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1、考研六级作文模板19篇有错误更改说明精品打印版2Directions: Write a composition in the title “How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas” based on the following given outline in Chinese. Your composition should be about 150 English words. Please write your compositon on the Answer Sheet.Outline:1. 现在社会上的假文凭屡见不鲜。2. 如何杜绝假文凭现象？学员作文How to

2、 Eliminate Fake DiplomasIn the last few years, the phenomenon of fake diplomas are more and more serious. A lot of people use fake diplomas to find a good job. Besides the low cost of the fake diplomas appeals lots of people that have not received higher education.Fake diplomas do harm to both emplo

3、yers and people who have got real diplomas.If employers appoint employees who are not qualified toaimportant position, their companies may face heavy losses, even face crisis. Besides, its unfair for people with real diplomas when those buy fake diplomas do not pay any efforts and money in education

4、. So we have todeal with the fake event.On begin with, government should release some laws to punish those people who fabricate and buy the fake diplomas. In additions, the university can make their diplomas withspecial material. Furthermore, universities should match up the companies to check the r

5、ecord of formal schooling of their employees. In those ways, the fake diplomas may controlled.参考范文How to Eliminate Fake DiplomasNowadays the flooding of fake diplomas is becoming more and more of a problem in our society. It is reported that fake diplomas are very common in the job market. In additi

6、on, there are a variety of fake diplomas or certificates。It is very clearly seen that fake diplomas are bringing great damage in many aspects. Above all, employers may recruit employees who are not qualified for a certain post, causing a great loss to their companies. Furthermore, its unfair that on

7、e fails to get his job just because his rival has a fake diploma or certificate. Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to stop fake diplomas from spreading。First of all, companies and universities should have a close contact so that the fake diplomas cannot play tricks. Moreover

8、, the one who fabricates the fake diplomas should be severely punished by laws and totally exposed through media. Besides, companies should keep detailed information of the diploma holders and the diplomas should be issued with fake-proof mark. Only through these ways can this problem be tackled. 评语

9、：1.较好的完成了题目要求，条理清晰。2.存在少量的语法和拼写错误，写作时应注意避免。3.句式过于复杂时，句子结构不是很清晰。复习建议：1.写作时注意认真仔细，注意好从句连接词的使用，平时学习多做累积。2.多阅读范文，注意观察句式使用情况，以及整体布局。3Directions:Write a composition of about 250 words on the following topic. Remember to write your composition of Answer Sheet. （复旦大学2010年试题）Privacy and Liberty学员作文Privacy an

10、d LibertyNowadays, some people aclaim that privacy and liberty cant coexist due to the fast development of science and technology. People enjoy have the freedom to get informations easily from Internet and they are accustomed to watch movies on TV, send and receive emails from their friends. At the

11、same time, they worry about leaking private information and receiving junk emails now and then. They believe that privacy is the base of freedom and liberty.Peoples opinion vary on the link between liberty and privacy. Some people play high priority on privacy. And they believe that privacy is a kin

12、d of self-protecting. Whereas others pay much attention to liberty, they hold the belief that information is important for societys persistent boom. In my oppinion, I think liberty and privacy are equal important to human beings. Privacy is the basis of liberty, and liberty boost the protection of p

13、rivacy. In fact, privacy help to keep us from being disturbed, while relevant liberty can bring us a wide range of knowledge that may not be taught in university.Anyhow, emerging technology should take privacy and libertys projection into consideration. Only with the balance between liberty and priv

14、acy, we can have the opportunity to exchange ideas and sharing our life freely through blogs without concerning the crisis of being cheated.参考范文Privacy and Liberty In our information orientated society，we usually fall into a conflict between privacy and liberty. People like to get any information pu

15、blished anywhere. Most of them used to watch famous movies on TV, receive emails from friends, buy software online, and even write blogs or upload pictures to websites. But they worry about private information leaking at the same time. They hate to receive junk emails, be afraid to be called by stra

16、ngers at midnight. Privacy is the basis of society security while liberty is necessary for world development. How to address the conflict is quite complex and thought-provoking. People of different backgrounds may hold different opinions and attitudes. Some people put more stress on privacy. They do

17、nt care about what is happening around and what other people are doing. In their eyes, privacy is a kind of self-protecting. Other people place their point to liberty. They show great concern for the fact that information is important for society progress. For me, I think we should keep liberty base

18、 on basic privacy. For one thing, basic privacy can help us from life disturbance such as black mails. Also basic privacy for government could stop terrorists outside, especially after 9.11 attack. For another thing, enough liberty really brings us wide knowledge. We have chance to exchange ideas wi

