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1、第一节 读后续写doc专题二写作技能升华篇第一讲读后续写原题呈现A(2018年6月浙江高考)It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle_Paul,_m

2、y dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very e

3、arly in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，” he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草)I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They

4、looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.“Dont be l

5、ate for supper，” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get_lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sightIt was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to cr

6、eate a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we w

7、ere and it was getting dark.写作流程第一步：审题1审体裁：记叙文2审人称：第一、三人称3审时态：一般过去时4审所标出的关键词语：表人物的有：dad, Uncle Paul表事物的有：farm house, river, sheep, track, sight表动作的有：feed, get lost表时间的有：late5审前文大意：父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验第二步：抓住段首句设问续写段首1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of

8、 my horse.设问：How would the horse react?What would they do with the rabbit? What would happen after that?续写段首2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.设问：How did they feel?What would they do?How would they get back to the house? 第三步：谋篇1第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front

9、of my horse.是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的结果入手，可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去，也可以写人的反应，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。2第二段首句We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场来写。3对所标出的关键词语进行分类并选择性地加以有效利用。同时灵活运用话题词汇：情感：panic, relief, nervous, worried；动作：run, cry, think to oneself；环境：shower, mount

10、ain, forest, valley, tree, lake, sun。4在确定了思路和内容之后，续写时，要注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。第四步：拟草稿并检查誊写【参考范文1】Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it.After a while, we were completely lost in the forest.Th

11、ere was nothing left in our sight but the trees.“We may not be able to make it back to the farm_house in time for supper.” I thought to myself.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stu

12、ck in the forest.And an unexpected shower added to our difficulty in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Dont worry, my son.I remember there is a river near the farm house.Find the river an

13、d we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to say, we ate a late dinner.【参考范文2】Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the left to avoid the little rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall

14、.Then my dad turned around and shouted, “Hold on！” All of a sudden the horse began to run.My dad tried to keep up behind us.For a few minutes my horse slowed down and then stopped beside a riverI looked around and realized that we were away off the trackParagraph 2：We had no idea where we were and i

15、t got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm_houseAfter what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance.My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep.As we got closer we saw U

16、ncle_Paul with a flashlight waving us over.What a night!对于这种新的题型，考生首先要能对所给的文章有深刻的理解，对文章的脉络和发展的方向有很好的把握，对文章使用的词汇的特点有整体的认知。然后，根据对文章结构的理解设计合理的情节，完成对文章的续写。因此，续写文章的关键是：1掌握所给文章的主旨意图及故事情节的发展方向。这点至关重要。只有把握了文章的主旨意图，才能很好地完成续写。2正确理解故事的脉络线索和段落结构，设计续写内容的基本框架。只有对原文的脉络线索和段落结构有正确的和深刻的理解，续写的内容才能和原文骨肉相连，契合紧密。3理清文章中的要

17、点信息和逻辑关系。确保续写的内容和原文要有逻辑上的一致性，并能回应原文的信息。4感知文章的用词特点。以便使续写的内容在语言色彩上和所给文章保持一致。5注意语言的使用。考试说明中非常明确地指出，写作中要准确使用语法和词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。所以，在考虑文章结构的同时，一定要注意使用比较“高级”的词汇和语法结构。每一种体裁都有其特定的语言特色，记叙文也是如此。记叙文的语言有记叙文语言的特点。那么，在记叙文写作中，哪些词汇的运用可以为文章增色，成为文章亮点呢？下面收集整理了部分具有高分特质的词汇，请细细体会，熟记于心，多加运用，定会让你的文章脱颖而出。1满意的表情a satisfied l

18、ook2令人鼓舞的表情an encouraging expression3既兴奋又开心a mixture of excitement and happiness4流下幸福的泪水tears of happiness flowing down5心情愉快in cheerful spirits6心满意足，非常幸福be on the top of the world7极为感动be overwhelmingly moved8被强烈地吸引be powerfully attracted to9因而高兴be joyful over/about10喜爱，对着迷be keen on11快乐至极be overwhel

19、med with12欣喜若狂be wild with delight13精神高涨be in high spirits14为成功而欣喜be excited with joy at the success15被她的美貌所吸引be fascinated with her beauty16显示出极大的意愿show a great readiness17乐得大叫yell with delight18使某人心情愉快brighten sbs heart19使某人安心set ones heart at rest20感到鼓舞的feel inspired/encouraged21振作精神keep up ones

