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because本身就可以引导从句
Onlineshoppingischangingtheirlifestyles,theycan
shopping
（应该是goshopping）
viatheInternetonsmartphones,computersorotherdevices.Theydonot
need（应该是needto）
gooutandit
save
（应该是saves）
muchtime.Thentheymayhavemoretimetostaywithfamilyortodosomesocialactivitieswithfriends.
There
arevariousproductsaresaled
（两个动词）onlineandpeoplecanbuywhattheylikewithoutlimit.ForexampletheycanbuyaproductwhichisproducedinAmericathroughe-buyandthisproductmaynotbe
saled
（应该是Onsale）
instores.Inthiscase,peoplebuymorethingssothelocaleconomywillsee
a
（应该是an）increase.
Moreandmorelibrariesareequippedwithadvancedequipmentstohelpreaders.
equipment是不可数名词，没有复数
Technologyhasthechangedthewayofpeopletoaccessknowledge.
“ofdoingsomething“是正常的表达，可以说”thewaypeopleaccessknowledge”变成定语从句
Therearemanypeopletendtosearchthewebtogatherinformation.
两个动词，在“people”后面加“who”，使其变成定语从句
2.
Familylifeandparents
（觉得这两个有点重复）absolutelyplayavitalroleinchildren’slife,whilethey
（指代不清，改为children）arealsoexposedtomanyexternalinfluences.
4.
Parentscanencouragechildrentodotheirinterestedactivities.（貌似没这个说法，改为activitiesthattheyareinterested）
interested过去分词不可能修饰没有生命的物体。
应该是dotheirfavouriteactivities.
7.
thegovernmentshouldimplementsomepoliciestopunishsomebehaviorssuchasdestroytheenvironment.
suchas后面跟名词或者动名词
的destroying
1.
Touristplayavitalroleinpreservingtheenvironment.
主谓不一致，改为tourists
Peoplewhoprefertoshoppingonlinemightspendmorethantheyearn.
prefertodosomething.
Peoplearenormallyexposedtovariousnewsaboutcelebrities,
news不可数，不能用various形容
Highlyunemploymentrateshavealsocausedpeopletoworkovertime.
highly是副词，不能修饰名词，只能说thehighunemploymentrate
Peoplewillfeelstressfulandupset,ifoverwork.
stressful不能修饰人，只能说stressed，而if
状语从句要写完整的句子，应该是iftheyoverwork.
Menarelikelytopaycloserattentionontheircareeradvancementwhencommunicatewithothers
When
是连词，后面要加完整的句子，或者分词communicating
Elderlypeopleusuallycannothaveagoodunderstandingofadvancedtechnologies
这里应该是donot
Ithasbeenarguedthatwhetherfastfoodadvertisementsshouldbebanned.
“whether”去掉，主语从句里要有一个独立的句子。
Thereisanincreasingnumberofyoungpeopleseekjobsincities.
主谓不一致，is改成“are”；
两个动词seek，
改成“seeking”
Therehasbeenanincreaseinthenumberofelderlypopulation.
”thenumberof”后面要加可数名词复数，population改成people
Peoplewhoage50andoverhavetoretraintosurviveinacompetitiveworld.
”whoage”改成aged
WeexposetoaworldofknowledgeontheInternet.
expose及物动词，要么加宾语，要么被动“weareexposedto”
Globalisationcancauseharmtolocaleconomy
economy可数名词不裸奔，要说thelocaleconomyorlocaleconomies
Manycitieshavelostcharacter,whichmaycausedbyglobalisation.
情态动词要加动词原形，maybecaused
Manytallbuildingsarebuildedinrecentyears.
“inrecentyears”一般用完成时态，改成“havebeenbuilt”
Theviewsinavariousofplacesseemtobesimilarity.
应该是various
或者avarietyof;
表语和主语不匹配，应该改成similar
应该是thorough
Thecostoffuelwillbecomeincrease
错误：
两个动词，应该将“become”去掉
Privatecarusecanhavenegativeeffectonenvironment.
effect
和environment都是可数名词，不裸奔，分别写上“anegativeeffect”，还有“theenvironment”
Peoplelackofknowledgeaboutenvironmentalproblems.
”lackof”的lack是个名词，所以去掉“of”，使其变成动词
Thereisnodoubtthatregularlyexercisecanimprovepeople’shealth.
“regularly”副词不能修饰名词，应该是regular
Childrencanenjoythefunofsportsandtherebyimprovingtheirhealth.
thereby的用法限制：
1
前面是逗号，而不是and2
后面是doing
Watchingmoviesbecameapopularpastimesince1999.
用“since+时间”,
要用完成时态
Mobilephonesbroughtconvenienceandenjoymenttoourcommute.
bringenjoymentto是介词，应该是tocommuting
Whenitcomestoteachchildrenlifeskills,parentsshouldtakeonmoreresponsibilities.
whenitcomesto的to是介词，应该是toteaching
Therearegoodschoolswhereprovideagoodeducationforchildren.‘
where应该改成which，定语从句修饰schools
Peoplecanliveinplaceswhichneartotheworkplace.
定语从句缺少谓语动词，将which
去掉
Livinginahorizontalcitywherehaslessskyscrapersisbeneficialtohealth.
“where”改成”which”，
less改成fewer
Livinginalargecitymayaffectourmoodsandthusinfluencingourworkandstudy.
thus前面的and改成逗号
Asmallerclasscanallowamuchfasterprogress.
