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1、 to double/triple 替代twice or three times;3）尽量使用派生形式来点缀文章亮点。如be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of替代indicate, suggest ,fear; it is of great importance/ help/ use/ significance 替代 it is very important/ significant/ helpful/ useful; not unnecessary/ not unimportant。（2）开头结尾新颖脱俗文章的开篇方法多种多样，大家

2、必须根据文章的题材、体裁、读者等来加以选择。作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：开门见山,直入主题开始段可用简洁的语言直陈主题思想，既可以吸引读者的注意力，又可以避免跑题。例如：主题：Euthanasia（安乐死）It has been said that euthanasia is quietly being practiced in some urban areas of China, despite a lack of legal protection for the death option. In my opinion, it is right to exercise mercy ki

3、lling.该段第一句引入安乐死这一讨论的主题，第二句接着直接陈述作者对安乐死的看法。从这个开始段不难看出，全文将阐述“为什么实行安乐死是对的”。以问句形式开头,点明主题文章的开头还可用设问的方式点明主题，提示全文内容，激发读者读下去，探个究竟。Water ShortageChina, a country blessed with a great number of rivers, has abundant water resources. However, Chinas many cities are going thirsty. What has caused（contribute to,

4、 result in） the shortage?本段第一句说中国水资源丰富，第二句指出中国许多城市却缺水，第三句提出了读者心中的疑问：是什么原因导致缺水呢?从而激发读者的兴趣，吸引读者读下去，寻找问题的答案。引用名言、谚语，点明主题开始段还可以巧妙引用与主题相关的名言、常用习语、谚语、格言等，既可增强文章的感染力，也可点题或表明作者的观点。A proverb says, “You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）Just as th

5、e saying goes, “ so many people, so many minds”, it is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person to person. To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.引用名言，使文章很自然进入主题，同时也增强了文章的感染力。运用数字统计原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字，可是在考试的时候可以编造数字。According to a recent survey, about 78.

6、9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.A recent statistics shows that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge

7、 waste.文章开头使用数字，这样吸引读者的注意，并且是描写显得生动有力。（3） 结尾段（Concluding Paragraph）结尾段同开篇一样重要。结尾段对全文要点进行概括总结、表达作者的目的，以求留给读者一个深刻完整的印象，增强文章的效果。文章结尾的形式常见的有以下几种: 总结全文,得出结论结尾段可用总结全文的方式强调、概括全文的主要内容，加深读者对全文的深刻了解与认识。主题：Physical exerciseIn a word, I benefit a lot from doing physical exercise. I seldom get sick but feel vigo

8、rous even after a whole days work. I shall keep up doing physical exercise so as to live happily and fruitfully.本段总结了全文，加深读者对“体育锻炼有益于健康”这一主题的认识。建议与结论文章的结尾常结合两种写法。有的先提出建议或解决办法，再做结论。有的则先做出结论，再提出建议，例如：Shortage of natural resources（自然资源短缺）The prolonged （sustained） development of human society proves tha

9、t population and economic and social progress eventually cannot be achieved without natural resources. To save the limited resources, we must take some measures to handle appropriately the relationship between the population and resources.该段首先进行总结：人类社会持续的发展证明，如果没有自然资源，人口的繁衍、经济和社会的发展最终都是不可能的。作者接着建议，为

10、了节约有限的资源，我们必须采取一些措施，正确处理人口与资源的关系。提醒读者事物的两面性文章的结尾还可以以转折的形式，提醒读者任何事物都有两面性，从而认识到其不足或负面的影响。Solar Energy（太阳能）However, solar energy has its disadvantages. One is that it is still very expensive for widespread practical use. Besides, solar systems would not work in cloudy or rainy days as well as at night.

11、 But in sunny areas, solar energy could help solve the energy crisis.该段指出了太阳能的两个缺点：一、太贵;二、太阳能系统在阴雨天和晚上无法工作，从而让人们更全面地了解太阳能。值得注意的是，在指出某一事物的另一面时，不能用太多笔墨，否则会喧宾夺主，淡化主题思想。Computers As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives,

12、despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.（4）巧妙运用名言警句结尾段：用名言警句收尾，意在引申文章内涵，充分表明考生自己的观点，极具说服力，收到“言有尽而意无穷”的效果，起到了画龙点睛的作用。Therefore, we should never underestimate our own ability but should believe in the proverb: “Where there

13、 is a will, there is a way.”Confidence is a must for success4）四级考试词汇不足采取措施：在四级作文写作过程中，很多考生往往有很多话要说，但是词汇量不足无法完整表达自己的意思。为了应付这种情况，我们总结简便易行的应急措施：试用笼统词英语中有些具体词音节较多，使用频率不高，容易遗忘，而英语中笼统词有have, take 等，它的意义广泛，搭配性强，构成词组后可以替代众多具体动词，大致表达意思。例如：这个男孩跟他爸爸长得很像。The boy resembles his father.分析：这个句子中，如果考生想不起resemble这个单词

14、时，用take after代替。如：The boy takes after his father.其效果及表达的意义决不亚于第一句。这样的例子还很多。I experienced a terrible hard time.= I had a terrible hard time.I will preside over the meeting.= I will take the meeting.联想有关词汇当遗忘单词时，发挥想象力，想出一切与之有关的单词，多角度地运用语言。一般情况下，联想可按下列思路进行：1联想同义词;2联想反义词。英语语言中众多的同义词在许多情况下是可以通用的。但也要注意英语同

15、义词并不是完全对等，要根据具体语境选择同义词。The driver stepped on the gas and accelerated the car.accelerate 使用频率不太高，很容易遗忘。而其同义词quicken; speed up却很容易记。以后者取代前者丝毫不影响原句的意义。再如：the prevailing economic conditions in Northern Ireland= the current economic conditions in Northern Ireland同样，用其反义词来取代某一遗忘了的词也是可行的，例如：He is stubborn.

16、= He is not tame.She is talkative.= She is never quiet.试用解释性语句解释性语句能帮助我们巧妙地避开一些大词，难词，又能使意思表达流畅。英语当中多功能解释性语句，就可以起到这一作用。He is a dumb.= He is a person who can not speak.Ive never seen such a stubborn person.= Ive never seen such a person who never listens to others advice.四级作文的评分标准一般侧重于能清楚地表达意义，段落，层次有系统性，语法正确，而并不过分强调用词的精确度。当考生碰到难词或遗忘词时，不要钻牛角尖，应该采取灵活的思维方法，运用有限的词汇作出美妙的文章。