四级写作应试策略.docx

1、四级写作应试策略四级写作应试策略大学英语四级考试(CET4)在进行改革后, 写作部分仍是按照要求在30分钟内写出一篇120个单词短文,在分值比上也无变化,仍占15%(标准分106.5分),但在答题顺序调整至第一部分。试卷上可能给出题目，或规定情景，或要求看图作文，或给出段首句要求续写，或给出关键词要求写成短文。要求考生能正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语法错误。写作的内容包括日常生活和一般常识。一、评分原则1 CET作文采取总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。2 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合

2、评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。3 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文试卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。二、评分标准1.作文满分为15分。2.阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分。若认为与某一分（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可以加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。但不得加减半

3、分。4.评分标准2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。5分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分：累计字数90-9980-8970-7960-6950-59少于49扣 分123579三、真题评分示例下边是2005年1月四级作文阅卷时的 Range FindersDirections: For this

4、 part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 你认为自己具备什么条件（能力，性格，爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作？2. 如果当选你将回本校同学做些什么？14 pointsDear fellow stu

5、dents,I am grateful that you offer me the chance to speak here. I am impressed by the speeches of the previous candidates. Yet, I want to prove myself better for the post of chairman. First of all, I have a pleasant quality. Last year I was the dorm director of our building and I managed to get alon

6、g with all the students well. I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the coordinator of the whole student union. Secondly, Im always ready to create. At present our union is very well organized. However our activity schedule is slightly

7、 mutinous. I am willing to add some vivid elements into it in order to make our campus life more enjoyable. If I am elected the chairman, I promise I will become your voice and build the student union into a bridge between the students and the university. Im your best choice, vote for me, vote for y

8、ourself, thank you!评语：切题，思想表达清楚，层次清晰，连贯性较好。文字通顺、流畅、自然，选词及句式有变化。基本上无语言错误，仅个别小错。11 pointsHello, everyone. I believe I am the best choice of the post of the chairman of the student union. First, I have the ability which is necessary to the post of the chairman of the student union. I have been monitor

9、of our class since I came to this school. In the past years, I worked very well on the post. Second, I have many interests. For example, I play basketball and football very well. My tennis is good, too. Third, I have a lot of friends. Almost everyone likes me.If I was chosen to be the chairman of th

10、e student union, I will work for the need of the students. I will tell the school what we students really need and what we dont want.I believe, I am the best choice for the post of the chairman of student union. Thank you!评语：切题，思想表达清楚，层次较清晰，文字连贯，选词及句式有一定变化。但有个别较大语法错误和用词错误。8 points Ladies and gentlem

11、en, all the school mates and teachers: I will elect to the post of chairman of the students union. The reasons I make this decision is that Im desire to do more things for you. Apparently, only wishes are not available. Ill make you believe that not only did I have wishes but also capacity.First, wh

12、en I was a freshman, I took part in many activities to accumulate experiences and now I familiar with the process that how the student union works. Second, I love making friends and I had extensively hobbies. These can make me orgernize people easily. The third, I take this work very sireously and I

13、 will try my best to improve and develop the students union to make you satisfied.In a word, Im the right person you have ever been searching. So, support me! Ill never make you disappointed.评语：比较切题，基本清楚地表达主题的内涵，句子结构和用词有错误。且有个别严重错误。 5 points Thanks everybodies to give me a chance to electe te post o

14、f chairman of the student union. Ill do my best in that post. I will inform myself first. I am a man of hard-working. So I will do anything with my best. I can help everyone who needs help. I have a weild-eyesight. Using computer is my fave-ate thing. Above all, is the reason why I elected the post.

15、 If I get the post, Ill solve the problems of every students. First thing I think must solve is the price in the school. It is too expensive to our student. Second, I think we must have more free time. Nowadays, too many courses in our table. So we cannot do something which we want to do. I think it

16、 is too bad. Last, I will orginaze more performances in school, in order to fill the rest time. I hope everyone give me a chance to acheve my hopes. Thanks!评语：基本切题，表达不够清楚，思路不清晰，连贯性差，有较多严重语法错误和用词错误。 2 points Nowadays in our highly technological society, its wildly belived that the persons ability is

