届高考二轮复习提分月月升短文改错4.docx

1、届高考二轮复习提分月月升短文改错42021届高考二轮复习提分月月升短文改错 （4）1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语 言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。I am a high school student who have just entered the Senior Two

2、.Recently, have foundthatsome of the studentsinourclasses studyharderthan before.Theystudylately into night, eating snacksand drink Coca-Cola, which isbadfortheirhealth. Inthemorning, duetostaying late, some studentshavetogo to school hurriedlywithoutbreakfast, thatsurelydoesharmtotheirhealth.In my

3、opinion, since we are under the heavy pressure of study, we should also try to eat properly and get as many exercise as possible. Only in this way can they keep fit and study well.2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(

4、/)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一橫线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。My name is Jack. Know that the StudentsUnion is looking for volunteers, I am writing to make an apply.I really want to get this opportunity because, by offering my service, not only I be able to improve my oral English and c

5、ommunication skills, but I can also make more friend. As the outgoing boy, I am warm-hearted and always ready to help with others. I once take part in an activity organized by the local community to offer help to some homeless people. However, I am fluent in English so I have no difficulty communica

6、te with English speakers. In a word, I believe I am qualified for the position.Hopeful you will take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,

7、并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Nowadays my schoolwork becomes much heavier than ever before, thus force me to stay up deep into the night. I seldom do sports. For this reason I often felt sleep in class. Bad health caused my poor memory. Things have been changed after I fo

8、llowed my teachers advices. I get up earlier to do morning exercise. During the 10 minutes break I go out the classroom to relax my brain and muscles. At five oclock in the afternoon I often go to the playground to have sports. All this makes myself fresh and full of energy. It is sports that improv

9、es my health. I have made a rapid progress in my studies.4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。My friend Frank is one of the most amazing peo

10、ples I have ever met. He just never seemed to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected difficulties. To everyones surprised, he has never failed an exam. Frank believes that exams are just exams but that its unnecessary worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person b

11、y nature and I real admire his way of thinking. That makes me ashamed is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For an example, I cant concentrate to my studies before the exams. Its time to learn from her now.答案以及解析1.答案：I am a high school student who just entered the Senior Two.Recently, have f

12、oundthatsome of the studentsinour studyharderthan before.Theystudy into night, eating snacksand Coca-Cola, which isbadfortheirhealth. Inthemorning, duetostaying late, some studentshavetogo to school hurriedlywithoutbreakfast,surelydoesharmtotheirhealth.In my opinion, we are under the heavy pressure

13、of study, we should also try to eat properly and get as exercise as possible. Only in this way can keep fit and study well.解析：1. 第一句 have 改为 has。主谓一致错误。定语从句的先行词为 student，单数第三人称，结合故事的时态 环境用现在完成时。 2. 第一句 the 删去。冠词错误。Senior Two 为专有名词，用零冠词。 3. 第二句 classes 改为 class。名词错误。class 在这里意为“班”，用单数形式。 4. 第三句 latel

14、y 改为 late。副词错误。lately 意为“近来，不久前”，而 late 意为“晚，迟”。late into the night 深夜。符合语境要求。 5. 第三句 drink 改为 drinking。非谓语动词错误。drink 与前面的 eat 是并列关系，都是现在分词，做伴随 状语，因此改为现在分词。 6. 第四句 late 前加 up。副词错误。stay up late 为动词短语，意为“熬夜，睡得晚”。 7. 第四句 that 改为 which。连词错误。逗号后面的分句为非限制性定语从句，用 which 连接，以前面的句 子为先行词，that 不连接非限制性定语从句。 8. 第五

15、句 since 改为 though 或 although。连词错误。前后分句中间为转折关系，不是因果关系，though 或 although 连接让步状语从句。 9. 第五句 many 改为 much。形容词错误。exercise 为不可数名词，因此用 much。 10.最后一句 they 改为 we。代词错误。最后一段使用第一人称讲述。2.答案：My name is Jack. that the StudentsUnion is looking for volunteers, I am writing to make an.I really want to get this opportun

