如何给文章润色.docx

1、如何给文章润色如何给文章润色连接词的运用：1、熟悉并掌握表示并列、递进、转折等关系的过渡词（transitional words）。并列：and , as well as, also递进：besides, in addition, moreover, whats more.转折：but, yet, however, although, otherwise, in spite of, despite, instead of顺序：while, when, soon after, before, afterward, finally, first, then, next, as soon as对比：

2、like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand总结：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking具体：in other words, that is to say, for example, for instance, such as因果：as a result, so thus, therefore2、时间一就：the moment / minute / instant , on doing , as soon as , immediatel

3、y, directly, hardlywhen , no sooner than不久：it was not long before., after a while, soon然后：after that , then, so , next,同时：all the same time, meanwhile ,3、条件： if, as long as, so long as, on condition that, unless4、强调：It was that / who , So she did, I do hopeshe did help me. It really worked., besides

4、, furthermore, moreover, what more, certainly actually, in fact5、其他：不得不干某事：have to do sth, have no choice but to do sth, have nothing to do but do sth有必要干某事：There is no need ( for sb ) to do sth, it is necessary ( for sb ) to do sth,最好干某事：youd better do sth , its better to do sth,感谢某人：thank sb, be t

5、hankful to sb , express ones thanks to sb, be grateful to sb, thanks to,求助某人：turn to sb for help, as ab for help , with the help of, with ones help,惊奇：to ones surprise , in surprise, surprisingly, only+不定式（表意外结果）结果：as a result , therefore, thus, to总结：in a word, in short, above all, after all, genera

6、lly speaking, to sum up, in all, altogether, as is known to all,表达观点：in my opinion, I think, I believe, Im sure, I guess,原因如下(很多)：The reasons are as follows, Here are many reasons for it.浪费金钱（时间）：its a waste of money / time doing sth练习：请在下列句子中填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1. Li Ming was walking in the street _

7、he heard someone cry for help.2.He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west.3. It was not long _ the police came.4. _ he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.5. Do you agree with my arrangement ?_, do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do som

8、e shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends. _, I saved $80.句式要有变化：1、并列句、复合句2、状语从句、名词性从句、定语从句3、倒装句 1）、虚拟语气中if省略 2）、only+状语置于句首 3）、否定词置于句首4）、地点副词置于句首4、强调句型：It is / was that ( who )5、非谓语动词： 1）、用分词短语合并句子 2）、用介词短语合并句子 3）、用独立主格结构合并句子6、虚拟语气7

9、、固定句型结构： too to, sothat , such a that , not onlybut also, neither nor , such as , not.until, so that , either or8、直接引语和间接引语9、多种时态，动名词， 不定式，并列结构练习：1. I turned on the TV. I watched it. I turned on the TV _ I watched it. 2. He was tired. He went to bed. He was tired _he went to bed.3. The child hid beh

10、ind his mothers skirt. He was afraid of the dog.The child hid behind his mothers skirt _he was afraid of the dog.4. He made a promise. He didnt keep it. He made a promise_ he didnt keep it.5. I still remember the day . I first came to Beijing on that day.I still remember the day_ I first came to Bei

11、jing on that day.6. 强调句 ：It was this young boy that helped the old granny.It was not until I grow up that I realized the mistake.7. You can solve the problem in this way. _ in this way _ you solve the problem. 8.They met the Youngman as soon as they got to the station._ _ they _ to the station _ the

12、y met the young man.9. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street _ a handbag in her hand.10. As soon as they arrived at the airport, they were warmly welcomed.they were warmly welcomed_ _ they arrived at the airport.强化训练：组句（非谓语动词）1. They arrived at the school . They felt happy atmosphere.2. I

13、will be given another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.4. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.5. 听到这个消息，他们变得很激动。_ the news, they got excited.6.尽管被告知许多遍，他仍然重复这个错。_ many times, he still repeated the mistake.7、除非被邀请发言，你应该在会议上保持沉默。Unless _ to speak, you sh

14、ould keep silent at the meeting.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力。1. He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.Not until _.2. We can save the earth by changing the way we live.Only _.3. He is clever but he does not work hard._ as / though _, _.4.The clock tower stand on the other side of the street.On th

15、e other side of the street _.按要求改写下列句子，使其更具文采。1. He di not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(强调句)2. I hope I can pay a visit to you next year. ( 强调)3.Tom and Mary like singing songs. (肯定倒装)4. John likes to study and play. ( 否定倒装)5. Though Im weak, Ill make the effor

16、t.(使用倒装句)6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.( 使用倒装句)7. Soon the firefighters came. (表时间句型)8. In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.1). In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast , _ makes

17、 peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.2). With the development of _, _.3)_so _ that _.巧用介词短语：赏析：1. Because there are a lot of trees around our school, its very beautiful.With a lot of trees around our school, its very beautiful.2. John didnt get the job, so he was quite disappointed.To hi

18、s disappointment , John didnt get the job.3. On the table is a box. Beside, there is a cover.On the table is a box with a cover beside it.4. She saw a big dog and began to cry.She began to cry at the sight of a big dog.5. The young man left for Beijing immediately.The young man left for Beijing with

19、out delay.练习：1、用介词短语转换以下句子。1. As soon as he arrived in the city, he went to visit his high school teacher._ _ _ in the city, he went to visit his high school teacher._ _ in the city, he went to visit his high school teacher.2. Being afraid of rain, we took an umbrella.We took an umbrella _ rain.3. H

20、e never hesitates to help if I have nay problem.He always helps me _ _ if I have any problem.4. She didnt study. Instead, she played a lot on the Internet.She played a lot on the Internet _ _ studying.5. We were informed that our professor agreed to the plan.We were informed that our professor was _

21、 _ _ the plan.2、一句多译：要求每组至少有两句要使用介词短语。1、艰苦的工作使他获得了成功。1）._2）._3）._2、随着经济的迅猛发展，孩子们获得越来越多的教育机会。1）._2）._3）._3、听到这个消息，她放声大哭。1）._2）._3）._适当使用非谓语：赏析：1. He passed the exam and he became more confident.Passing the exam make him feel more confident.2. Just now, Tracy called and said that she couldnt meet you

22、at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning.Just now, Tracy called ,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning.3. We want to make our school more beautiful so we will build another garden.To make our school more beautiful, we will build another garden.4. Tomas Edison was born in Americ

23、a and was a great scientist and inventor.Born in America , Tomas a great scientist and inventor.5. Unless he was asked to speak. The student used to keep silent in math classes.Unless asked to speak, the student used to keep silent in math classes.练习：1、按要求转换以下句子。1. My mother heard the news and she b

24、urst into tears._, my mother burst into tears.2. Some students dont support the idea and say playing computer games can open their minds.Some students dont support the idea, _.3. When we meet with difficulties in life, we should be brave enough and try to overcome them._ with difficulties in life, we should be brave enough and try to overcome them.4. He worked carefully so that he didnt make any mistake.He worked carefully _ any mistake.5. Dont leave the building if they dont tell you.Dont leave the building _ to.二、一句多译：要求每组至少有两句要使用非谓语结构。1、他写那篇文章花了三个星期。1）._2）._3）._2、虽然他累了，但他继续工作。1） ._2）._