20、spirits1强烈的失落感a strong sense of loss2怀着沉重的/沮丧的/忧郁的心情with a heavy/sinking/sorrowful heart3惊慌失措be seized with panic4情绪低落be down in spirits5陷入绝望fall into despair6悲痛欲绝cry ones heart out7垂头丧气lose ones spirit8使某人悲痛make ones heart bleed9减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼ease sb of his pain/trouble10因某人的死亡而痛心break ones heart over

21、ones death1感到恼怒feel annoyed2感到愤怒feel irritated3感到泄气feel discouraged4感到尴尬feel embarrassed5感到困惑feel puzzled/confused6感到沮丧feel frustrated/depressed7感到恶心feel disgusted/sickened8易为琐事而恼火be easily annoyed at trifles9对某人的行为感到不满be displeased at ones conduct10引起某人的不快arouse ones displeasure11不断地抱怨complain cons

22、tantly12气得满脸通红flame with anger13勃然大怒fly into a rage14对某人勃然大怒get mad/cross at sb15愁眉苦脸have a worried look16对抱怨不予理会ignore/disregard a complaint17对表示不满express/voice a complaint about18怒气冲冲地跑出房间run out of the room in a burst of anger1宽容的精神a forgiving spirit2以和蔼可亲的态度with a kind and goodhumored spirit3在这些

23、情绪的控制下under the domination of these emotions4对一点也不感兴趣be not in the least interested in.5对彻底上瘾be hopelessly addicted to.6混合着焦虑与希望的情绪be mixed with the emotion of anxiety and hope7感到极为有趣find.highly stimulating8引起强烈的情感set off strong feelings1中等身材an average build2优美的/匀称的身段a graceful/shapely figure3痩削的/细长

24、的身材a skinny/slim figure4发育良好的身体a welldeveloped figure5身材魁梧的人a wellbuilt man6仪表堂堂be imposing/dashing/handsome/striking7(人)形体很好have a good figure8改善形体improve ones figure9看到月光下有一个模糊的人影see a dark figure in the moonlight10显露出她优美的身段show off her lovely figure1保守的性格conservative personalities2缺乏责任感lack of se

25、nse of responsibility3高素质、有经验的老师a highlyqualified, wellexperienced teacher4光明的前途a promising future5完人a faultless/perfect person6天资高的/聪明的人a talented/an intellectual person7有抱负的人an ambitious person8脾气好的人a goodnatured person9容易相处的人a person easy to deal with10有前途的青年a promising young man11浪漫的人a romantic

26、figure12说话直率的人an outspoken man13消息灵通/见多识广的人a wellinformed man14未婚妇女an unmarried woman15时髦的妇女a fashionable lady1620岁出头的姑娘a girl in her early twenties17品格纯洁无瑕的女子a girl of stainless character18娴静有礼的淑女a quiet, gracious lady19冷酷无情的/心肠冷酷的人a coldblooded/ hardhearted man20具有的美德with the virtue of21务实的be down

27、toearth22关于很无知be ignorant about23性格果断be of a determined character24乐观和有抱负的be optimistic and ambitious25脱颖而出stand out from the crowd26有突出的个性have striking personalities27有诚实的好名声have an excellent character for honesty28具有独立的性格possess an independent character1赞赏的目光an admiring gaze2嫉妒的目光an envious glance

28、3一项有意义的活动a meaningful/rewarding activity4互相谅解，相互理解mutual understanding5相信in the belief that.6期待in the expectation that.7面对斗争与改变in the face of struggle and change8不顾对的忧虑regardless of concerns over.9完全一团糟be completely in a mess10对某事不存幻想be under no illusion about sth11被认为是权威be considered an authority12

29、不愿改变be reluctant to make changes13无力改变结果be powerless to change the outcome14步态优美地走walk gracefully15鼓起勇气muster up courage16吸引注意capture the attention17首次露面make ones first appearance18没有履行职责fail to carry out ones duties19给某人造成负担impose a heavy burden on sb20服从志愿者组织的指挥follow orders from the voluntary21损害高中生形象damage the image of high school students22经受起起落落go through ups and downs23朝某人匆匆瞥了一眼cast a hasty glance at sb24向某人投以爱慕的目光cast an admiring glance at sb25凝视着某人look at sb with a fixed gaze26爆发出阵阵喝彩声break into shouts of applause27收回前言，承认说错eat ones words28严厉训斥某人give sb a sharp scolding29就某事发表