现象解释型模板及仿写题目.ppt

1、现象解释型,基本方法为：描述现象分析原因对现象做出预测或如何促进（限制）这种现象的进一步发展。10/12句作文模板一10/12句作文模板二课后作文模板仿写,该现象has been brought into focus./该现象which has aroused great concern.Nowadays,现象表现 In addition,进一步阐述现象.The reason for this phenomenon are varied./There are many different factors deciding 该现象./该现象has a great effect on 影响的主要对

2、象.,描述现象段开门见山，总述现象。阐述现象的具体表现。进一步阐述现象，强化主题。乘上启下，引出下文对原因或因素的分析，也可以放在下一段开头。,模板一,Among all these reasons/factors/effects,原因/因素/影响一 play a critical role.具体阐述上述一Moreover,原因/因素/影响二。Besides,原因/因素/影响三。Therefore,最终结果或影响。,说明现象段落承上启下，列举原因/因素/影响一具体阐述上述一。列举原因/因素/影响二。列举原因/因素/影响三。总结以上内容所导致的结果，或该现象带来的主要影响。,as far as

3、I am concerned,我的观点/态度/做法.furthermore,进一步说明.In a word,总结全文。,总结观点段我对现象的思考或看法（可以是个人选择，对现象趋势或影响的评述。.进一步说明自己的看法或陈述理由。.重申观点，总结全文。,写作技巧透视,“Students Selecting Their Lecturers”(06.6)1)有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的老师2）学生选择老师是所考虑的主要因素3）学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题,审题：现象解释型确定段落：分为三段part I:描述现象PartII：说明因素PartIII：总结观点确定主题句：1）Nowaday

4、s,many universities allow the students to choose freely the teachers for some courses,which has aroused great concern.,2)There are many different factors deciding the students choosing a teacher for courses.3)As far a I am concerned,choosing teachers freely is very beneficial to both teachers and st

5、udents.,Students choosing their lecturers has been brought into focus.Nowadays,many universities allow the students to choose freely the teachers for courses,which is welcomed by most students.In addition,the teachers have also paid much attention to it since it involves their career fate.,There are

6、 many different factors deciding the students choosing a teacher for courses.A teachers professional knowledge and ability plays a critical role.That is a precondition for a good teacher as many student choose to follow the good teachers to learn knowledge.Moreover,quite a few students think teachin

7、g methods and skills are essential for them.Besides,a teachers humor sense is an important factor that many students will consider.,As far as I am concerned,choosing teachers freely is very beneficial to both teachers and students.Furthermore,it can provide a good chance for a teacher to prove his a

8、bility,and give students more initiative in learning.In a word,both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration.,According to the chart/graph/picture,it is clear that 图表/图画的内容总概况。The chart/graph/picture shows 具体描述图表/图画的内容之一，while 内容二。Many reasons/factors contribute to 该现

9、象。,描述图表段概括图表或图画所反映的总体现象。具体描述图表或图画内容。承上启下，引出下文对原因/因素/影响的分析，也可以放在下段开头。,模板二,4.First of all/above all,原因/因素/影响一.5.That is to say,进一步阐述原因/因素/影响一.6.What is more/moreover,原因/因素/影响二。7.In addition,原因/因素/影响三。8.As a result,段落总结句。,说明现象段落4.现象的原因/因素/影响一。5.进一步阐述上述内容。6.现象的原因/因素/影响二。7.现象的原因/因素/影响三。8.总结以上原因/因素/影响所导致的

10、结果。,9.As to me,我的观点。10.For one thing/on the one hand,理由一/影响一。11.For another/on the other hand,理由二/影响二。12.To conclude,总结全文。,总结观点段9.我对现象的思考或看法。10.支持看法的理由一/影响一。11.支持看法的理由二/影响二。（影响可有好坏之分）12.重申观点，总结全文。,02年6月,Direction:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Us

11、e of Computers.You should write at 120words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:1）下图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化2）请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会变化等方面加以说明）3）你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题,average number of hours of a student spends on computer per week,Hours/week,Acco

12、rding to the chart,it is clear that the students use of computers has grown rapidly in recent years.The chart shows from 1990 to 1995,the average hours that students spent in computers each week were doubled,while,in 2000,the number grew to 20 hours,which is five times as large as that of 1995.many

13、reasons contribute to this tremendous growth.,First of all,the low price of computer allows many students to have one in their dorms.So the students can often use their computers to do the assignments,play games and chat with their friends online.Moreover,many net bars provide students convenient ac

14、cess to computers.In addition,internet provides people an amazing world to explore,resulting in more student use of computers.As a result,computers have an irresistible attraction to them.,As to me,there are still problems in student use of computers.For one thing,students dont have enough skills to

15、 command computers,which limits their full use of computers.For another,students who short of self-disciplines may forget their main task of study.To conclude,effective measures should be taken for students to guarantee the reasonable use of computers.,作文模板仿写,07-12 Directions:for this part,you are a

16、llowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Electives to Choose.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.各大学开设了各种各样的选修课。2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课。3.以你自己为例,作文模板仿写,Directions:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled The Changing Criteria of a Good Student.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.如今人们对好学生的标准有所改变。2.产生这种现象的原因。3.我的看法,