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1、大学英语写作四、六级写作的要求四级作文和六级作文的要求基本是相同的。 1 篇幅:120-150字 达不到字数要求的,要酌情扣1-5分; 90-99 扣1分,80-90扣2分,70-79扣3分,60-69扣5分; 2 布局:三段式 只写一段为0-4分,只写两段0-9分; 3 评分标准: 2分- 条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,但多数为严重错误; 5分- 基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误; 8分- 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不过清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误; 11分- 切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误; 14分

2、- 切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。 例如: 1) 有人认为机会是极少的 2) 有人认为机会人人都有 3) 我的看法 Sample 1 As to the opportunity, there is two different opinions: first, someone think the opportunity is little in their life. Secondly, someone consider that opportunity is existing everywhere everybody has some kinds

3、of chance. According to my life experiment and knowledge I agree with the second idea. There is chance for everyone in some unexpected case. But if you has no preparing for it, the opportunity will lose. Those who have many preparation and much knowledge, and some good virtue, may I quip the opportu

4、nity firmly. For example, two man are appealing for a job in a company, and there is only one vacant job for the only one of the two man. How, the two man has an opportunity to get the job but the boss certainly would accept the good one. So I think the opportunity is existing to every one, but more

5、 opportunity is belongs to who has knowledge, experience, encourage and confident. 该篇文章条理不清,思想紊乱,语言支离破碎,几乎没有正确的句子,得2分。 Sample 2 Some one thinks that the opportunity is very few for him because he has never meet the chance. But other one thinks there are chances here and there, then everyone can meet

6、 opportunity. I resist the second opinion. There to are some opportunities, the important thing is that if we could catch the chance when we meet it. In our lives we have a lot of choice that need us take our heart to. For example, when I was a little boy, my health was very bad. One day a teacher a

7、dvise me to join the basketball with my friends. My health become well. So I think there are opportunities for everyone. 该篇文章基本切题,但思想表达不清楚,有很多严重的语言错误,属于5分档。 Sample 3 Some people think that they lack of opportunities, while others think that everyone will face to some ones. I agree to the latter. In

8、fact, we are living on the same world. Most of us must deal with a lot of things every day. Some peoples circumstances are even the same, so do the opportunities. However, why someone can grasp it but others cannot? All this depends on the careful observation and grasping the opportunity in time. Fo

9、r instance, we students in our college, whose circumstance are the same. We all should study a lot of courses before we graduate. But some of us study hard in order to learn more and well, while some dont. In the end, the hard-working students get the better jobs. At that time, there are some studen

10、ts who have been playing all the time will say that they lack of opportunities. As we know that the hard-working students make the best use of their time and they observe everything around them carefully, so that they can grasp the opportunities in time. In a word, the opportunity is equal to everyd

11、ay, and whether we can grasp it or not is critical. 该篇文章基本切题,有些地方表达不清,文字勉强连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有一些为严重错误。属于11分档。 Sample 4 People have different views on opportunity. Some think that there are few opportunities for them in the world, while others hold that everybody will have some kind of chances in his or he

12、r life. As far as I am concerned, I am for the latter. People who claim that they dont have good luck may be those who are not able to take chances. Maybe they fail to recognize opportunities even when they are in front of them. However, wise men can seek opportunities rather than wait for chances t

13、o appear. For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from apple trees, but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity. In fact, no one can be denied of the access to opportunity. People may have good luck sometimes, but no one can be lucky all the time. As a saying goes, every dog has i

14、ts day. So everybody can have a chance to succeed. So we can conclude that everybody has the opportunity to succeed, but it is up to himself to take it. 该篇文章切题,思想表达清楚,文章结构条理,行文连贯,符合逻辑,属于14分档作文。 4 行文要求 1) 切题:统一,无不相关细节内容; Beethovens demand for perfection meant long and hard work. Unlike Mozart, he cou

15、ldnt dash off three great symphonies in six weeks. It doesnt mean he was not as talented as Mozart. Beethovens music was different from Mozarts Sometime he worked years on a single symphony, writing other works at the same time. He carried music sketchbooks everywhere, jotting down new ideas, revisi

16、ng and refining old ones. These early notes often seem crude and uninspired when compared with their final versions, which were hammered out through great labor. Beethoven was often in poverty, though he produced great music. 本段文字中红体部分显然与主题Beethovens demand for perfection meant long and hard work.无关

17、,应该去掉。 2) 条理清楚:连贯、和谐 - 注意衔接语的使用 In their hurry to get practical preparations for a career, students often overlook the liberal arts college. Yet, there are good reasons why they should consider a liberal arts school, even if getting a job is their main concern. For one thing learning itself may be m

