1、6.根据书写质量,将文章分为好、差、较差三个档次,从应得分中减去02分。二、各档次给分范围及要求:第五档(很好):(2530分)很好地完成了试题规定的任务。 对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述,清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。 语法结构和词汇的选用恰当、丰富。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。第四档(好):(1924分)较好地完成了试题规定的任务。对题中所提供的信息进行了描述,表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准
2、确,些许错误主要是因为因尝试较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。使用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。第三档(适当):(1318分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。 能描述题中的信息,表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面错误,但不影响理解。使用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。第二档(较差):(712分)未适当完成试题规定的任务。能涉及题目所提供的信息,体现了对问题的看法及其原因。语法结构单调,词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(差
3、):(16分)未完成试题规定的任务。很少涉及题目所提供的信息,个人观点表达不清,而且没有阐述原因。较多语法结构或词汇方面错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。0分信息未能传达给读者。未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;写的内容与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。One possible version:Dear Zhang Hua, Im sorry to hear that you didnt do well in your last exam.You are not the only one who seems to try his best but en
4、dsup with a failure in exams.Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and dont want to study hard any longer.Im sure you know that its unwise to do so because you might be left far behind. I was once in the same situation as yours.Failure is the moth
5、er of success.In face of failure,what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice. Anyway,Rome is not built in a day.Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success.I truly ho
6、pe I can be of some help to you.Yours,(山东省临沂市2011届高三上学期期中考试) 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急这一情况,请参照以下提示,用英文写一份倡议书,提倡无偿献血(donate blood for free)。 社会上对献血的错误认识; 指出献血的意义; 开展相关活动。注意:1.字数120150;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头与结尾已为你写好。*Boys and girls,Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be s
7、hort of blood supplies. 第二节 书面表达(满分30分)One possible version Recently some blood banks across the country are reported to be short of blood supplies. Some people hold the wrong idea that donating blood does harm to the donators health so we shouldnt donate our blood to others. But the truth is that w
8、hen a small amount of blood is taken out, the body will make a quick adjustment to work normally.As we know, donating blood is of great importance. Blood is important to patients, without which many of them cant survive. And to the youth in the new age, not only is donating blood for free a social r
9、esponsibility, but also it is the spirit of cooperation and sharing.We senior high school students who have a better understanding of medical knowledge should set a good example to other people. From now on, our school will hold a series of activities to tell people the benefits of donating blood. D
10、o it now, starting from you and your family. Students Union英语作文评分细则分档分数范围标准极优档 30书写规范;覆盖所有要点,内容充实;词汇丰富,有修辞意识。优秀 2629紧扣主题;语法结构多样,词汇丰富,显示出较强的语言运用能力。语言小错(拼写、标点、用词等)不超过6个。良好 2225紧扣主题,覆盖所有要点,内容较充实,语言有少量错误,但基本不影响意思表达。一般 1821紧扣主题,基本覆盖所有要点,能够表达基本内容;语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达,但多数句子基本正确。较差 1317内容不完整,要点不全,行文不连贯;语言错误(尤其是大
11、错)较多,多数句子基本正确。差 612内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题,能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差 05只能写出与内容相关的词语,没有有效信息;抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容。 注意事项:1.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否及格。2.词数少于120,应从得分中减去2分。关于大错、小错的问题:1.小错:单词拼写、冠词、大小写、标点符号错误。2.大错:搭配错误、词语用错(介词、名词、动词、形容词、副词)、时态、语态、主谓一致、非谓语动词、句式等错误。(山东省罗美中学2011届高三11月月考) 90后出生的学生,思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是一名90后出生的学生刘林
12、,请根据下表中所提供信息以“Do trust usa generation born in the 90s”为题写一篇英语演讲稿,以消除人们的忧虑。90后的境遇面临更多的升学和就业烦恼,所处环境竞争更加激烈。人们的忧虑1注重自我,轻视合作,2缺乏毅力,容易气馁,3盲目追求,渴望成名,我们的长处敢于挑战,(请考生联系自己拟定内容,再列举两至三点。)1对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 2词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。 3演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech toda
13、y is “Do trust usa generation born in the 90s” Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed Thank you for your listening!写作 (One Possible Version) Living in an environment full of
14、fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employedUnder these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised peoples concern They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilli
15、ng to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we doBesides, they consider us as lacking in determination, and this is what it takes to do any job wellWithout it, we may easily give up in time of difficultyThey are also concerned that we are so eager to win in
16、stant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknessesFirstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreamsIn addition, we are quick-m
17、inded and creativeWe can do our work more efficientlyYet, we still need to learn more from those experiencedPlease do trust us!(山东省潍坊市诸城一中2011届高三12月阶段测试)作为一名中学生,和老师建立良好的师生关系是必要的。请你围绕这个话题,根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文,谈谈自己的看法。3.如何才能建立这种关系?注意:词数120150左右,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。As a middle school student,it is necessary to bu
18、ild a good relationship with our teachcrs. As a middle scbool student,it is necessary to build a good relationship witn our teacners,for it is the teachers who show love and concern for us students in study and life and they are good listenersWe students can always seek support and advice from them,
19、from which we can benefit and learn a lotIn this case,an ideal relationship between teachers and students is very important.In my opinion,this relationship should be one filled with love,care,understanding,and respect, so they can exchange ideas freely.To build a relationship of this kind,teachers s
20、hould become friends of students while students ought to trust their teachers and give voice to their feeling frankly.Only by joint efforts can we enjoy a warm relationship between teachers and students.写作评分标准: 一、极优档30分 书写规范,覆盖所有要点,内容充实;(山东省莘县一中2011届高三上学期期中考试) Teenagers杂志Conversation With Brad栏目的负责人
21、Brad收到了李华的一封来信。仔细阅读下面的来信,帮助Brad用英语写一封回信, 给出分析并提出合理建议。Dear Brad, Im a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfiedSo I feel lonely sometimes. I would be grateful if you co
22、uld give me some advice.Li Hua 1.可适当增加细节。2.词数: 120-150。Dear Li Hua, I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.写作(30分) 评分原则1本题总分为30分,按5个档次给分。2评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次。判断文章档次时,要注意要点,更要注意按照词汇及语法结构运用及表达方法总体评价文章。3拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。4.语法结构和词汇方面的错误主要
23、指以下几种:主谓不一致,动词形式(句子时态和语态)不对,词组搭配不当、句子结构错误、词序不当、关键词用错。5. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。6.词数少于120和多于150的,从总分中减去2分。各档次的给分范围和要求档次分数内容要点词汇运用及语法结构运用表达五(最好)27-30覆盖所有要点,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有些语言错误,但因尽力使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇所致。具备较强的语言应用能力,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。全文结构紧凑。四(好)23-26虽漏掉 1-2个次重点但覆盖所有主要内容。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简
24、单语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。基本完成了试题规定的任务,达到了预期的写作目的。三(适当)18-22虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖主要内容 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容边贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。二(较差)12-17漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调,词汇知识有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性,未恰当完成试题规定的任务。一(差)11-5明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。较多
25、语法结构或词汇方面的错误影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯,未完成试题规定的任务。0-4无可读信息或信息不相关。One possible version:I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. I have to say that you are not alone when having trouble communicating with your parents. Almost everybody has it or had it when they were in their
26、adolescence. Therefore, its a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”.As for my advice for you, first, dont hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, convince them you have tried your best. It is not their
27、 fault to place high expectations on their child. I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard. Anyway, there is no one who love you more than your parents in the world. Whatever you are, they will always be there for you
28、. