepcalmandnottoworry.I’msureyou’llbefine.(94word)
Yours,Lucy
燕山今年8月8日,奥运会就要在北京召开了。
班里准备开展题为“SomethingIcandoforthe2008OlympicGames”的讨论。
请你准备一篇发言稿,谈一谈盼望奥运会在北京召开的心情,说一说作为北京的中学生,你在做什么?
你还有什么打算?
holdproudhelpthousandsofshow…aroundhistorytrymybest
SomethingIcandoforthe2008OlympicGames
The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing.AsastudentinBeijing,I’mproudandIthinktherearealotofthingsIcandotohelptheOlympicGames.
Duringthegames,thousandsofforeignfriendswillcometoBeijing.SoIamp