18、ore exciting in a liberal arts college for the its course is more flexible than that of a technical school. Thus students may do better in their course and earn higher grades, which will certainly make them more attractive to employers. More important, a liberal arts education is the most likely to

19、develop ones ability to think, to read, and write, which business and industry are coming to value more and more. Finally, students should realize that a liberal arts education has always been a preferred path for top professions: law, medicine, government, and education. 3) 简洁:句子要简练; 4) 准确:减少语法错误,符

20、合英语的表达习惯,避免汉语式英语; 5 卷面:整洁 二、 四六级英语写作类型 1 体裁:说明文,议论文 最近几年的四六级作文的体裁以说明文和议论文为主。 说明文如:How to Succeed in a Job Interview (2000,12,四级), How I Finance My College Education(2000,1 四级), Practice Makes Perfect, Haste Makes Waste(97,1 六级) 议论文如:Dont Hesitate to Say NO(99,1 四级和六级), Can Money Buy Happiness(95,1 四

21、级), Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?(2000,6 四级) Reading Selectively or Extensively? (99,6六级),Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck? (98,6 四级和六级) 2段落类型:比较/对比,列举,程序等 说明和议论文章所采用的文章扩展模式一般以比较/对照,举例、列举、因果、程序等者居多。如: Dont Hesitate to Say NO, Reading Selectively or Extensively等很多四六级写作中都涉及到两种观点的对比,整体的

22、段落类型为对照型。 Practice Makes Perfect, Harmfulness of Fake Commodities等可采用因果行的段落结构模式,也可以采用举例说明的结构模式。Advantages of a Job Interview则应采用列举的段落扩展模式。 3 出题方式:提纲式写作,中文提纲,一般为三句或两句; 如:99年1月分考题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Dont Hesitate to Say NO. Yo

23、u should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below. 1. 别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说不。 2. 为什么有些人在该说不的时候不说不。 3. 该说不时不说不的坏处。 再如:98年一月分考题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Harmfulness of Fake C

24、ommodities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below. 1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象? 2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。 三、 四六级英语写作模式 文章由段落组成,四六级写作的布局要求成三段式的写作模式,这就体现了由段落到篇章的结构模式。首先,我们来看一下英语段落的写作要求。 1 段落 英语中的段落由三部分组成,即主题

25、句、支撑细节和结论句。篇章中的段落可以没有结论句,但是一般应该有主题句。写作中要求 1)开门见山提出主题 如下面一篇写作: 题目:Good Health提纲: (1) Importance of good health(2) Ways to keep good health(3) My own practices写作中可以将文章分成三段,但注意每段主题要明确,并且于第一句中提出: Good health is very important to everyone. With it, we can study hard; we can serve the country; we can do e

26、verything as we like. Without good health, everybody knows, we will fail to do things; we cant work efficiently; we may stay in hospital well become a burden of our family, etc. In my opinion, there are two ways to keep fit. First, we must eat a balanced diet. This is to say, we must eat not only eg

27、gs, fish, and meat, but also some vegetables and fruit everyday. Besides eating, drinking clean water is also important. Never get addicted to drinking the so-called soft drinks. Second, exercising is a vital part of our daily life. We can do some running in the morning and play football in the afte

28、rnoon. As a university student, I pay much attention to my physical exercises. I do some swimming in summer and some skating in winter. I often play badminton and tennis. Im also careful with my diet. In a way, keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously. 2) 段落扩展模式要适当 英语文章的段落结构模式主

29、要有: (1)比较和对照 There are many differences between middle school and the college. First, in middle school, we have to listen to what the teacher says in class, to understand the content of the text. But in college, we must study by ourselves before class. If not, we couldnt follow the teacher. Second,

30、there are lots of rules in middle school. For example, we should wear the uniform, the girls must have their hair cut short, and we are not allowed to make boy- or girlfriends. However, in college, we have more freedom. We can wear the clothes we like. And the girls could have long beautiful hair. W

31、e are also free to make boy or girlfriends. The third, in the middle school, we must study first. That means we could do nothing but study. In contrast, we have to do everything by ourselves in college. That means we must plan our time carefully. There are also other differences between our school l

32、ife and our college life. We have to learn to adapt ourselves to college life.? 再如: 题目:Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports提纲: a. 体育运动的好处 b. 体育运动可能带来的副作用 c. 我参加体育活动的体会 Sports do us good in many respects (TS). It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of co

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