上海高考应用文讲义.docx

1、上海高考应用文讲义应用文写作之书信 -劝诫/鼓励朋友或同学一 写作结构指导开头：称呼第一段：开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交待的事由。 第二段：交代信中所反映的主要问题的看法和建议，不同内容可以分段。第三段：表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。结尾：结束语和署名二 常用句型I am writing to share with you my opinion about it.Its quite natural/understandable for you to do, however,uFrom my point of view, you should never go to extremes.

2、I hope my advice can be of some help to you.I wonder if you can take my suggestions into consideration.I am looking forward to your good news.三 优秀范文欣赏2003年上海高考作文及范例 你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。受信人：徐海青 寄信人：黄平 写信日期：2003年六月八日 June 8, 2003Dear Xu Haiqing,You said in your letter that many of your

3、classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldnt afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on peoples wear. The following are my ideas about it.Firstly, you shouldnt put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most

4、 important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.” So, secondly, you must understand that it is a fine virtue t

5、o learn live in frugality. Since your family is not able to provide you with enough money to buy clothes of the best brands, it is all the more necessary for you to try every means to lighten the financial burden of your family. You will find the virtue of frugality will benefit you a lot in your la

6、ter life.I hope you understand what I mean. I am sure you will take a positive attitude towards life and will be happy again when you read my letter. (205 words) Yours, Huangping四 实战练习假设你是John，你的朋友Angela在数学学习上遇到一些困难，上课听不懂，课后作业也不能独立完成，几次考试都不及格，她很苦恼，感到自卑，甚至想辍学。请你给她写封信，谈谈你的看法和建议。-申请/ 自荐信一 写作结构指导开头：称呼第一

7、段：介绍自己，开门见山地说明写信的意图，即信的开头要交待的事由。 第二段：阐明申请或自荐的原因、自己的优势或理由第三段：表达美好祝愿，期待对方回信。结尾：结束语和署名二 常用句型I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in . I would like to write a letter to tell you that.I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are adverti

8、sing.I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, . On the other hand, . I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response fr

9、om you at your earliest convenienceI am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.Best regards for your health and success.三，高考作文点评假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1 个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2 个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3 承诺：提供最佳服务注意：1 词数100左右，开头语已为你写好2 可适当

10、增加细节，以使行文连贯3 生词：申请apply (v.),application(n.) 志愿者volunteerDear Sir / Madam: My name is Lihua .I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. 思考：避免每句都用第一人称I开头；内容要点1.年龄、性别2.学历及英语水平3.爱好体育、熟悉本地4.善于交往、乐于助人5.承诺6.合适的结尾【同学范文1】第一档（很差）1-5分Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Lihua. I would like to wo

11、rk as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am an 18 girl. As a local people, I know the roads and Buildings very clear. I like sports very much. By several years training, I am almost good at every sports.Now I am a student. In school, my English is good, I am also a Kind girl. When I know someo

12、ne is in difficulty, I will give him or her to defeat it.The Games will be held in the city where I am live. I would like to a volunteer, if the dream comes true, I will try my best to improve the level of my service. As a volunteer is my gloary. I wish I can become one.Best wishes for you.点评：【同学范文2

13、】第二档（较差）5-10分Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.I am a 17 years old girl. And I am a senior 2 students in NO.1 Senior School of . My English is good and I am good at PE.I like to do things for others. Because I think helping others is

14、helping myself. When someone has difficult in doing things, I am always ready to help him. And I like to communication is the bridge of the world. Because the world is a big family.I hear that the Games will be held in this place where I lives. I hope to be a volunteer. Because by this, I can lean a

15、bout the world and take exercise. I can provide the best service for the Games. I know the situation here. I believe I can do well. 点评：要点安排混乱，部分要点理解错误；拼写、语法错误较多，部分句型结构有问题；【同学范文3】第三档（适当）11-15分Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Lihua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I am a brave boy of 16 years old. I can speak English fluently. Besides, I do well in getting on well(用词重复) with other students. I am glad to help others. I know all interesting places here.If I become a member of volunteers, I will try my best to introduce my hometown to visit