16、ity because, by offering my service, not only I be able to improve my oral English and communication skills, but I can also make more. As outgoing boy, I am warm-hearted and always ready to help with others. I once part in an activity organized by the local community to offer help to some homeless p

17、eople., I am fluent in English so I have no difficulty with English speakers. In a word, I believe I am qualified for the position.you will take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.解析：第一段第二句:Know 改成Knowing 解析：动名词作伴随状语第一段第二句:apply 改为 application解析:apply是动词，申请，在句中是make的宾语，

18、故应为名词形式，其名词是application，故apply改为application。 第二段第一行：在I前面加 will 解析：倒装句 第二段第二行：friend 改成friends 解析：可数名词的复数形式 第二段第二行：the 改成an解析：as an outgoing boy 作为一个外向的男孩 第二段第三行: with 去掉 解析：help others 帮助别人 第二段第三行：take 改成took 解析：动作发生在过去 第二段第四行：However 改成Besides/Moreover/Furthermore 解析：由于以前参加过当地社团活动，所以和他们交流没有困难 第二段第五

19、行：communicate 改成communicating 解析：have difficulty doing 做某事有困难 最后一段：Hopeful 改成Hope 解析：hope 后边可以接从句3.答案：Nowadays my schoolwork becomes much heavier than ever before, thus me to stay up deep into the night. I seldom sports. For this reason I often felt in class. Bad health caused my poor memory. Things

20、 have been changed I followed my teachers . I get up earlier to do morning exercise. During the 10 break I go out the classroom to relax my brain and muscles. At five oclock in the afternoon I often go to the playground to have sports. All this makes fresh and full of energy. It is sports that my he

21、alth. I have made a rapid progress in my studies. 4.答案：My friend Frank is one of the most amazing I have ever met. He just never to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpected difficulties. To everyones , he has never failed an exam. Frank believes that exams are just exams that it

22、s unnecessary worry about them all the time. He is an optimistic person by nature and I admire his way of thinking. makes me ashamed is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For an example, I cant concentrate my studies before the exams. Its time to learn from now.解析： 1. 【答案】peoplespeople【命题意图】

23、考查名词单复数。【解析】people用作复数时，表示“民族”。本句 people不是指“民族”，而是指“人”。句意：我的朋友弗兰克是我见过的最了不起的人之一。2. 【答案】seemedseems【命题意图】考查时态。【解析】本文讲述的是作者朋友弗兰克的一般情况，因此应用一般现在时。3. 【答案】surprisedsurprise【命题意图】考查“to ones+名词”结构。【解析】本句句意：令大家惊讶的是，他从来没有考试不及格过。4. 【答案】butand【命题意图】考查连词。【解析】分析句子结构可知，本句 believe后面含有两个that引导的宾语从句，从句意来看，这两个宾语从句属于并列关

24、系，不是转折关系，因此这里应该用and连接。5. 【答案】在unnecessary后加to。【命题意图】考查不定式。【解析】本句含有“it+be+形容词+to do sth.”句型。句意：弗兰克认为考试只是考试，没有必要一直担心考试。6. 【答案】realreally【命题意图】考查副词。【解析】根据句子结构和句意可知，这里应使用副词，修饰动词 admire。句意：我真佩服他的思维方式。7. 【答案】ThatWhat【命题意图】考查主语从句的引导词。【解析】从句子结构来看，“That makes me ashamed”处于主句的主语位置上，属于主语从句，但是that引导句子时，在句中不作成分，该从句明显缺少主语，因此应考虑用what引导主语从句，并在句中作主语。8. 【答案】去掉an【命题意图】考查冠词。【解析】for example“例如”，属于固定短语。句意：例如，考试前我无法专心学习。9. 【答案】toon【命题意图】考查介词。【解析】concentrate on sth. 表示“集中精力于”。句意：考试前我无法专心学习。10. 【答案】herhim【命题意图】考查代词和逻辑关系。【解析】从上下文看，作者谈论的是其朋友弗兰克，且前面均用的是he，因此这里属于人称指代错误。