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1、because本身就可以引导从句Online shopping is changing their lifestyles, they canshopping（应该是go shopping）via the Internet on smartphones, computers or other devices. They do notneed （应该是need to）go out and itsave（应该是saves）much time. Then they may have more time to stay with family or to do some social activitie

2、s with friends.Thereare various products are saled（两个动词）online and people can buy what they like without limit. For example they can buy a product which is produced in America through e-buy and this product may not besaled（应该是On sale）in stores. In this case,people buy more things so the local econom

3、y will seea（应该是an） increase.More and more libraries are equipped with advanced equipments to help readers.equipment是不可数名词，没有复数Technology has the changed the way of people to access knowledge.“of doing something“是正常的表达，可以说”the way people access knowledge”变成定语从句There are many people tend to search the

4、 web to gather information.两个动词，在“people”后面加“who”，使其变成定语从句2. Family life and parents（觉得这两个有点重复）absolutely play a vital role in childrens life,while they（指代不清，改为children）are also exposed to many external influences.4.Parents can encourage children to do their interested activities.（貌似没这个说法，改为activiti

5、es that they are interested）interested过去分词不可能修饰没有生命的物体。应该是do their favourite activities.7.the government should implement some policies to punish some behaviors such as destroy the environment.such as后面跟名词或者动名词的destroying1.Tourist play a vital role in preserving the environment.主谓不一致，改为touristsPeopl

6、e who prefer to shopping online might spend more than they earn.prefer to do something.People are normally exposed to various news about celebrities,news不可数，不能用various形容Highly unemployment rates have also caused people to work overtime.highly是副词，不能修饰名词，只能说the high unemployment ratePeople will feel s

7、tressful and upset, if overwork.stressful不能修饰人，只能说stressed，而if状语从句要写完整的句子，应该是if they overwork.Men are likely to pay closer attention on their career advancement when communicate with othersWhen是连词，后面要加完整的句子，或者分词communicatingElderly people usually cannot have a good understanding of advanced technolo

8、gies这里应该是do notIt has been argued that whether fast food advertisements should be banned.“whether”去掉，主语从句里要有一个独立的句子。There is an increasing number of young people seek jobs in cities.主谓不一致，is改成“are”；两个动词seek，改成“seeking”There has been an increase in the number of elderly population.”the number of”后面要加

9、可数名词复数，population改成peoplePeople who age 50 and over have to retrain to survive in a competitive world.”who age”改成agedWe expose to a world of knowledge on the Internet.expose及物动词，要么加宾语，要么被动“we are exposed to”Globalisation can cause harm to local economyeconomy可数名词不裸奔，要说the local economy or local econ

10、omiesMany cities have lost character, which may caused by globalisation.情态动词要加动词原形，may be causedMany tall buildings are builded in recent years.“in recent years”一般用完成时态，改成“have been built”The views in a various of places seem to be similarity.应该是various或者a variety of;表语和主语不匹配，应该改成similar应该是thoroughT

11、he cost of fuel will become increase错误：两个动词，应该将“become”去掉Private car use can have negative effect on environment.effect和environment都是可数名词，不裸奔，分别写上“a negative effect”，还有“the environment”People lack of knowledge about environmental problems.”lack of”的lack是个名词，所以去掉“of”，使其变成动词There is no doubt that regu

12、larly exercise can improve peoples health.“regularly”副词不能修饰名词，应该是regularChildren can enjoy the fun of sports and thereby improving their health.thereby的用法限制：1前面是逗号，而不是and 2后面是doingWatching movies became a popular pastime since 1999.用“since+时间”,要用完成时态Mobile phones brought convenience and enjoyment to

13、 our commute.bring enjoyment to是介词，应该是to commutingWhen it comes to teach children life skills, parents should take on more responsibilities.when it comes to的to是介词，应该是to teachingThere are good schools where provide a good education for children. where应该改成which，定语从句修饰schoolsPeople can live in places w

14、hich near to the workplace.定语从句缺少谓语动词，将which去掉Living in a horizontal city where has less skyscrapers is beneficial to health.“where”改成”which”，less改成fewerLiving in a large city may affect our moods and thus influencing our work and study.thus前面的and改成逗号A smaller class can allow a much faster progress.

