五年高考真题专题短文改错.docx

1、五年高考真题专题短文改错专题十七短文改错 五年高考真题20152011年各省市高考题Passage 1 （2015新课标全国I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。When I was a child, I hoped to live in t

2、he city.I think I would be happy there.NowI am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately， on the development of industrialization，the en vir onment has bee n polluted.Lots of studies have bee n show n that global warm ing has a

3、lready become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare ani mals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，well live to regret it.答案show n that global warm ing has already become a veryseriouslyseriousproblem.Theai

4、rsairwe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.MuchManyrare an imals are dying out.We mustfoundfindways to protectyourour/theenvironment.If we fail to do so, well live to regret it.1解析 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。答案 第 2 句：th inkthought2.解析 考查冠词的用法。in the cou ntryside在乡村）为固定短语。答案 第3句：cou

5、ntryside前加the3.解析 考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。答案第4句：or and4. 解析 考查介词的用法。with the developme nt of.为一固定短语，意思是 “随着的发展”。答案第5句：onwith5.解析 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态答案第6句：去掉been6.解析考查形容词的用法。修饰名词 problem应当用形容词。答案 第 6 句: seriously serious7.解析 考

6、查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。答案 第 7 句: airs air8. 解析考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。答案第8句：MuchMany9.解析考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。答案 第9句：foundfind10解析考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知 your与上 下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。答案 第 9 句: your ourPassage 2 （2015新课标全国n ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处

7、。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One day， little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.lt was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked

8、 into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time he turned around and found where his pare nts were missi ng.T ony was scared and beg un to cry.A woma n saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later， Tony saw parents.Mom said， “ How nice to see you again! Dad and I were

9、 terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.答案Ashop.Five minutes later, Tony saw his parents.Mom said, “How nice to see you terribleagain! Dad and I were 怕耐仪 worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happe n aga in.1. 解析 考查名词复数。由第五句中的his parents were missing.可知此处

10、应当用复数形式。答案 第 1 句：paren0 parents2. 解析 考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词 in。答案第3句：on Tn3.解析 考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so.that.为固定句型，意思是 “如此 以致于 ”，故去掉very。答案第4句：去掉very4. 解析 考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。答案 第 5 句：looks looking5.解析 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将 w

11、here去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。答案 第5句： 去掉where或where that6.解析 考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was scared并列，因此,要用一般过去时。答案 第 6 句: begur began7.解析考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与 saw构成并列谓语。故改用 told答案 第 7 句：telling told8.解析 考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。答案 第 7 句： athe9.解析 考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在

12、 parents 前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。答案 第8句：saw后加his10.解析 考查副词的用法。形容词 worried 之前要用副词来修饰。答案 第 10 句： terribleterriblyPassage 3 （2015 四川）下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单 词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。1.每句不超过两个错误；2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；3.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。Hi, Janice，I

13、ts been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.Its been three

14、 Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time wasting activity! In fact， I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me， would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案Hi, Janice

15、,Its bee n a mon th since I came to this new school and I really want A to share with you some of the problems I have bee n experie ncing.tell frie ndAs I tod you last time, I made three new frjends here.We hang out togethersi ngduring lunch and after school.Weve been spending a lot of time in karao

16、keJ Jmanybars .I ts bee n three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to seemuchsothis as a time- wasting activity! In fact, I dont like to go anymore,师 rm afraid rilHow arelose their friendshipWt do you think I should do? If you w me, would you talkto晋? themme and give me some advice.

17、Grace1解析 考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。答案 want后加to2.解析 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。答案 telltold3.解析 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友答案 frie ndfrie nds4.解析 考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型 spend.(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成 singing。答案 si ng si ngi

18、ng5.解析 考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意:那真的花费很多。答案 man尸much6.解析 考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把 so改成but。答案 s but7. 解析 考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用 what。答案 HowWhat8.解析 考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我， 。答案 are were9. 解析 考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用 them。句意：你会和他们说吗？答案 himth

19、em10解析 考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。答案去掉withPassage 4 （2015 陕西）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、 删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My soccer coach reti

20、red in last week .1 wan ted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.l insisted on doing most of the baking myselfthought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake

21、was that I dropped some on the floor after I was pack ing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy

22、the biscuits with happy laughter!答案My soccer coach retiredanythinglast weekwanted to do something special forbetterhim at his retirement party.My mum makes the best biscuits in the world, so I decide stepdecided to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic steps of bakinginsisted onwelldoing most of

23、 the baking myselfthought the biscuits were really goj.My onlyaftermistake was that I dropped some on the flrwhen/while 丨 was packing them up.aAt party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth , asked surprisingly who made them and joked “ I might have to retire again next year just I get some more of

24、 these biscuits”enioyMy favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoying the biscuits with happy laughter!1.解析last week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。答案去掉in2. 解析 something用在肯定句中，表示 “一些事”，anything “任何事”，答案 anything someth ing3.解析 我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。答案 better best4.解析 全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把 decid

25、e改为decided。答案 decide decided5.解析 根据前面的some, step应该是复数形式。答案 step steps6.解析 作表语的是形容词 good, well 是副词,作状语。答案 wellgood7.解析 我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候, 掉在地上一些。 when/while当 的时候，after在 之后。答案 afterwhen/while8.解析 此处表特指, at the party 在晚会上。答案 athe9.解析 动词不定式表示目的,我也许得再退休一次,能吃到更多的饼干。答案 just 后加 to10. 解析 and连接两个并列的（动）名词，en

26、joy是动词，所以改成enjoying。答案 enjoyenjoyingPassage 5 （2015 浙江）下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单 词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from g

27、lass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left hand side of the clas，s I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many

28、 trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child w

29、hen I studied in that classroom， I will never forget it.1.解析 考查名词的复数形式。前面有 three 修饰，故要用复数形式。答案 第一句：sidsides2. 解析 考查固定表达。be made of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be madefrom 是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。答案第一句：fromof3.解析 考查非谓语动词。动词 enjoy 后要接动名词作宾语。答案 第二句： sitsitting4. 解析考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词 see要有副词形式。答案 第三句： easyeasily5.解析 考查动词的时态。

30、 本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室， 故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。答案 第五句： iswas6.解析 考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数 a beautiful park要用it。答案 第六句： themit7.解析 考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。答案第七句：not去掉8.解析 考查固定表达。in a hurry匆匆忙忙。答案 第九句： in 后加 a9.解析 考查非谓语动词。 make sb do.使. 某人做某事。答案第十句：feltfeel10.解析 考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。答案 最后一句： If Although/Th

31、oughPassage 6 （2014新课标全国I ）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作 文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 （）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第 11处起）不计分。Nearly five years before， and with the help by our father， my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes 圣女果）in our back garde n.Since then for all these year we had been allowi