专题01+成长故事直击高考英语+专项突破读后续写.docx

1、专题01+成长故事直击高考英语+专项突破读后续写专题01直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”-成长故事读后续写“一波三折”：1.情绪-情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。2.细节-进一步描述。3.转折-个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。4.转机-事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。5.失望-问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。6.想法-面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。7.结局-在想法或感触的影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。8.点题-呼应前文备注： 这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以

2、略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。每个人都会成长。在点点滴滴中，在大风大浪中，在自我挣扎中01阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Heres the story of my growth over the past year. Its a story of how I found the strength to change myself for better and then how I get rid of my fears to be even better. If anyone is

3、 inspired by this, thats wonderful.Id been stuck as this incredibly insecure, under-confident and just scared individual for years and years. Since childhood Id been stuck like this. Kids I met for the first time looked at me rudely and unkindly. Even my friendsactually, I had very few friends becau

4、se I just felt too ashamed and frightened to make some, though I was eager to and felt extremely lonely in the depth of my heartlaughed at me and gave me bad nicknames. I felt terrible, but Id just resigned to a life where Id be afraid of everything and be this “introvert” (内向的人) or whatever. I thou

5、ght I would never be able to change, never, for my whole life.But then it all started changing. Something clicked. I suddenly determined to go on a diet, and lost some weight. It was tough. I felt hungry all the time. I was always tempted by the smell of bread and hamburger, even when I didnt see th

6、em. But the toughest thing was that even if I had just had my meals, I felt hunger mentally. However, I held on. In over a period of 6 months I finally managed to stick to one of my diets. I didnt know how. But I did make it.The loss of 90 lbs brought me from overweight straight down to underweight.

7、 This isnt the best part. More importantly and inspiringly, I suddenly found strength in me. I realized I could be totally different. And maybe, I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change myself.Then I wondered, perhaps, I could also get rid of those of my fears, jus

8、t like I succeeded in losing my extra pounds. It might not be easy, but it might not be that difficult.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Chance presented itself soon._It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly._【答案】Chance presented itself soon. One single time, I heard about a pu

9、blic speaking thing going on at my university, and for the first time, I actually managed to build up the courage to go there. It was liberating. For the first time I was able to share my story, and able to do it in front of dozens of people potentially judging me, and suddenly all the random fears

10、about speaking publicly started disappearing. This taught me I could get rid of my fears.It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly. Using the fact that I could change, and that I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. My fear of greeting strangers, my fear o

11、f talking to strangers, my fear of asking simple questions I should already know, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing things, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being myself, all of which help make me a better one.【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到

12、力量去改变自己减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。由第二段首句内容“从那时起，我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后，很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。2.续写线索：公开演讲摆脱恐惧其他改变感悟3.词汇激活 行为类消失：disappear/vanish摆脱：get rid of/extricate oneself from开始：start/begin情绪类害怕：fear/dread【点睛】高分句型1. Using the fact that I

13、 could change, and that I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. (由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句，现在分词作状语)高分句型2My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers, my fear of asking simple questions I should already know, my fear of hanging out with people, my fe

14、ar of not knowing things, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being myself, all of which help make me a better one. (“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)02 Be a true runnerFor me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their team

15、s to a blue ribbon and win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the leader and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was twelve, because my camp counselors（辅导员）and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when our camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race

16、 around the lake, I knew I was no ones first choice. I hid in the shade of a maple tree as they called the names of the runners, my body tensed as I heard a counselor call, “Fred! Where is Fred! He is in this race!” It was Barry. He spotted me under the tree. “Fred! We need a 12-year-old who hasnt b

17、een in other events to run the two-mile!”He gave me a push towards the starting line. Having no confidence and trying to save myself from the shame of taking the last place as four camps watched, I pleaded with him. “But I dont know the way around the lake!” “Youre in. Just follow Bill!” Barry smile

18、d. Bill was my friend and the fastest runner in our camp. And then Barry said, “When you make it to the last stretch（最后一程）on the field, just throw your head back and run.”At the starting line, I stood next to Bill and trembled. “On your mark Get set.” The gun cracked and sixteen of us took off. I st