15、去掉a，因为progress不可数the price of resources will be risedrise不及物,直接写will risethe consumption of natural resources has negative impact to living standards.应该是a negative impact on,因为impact可数名词the high cost of living poses a threat to peoples qualities of life.应该是quality of life，这里的quality是不可数名词If shops do

16、 not sell unhealthy food, people could becoming more healthy.应该是could become healthierThey have to under the heavy pressure at work.主系表结构缺乏系动词，应该是“have to be”Children can make decisions independent when they meet difficult.independent形容词不能修饰动词，只有写independently，而difficult是形容词，不能做宾语，应该是overcome diffic

17、ulties.The consumption ofsome resources have caused severe potential damage to the environment.主语是consumption，谓语动词应该是hasRecently, the using of fossil fuels are required to cut down globally by an international organisation.recently一般用完成时态；Fossil fuels as a essential industry resources which brought

18、both benefits and pullotion.这个句子没有动词，应该去掉which；然后复数不能加上“a”，去掉、Electronic books can be extemmely powerful in terms of providing you with convience and money-saving.money-saving是形容词，要变成saving moneyA increasing number of people using digital book instead of the real one.应该是an increasing ；而BOOK应该用复数book

19、sA large population normally means more household garbage, thus result in serious pollution.1,thus不是连词，result改成resultingIn order to travel conveniently, private cars have increased.2 private car不能做travel conveniently的主语，increase的是the private car use.整句话是“the private car use has increased because peo

20、ple want to travel conveniently”There are more and more people want to live in urban areas.3 want前面加who，否则这个句子两个动词As the fast accumulation of waste, soil degradation will become serious in some areas.as是从属连词，后面加句子as waste accumulates rapidlyThese pollution in big cities leads to many diseases.These只

21、能加可数名词复数，而pollution不可数，可以说“this kind of pollution”Living in mega city is good for people seeking medical advises.advice不可数名词，而city可数名词没有复数。Living in urban is easy for people to find more hospitals.主语错误，“easy”的主语不是“living in cities”，改成“it is easy for people to find hospitals in cities”people can put

22、more energy to work and promote economic and technological development主语错误，人不能“promote development”living in big cities is convenient to visit a doctor.主语错误，“convenient”的主语不是”living in big cities”，改成“it is convenient to visit a doctor in big cities”People who change their jobs from time to time may

23、enrich their lives.主语不对，不是people enrich lifeMaking career changes means embrace challenges as well as taking great opportunities.means后不能跟动词，应为“means that they can embrace”people who working in different cities may enrich their woking experience.定语从句的谓语不完整，应该是“work in”,然后是“gain more experience”Being

24、 involved in another community activities may help them to mix with new friends.another不可以和名词复数连用，应该是“other”Overworking can have adverse impact on their family relationship.impact可数名词，应该是an adverse impactWorking overtime leads ambitious people to suffer stress-related health problems.“leadto”这样使用很繁琐

25、，直接说”ambitious people suffer because of working overtime”They pay less attention to family lives, which may lead to a result that they cannot accompany children.“lead to a result that”太过罗嗦，直接说“which means that”Working long hours may be prone to health problems.逻辑主语有问题，应该是“people who work long hours”

26、Children have easily be tempted to buy products without considering the price.完成时态的被动语态应该是“have been tempted”Parents sometimes have to budget carefully because of these unnecessary expenditure.these后面要加名词复数，unnecessary expensesAdvertisers can have an adverse impact on childrens lives.Advertisers是广告商

27、的意思，主语和后面的内容不匹配，应该改成advertisementsChildren can be persuaded by those advertisings to purchase products.advertisings改为advertisements,advertising不可数People squander money on holding parties to celebrate can be a waste of money.主语不应该是人，而是“squandering money on parties”A large number of restaurant or supe

28、rmarket give schools money to put fast food advertisement on campus.“restaurants or supermarkets”,可数名词不裸奔It is likely to affect childrens health if allow fast restaurants to promote food at school.if是从属连词，连接完整句子的，要有主语，应该是“governments allow”Our lives are always filled with various advertisement and it is easy for us search pr