19、th any one on the other side of the earth. We can post blogs freely to make the other people share my life. However logical or valid the arguments may be, they only skim the surface of the issue. We should take a more critical view of how to improve the stability on balancing the privacy and liberty

20、. 评语：1.文章结构清晰，内容充实，完整的表达了自己的想法，但字数少于题干要求。2.写作时拼写错误微大，需要多加注意。3.文章句子比较简单句和复合句结合使用，便于读者理解和展示水平。复习建议：1.平时应多注意词汇的使用和拼写。2. 多阅读范文，注意观察段落安排和整体结构的安排。4Directions：Write a composition of at least 200 words about the topic: Studying Abroad .You should base your essay on the following outline： (1)present situatio

21、n (2)the advantages of studying abroad (3)the disadvantages of studying abroad (4)your commentsPlease write your essay on the ANSWER SHEET.学员作文Withtherapiddevelopmentofsociety,wehaveenteredaneraofinformationexplosion.Inordertoacquiremoreknowledge,moreandmorepeopledecidetofurthertheirstudyabroad.Stud

22、yingabroadwidensstudentsknowledge,andmeanwhilecultivatesthe students independenceandpersonalities.Firstly,studentscanlearnadvancedknowledgeandexperience.Chinahasstrengthenedcooperationwithmanycountries.Asaresult,thescientificandtechnologicalhasbeenimprovedrapidly.However,comparewiththedevelopedcount

23、ries,westillhavealarge gap.Studyabroadprovideopportunitiestostudentswhowant tolearnadvancedknowledge,soastoenhancethescientificlevelinourcountry.Secondly,studyingabroadalso cancultivatestudentsabilitytoliveindependently.Studentshavetodealwithanyproblemsby them.Theyhavetolearn howtogetalongwiththetea

24、chersandclassmates.Finally,studyingabroadcanprovideaforeignlanguageenvironmentandmakeiteasytopickupalanguage.Foreignlanguageisatoolemployedtocommunicatetoeachother.However.Studyingabroadalsobringsaboutsomedisadvantages.Firstly,studentsmayconfrontedwithsomuchpsychologicalproblems.Theyoftenfeellonelya

25、ndhelplessinastrange country.Tosumup,theadvantagesofstudyingabroadoutweighthedisadvantagesgreatly.Weencouragestudentsstudyabroad.评语：1.文章整体符合要求，各段调理比较清晰。2.结尾时过于简单，自己的观点描述应该更加详细。3.词汇使用比较丰富和新颖，应该继续保持。4.细节错误较多，如词汇拼写和词性问题上。复习建议：1.多注意积累固定词组正确形式，不确定时考试时考虑 使用其他词代替。2.注意，文章结构，在注意词数符合要求时，还应该把自己的观点表述完整。参考范文Stud

26、ying Abroad Recent years have witnessed an increasing number of young students who want to go abroad for further studyEach year，a considerable number of them fly to foreign countries to study，especially to highly developed countries such as America，Britain，Australia，Canada，Germany and Japan The poss

27、ible reasons for the fever of studying abroad may be attributed to its advantagesFirst of all，living in a foreign country where the language is spoken，we can get more chances to learn and improve our foreign language and do so more quickly and easilySecondstudying abroad takes us to a completely dif

28、ferent language and cultural environment in which we can enlarge our vision and widen our scope of knowledgeFor instance，we may get firsthand knowledge of the customs and the people of the native cultureFurthermore，in a highly developed countrywe can learn and acquire advanced science and technology

29、 But still going abroad to study has some disadvantages that cannot be ignoredFor exampleWe have to pay high tuition and living expensesAnd living in a completely different culture in which we have no friends and relatives，we may often suffer from a sense of lonelinessThereforewe should hold an obje

30、ctive attitude towards the issue As far as I am concerned，we should hold reasonable attitude towards studying abroadWe should learn to use what we have learned to make contribution to the development of our country5Directions：Write a composition of at least 200 words based on the following drawing.

31、You should interpret the drawing, give your opinion on the phenomenon, and use specific reasons and/or examples to support yourself. Write your answers on the Answer Sheet.学员作文Inthispicture, we can see thattwotouristsaretakingaboatonariver.Theyaresittingontheedgeofboatandeatalotoffood.Andthenaloadrubbishsuchascans, watermelonpeels,fishbonesandfoodpackagingbagswerediscardedbythemintotherivercasually.Andonetime,theriveriscontaminatedwiththesefloatingwastes.Thispicturedescribesthatuncivilizedphenomenonofpickuptrashi