17、very crucial in our daily life. As for as I can do chairman of Student commitment for the best. first at all I have a good commmunicaton skill for any people. Secondly I have goodly boby to competent this assign, because I very like sport and very morning do body excises. Mealwhile. Im a great stude

18、nt to lead us student for study together, and of course. Last but not least. If I election successful, I will do my young age, do anything for every classmate rejoice in hope and patient in tributionAll of this reason to lead every people to conclution that I am election/Very hope all classmate supp

19、ort me. Thank you!评语：思路混乱，条理不清，语言支离破碎；语句不通，词不达意，有较多严重语法错误。四、四级作文写作技巧4.1文章开头技巧有人曾经把作文开头比喻成女孩子的脸，当人们看到脸之后，如果觉得惊艳无比，就会为她的其他方面加分不少由此可见一个好的作文开头的重要性，下面我们将会为同学们介绍几种常见的而且也是实践证明行之有效的四级作文开头方法4.1.1 比较法句型1 People used to think/ It was once thought that In the past/old daysBut things are quite different/few peop

20、le now share this view.例：People used to be born at home and die at home. In the old days, children were familiar with birth and death as part of life. But now things are quite different. Our youngsters have never been close by during the birth of a baby and have never experienced the death of a fami

21、ly member. When people get seriously sick, they are often transferred to a hospital, where children are usually unwelcome and forbidden to visit ill patients. This deprives the children of an experience of death, and experience very important to ones life.句型 2 Several years /decades ago, peopleNow/T

22、odayWhy do people/has such change taken place?例：Several years ago people were often a little surprised when they heard that a college student was doing a part-time job. “Why? Maybe he is short of money,” they thought. Nowadays, it is not an uncommon phenomenon that college students are working as tu

23、tors, salesmen and tour guides. Many students put up advertisement on bulletin boards or lamp posts to search for odd jobs. Why do many students show great interest in a part-time or a summer job?4.1.2. 对立法句型3 When asked about, the vast majority people say/ think/ believe/ answer thatBut other peopl

24、e regard/view/seeas( I think /view/ quite/ a bit differently)例： When asked what kind of career they will pursue upon graduation, most of college students say that they would choose a job which will bring them a lot of money and a comfortable life. Working in a big bank or company is what they desire

25、. But I think quite differently. I would prefer a career which will help realize my potential.句型 4 When it comes to, some people think/ believe that Others argue/ claim that the opposite/ reverse is true. There is probably some truth in both arguments/ statements, but例：When it comes to the internati

26、onal sports such as the Olympic Games and the World Cup soccer game, some people believe that it creates goodwill between the nations and that if countries play games together they will learn to live together. Others say that the opposite is true: that international contests encourage false national

27、 pride and lead to misunderstanding and hatred. There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments, but in recent years the Olympic Games have done little to support the view that sports encourage international brotherhood.句型5 Now, It is commonly/ generally/ widely believed/ thought/ held/ ac

28、cepted/ felt/ recognized/acknowledged that They claim/believe/argue that例：It is commonly believed that the rise in teenage smoking is the inevitable result of economic development. They argue that if there are no cigarette advertisement on TV, no cigarette available everywhere, and no adequate pocke

29、t money, teenagers are unlikely to take up the habit of smoking. But I doubt that it is a satisfactory explanation. While conceding the effect of advertising and other commercial factors, I think that the primary cause is social and individual rather than economic.句型6 These days we often hear about

30、They claim/ argue/ say But has/is it? Close examination/ analysis doesnt bear out the claim/argument.例：These days we often hear about “the classes society”. They say that all men are equal, and they cam enjoy the same educational and job opportunities, and the distinction between rich and poor has l

31、ost. But has it? Close examination doesnt bear out the claim.4.1.3. 故事法句型7 Last Sunday/The other day/Some months ago.I/a friend of mine The case/story/incident is not rare/unusual, it is one/typical of thousands of.例：The other day, I met Miss Lee, my old classmate, who told me that she had decided t

32、o quit her job as a teacher at the end of the second school year and to go into a company. She said that she couldnt make a living in her chosen profession and that not even her moonlighting twice a week could put her out of the financial quagmire she was in. Miss Lees case is not unusual, it is typical of thousands of young teachers who are quitting their jobs in search of more lucrative work.例：Last evening, I went to visit one of my friends and w