去掉a
，
因为progress不可数
thepriceofresourceswillberised
rise不及物,
直接写willrise
theconsumptionofnaturalresourceshasnegativeimpacttolivingstandards.
应该是anegativeimpacton,
因为impact
可数名词
thehighcostoflivingposesathreattopeople’squalitiesoflife.
应该是qualityoflife，这里的quality是不可数名词
Ifshopsdonotsellunhealthyfood,peoplecouldbecomingmorehealthy.
应该是couldbecomehealthier
Theyhavetoundertheheavypressureatwork.
主系表结构缺乏系动词，应该是“havetobe”
Childrencanmakedecisionsindependentwhentheymeetdifficult.
independent形容词不能修饰动词，只有写independently，而difficult
是形容词，不能做宾语，应该是overcomedifficulties.
Theconsumptionof
someresourceshavecausedseverepotentialdamagetotheenvironment.
主语是consumption，
谓语动词应该是has
Recently,theusingoffossilfuelsarerequiredtocutdowngloballybyaninternationalorganisation.
recently
一般用完成时态；
Fossilfuelsasaessentialindustryresourceswhichbroughtbothbenefitsandpullotion.
这个句子没有动词，应该去掉which；
然后复数不能加上“a”，去掉、
Electronicbookscanbeextemmelypowerfulintermsofprovidingyouwithconvienceandmoney-saving.
money-saving是形容词，要变成savingmoney
Aincreasingnumberofpeopleusingdigitalbookinsteadoftherealone.
应该是anincreasing…；
而BOOK应该用复数books
Alargepopulationnormallymeansmorehouseholdgarbage,thusresultinseriouspollution.
1,thus不是连词，
result改成resulting
Inordertotravelconveniently,privatecarshaveincreased.
2privatecar不能做travelconveniently的主语，increase的是theprivatecaruse.
整句话是“theprivatecarusehasincreasedbecausepeoplewanttotravelconveniently”
Therearemoreandmorepeoplewanttoliveinurbanareas.
3want
前面加who，否则这个句子两个动词
Asthefastaccumulationofwaste,soildegradationwillbecomeseriousinsomeareas.
as是从属连词，后面加句子
aswasteaccumulatesrapidly
Thesepollutioninbigcitiesleadstomanydiseases.
These
只能加可数名词复数，而pollution不可数，可以说“thiskindofpollution”
Livinginmegacityisgoodforpeopleseekingmedicaladvises.
advice
不可数名词，而city可数名词没有复数。
Livinginurbaniseasyforpeopletofindmorehospitals.
主语错误，“easy”的主语不是“livingincities”，改成“itiseasyforpeopletofindhospitalsincities”
peoplecanputmoreenergytoworkandpromoteeconomicandtechnologicaldevelopment
主语错误，人不能“promotedevelopment”
livinginbigcitiesisconvenienttovisitadoctor.
主语错误，“convenient”的主语不是”livinginbigcities”，改成“itisconvenienttovisitadoctorinbigcities”
Peoplewhochangetheirjobsfromtimetotimemayenrichtheirlives.
主语不对，不是peopleenrichlife
Makingcareerchangesmeansembracechallengesaswellastakinggreatopportunities.
means后不能跟动词，应为“meansthattheycanembrace”
peoplewhoworkingindifferentcitiesmayenrichtheirwokingexperience.
定语从句的谓语不完整，应该是“workin”,
然后是“gainmoreexperience”
Beinginvolvedinanothercommunityactivitiesmayhelpthemtomixwithnewfriends.
another
不可以和名词复数连用，应该是“other”
Overworkingcanhaveadverseimpactontheirfamilyrelationship.
impact可数名词，应该是anadverseimpact
Workingovertimeleadsambitiouspeopletosufferstress-relatedhealthproblems.
“lead…to”这样使用很繁琐，直接说”ambitiouspeoplesuffer…becauseofworkingovertime”
Theypaylessattentiontofamilylives,whichmayleadtoaresultthattheycannotaccompanychildren.
“leadtoaresultthat”太过罗嗦，直接说“whichmeansthat”
Workinglonghoursmaybepronetohealthproblems.
逻辑主语有问题，应该是“peoplewhoworklonghours”
Childrenhaveeasilybetemptedtobuyproductswithoutconsideringtheprice.
完成时态的被动语态应该是“havebeentempted”
Parentssometimeshavetobudgetcarefullybecauseoftheseunnecessaryexpenditure.
these
后面要加名词复数，unnecessaryexpenses
Advertiserscanhaveanadverseimpactonchildren’slives.
Advertisers是广告商的意思，主语和后面的内容不匹配，应该改成advertisements
Childrencanbepersuadedbythoseadvertisingstopurchaseproducts.
advertisings改为advertisements,advertising不可数
Peoplesquandermoneyonholdingpartiestocelebratecanbeawasteofmoney.
主语不应该是人，而是“squanderingmoneyonparties”
Alargenumberofrestaurantorsupermarketgiveschoolsmoneytoputfastfoodadvertisementoncampus.
“restaurantsorsupermarkets”,
可数名词不裸奔
Itislikelytoaffectchildren’shealthifallowfastrestaurantstopromotefoodatschool.
if是从属连词，连接完整句子的，要有主语，应该是“governmentsallow…”
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