19、ayed close on Bills heels, a little too close for Bill, I guess. He shouted at me, “Back off!” I did. Two guys passed me, but I kept my eyes on Bill. It was tiring. The distance was widening between Bill and me. We made the turn from the dusty road onto the muddy, wooded trail that would go around t

20、he lake back to the field. Through the trees, I saw Bill trip over a tree root and fall. A runner from another camp passed him. 注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置。In a moment, Bill was up again and running._I didnt know when I crossed the finish line._【答案】In a moment, Bill was up and running. I coul

21、dnt think of anything but to follow him closely. I could even feel the air hitting my face and I was totally worn out. Naturally, my pace slowed down. Just at the moment, Barrys words “Just follow Bill” called me back. Convinced that I was no longer a loser, I refreshed up again and accelerated and

22、soon I was quite close to Bill again. Injected with confidence, I headed for the finishing line. The gun cracked again, announcing the last 200 meters. I closed my eyes, threw my head back and ran with my last ounce of strength, in the direction of the dream line.I didnt know when I crossed the line

23、. I still kept running on when a thunderous applause burst, which signaled the birth of the champion. I stopped and opened my eyes and saw my camp of kids and the camp counsellor gathering around me. “We have won the race! We are the champion!” they shouted and cheered, throwing me in the air. Showe

24、red with hugs and applause and whistles, I felt a surge of gaiety sweeping over me. To me, the race meant more than a champion; it well proved that I was not a loser as an athlete and that I could further explore my potential. Just as Hemingway put it, “The true nobility is superior to your former s

25、elf.”【解析】本文以人物和时间为线索展开，讲述了Fred因个儿小人瘦弱而一直没有机会在赛道上为自己队争得荣誉，心生自卑，但是一次环湖2英里的比赛中，辅导员Barry选他当第四个参赛运动员，并指点他只要跟着他的朋友，跑得最快的Bill就行了；Fred照做了，尽管心里忐忑，疲惫不堪，但最终获得了团体冠军，也使他对自己充满了自信。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“不一会儿，比尔爬了起来，又开始跑”可知，第一段可描写Fred跟在Bill后面的状况，Barry的话鼓舞了Fred，在最后200处他全力冲向终点线。由第二段首句内容“我不知道我什么时候越过了终点线。”可知，第二段可描写Fred的努力

26、使小组赢得冠军，看着欢呼的老师和同学时Fred的心理变化。2.续写线索：Bill爬起来后Fred筋疲力尽时最后200米时越过终点线后得知比赛结果后3.词汇激活 行为类.疲惫不堪：be worn out/be tired out/be completely exhausted .加速：accelerate/speed up.发掘我的潜力：explore my potential/exploit my potential 情绪类.充满自信：be injected with confidence/be filled with confidence.喝彩：cheer/applaud【点睛】高分句型1.

27、 Injected with confidence, I headed for the finishing line. （运用了过去分词作状语）高分句型2.it well proved that I was not a loser as an athlete and that I could further explore my potential. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）03One afternoon after school, Mary and his brother, Keith, were eating at a cafe near their home. That afte

28、rnoon, they had to share their table with another person. That person was a young lady in her twenties. After eating, she went to the restroom. Without realizing, she had left her handphone on the table. Five minutes later, she came out and walked out of the cafe without looking back.Mary saw the ha

29、ndphone on the table. She quickly told Keith, “ Keith, the girl left behind her handphone.” Keith looked at the handphone. It was one of the latest models on the market. Looking very sleek, it was red in color with a black cover. The handphone must be expensive.Keith had always wanted a handphone, B

30、ut his parents refused. He stared at it for some minutes. Then he said slowly, pausing on very word, “ I want to take the handphone, ” Mary could not believe her eyes. She merely stared at her brother, “ you cant! What if the owner comes to look for it?”Having made the decision, Keith quickly grabbed the handphone and put it in his schoolbag. Then, he took Marys hand and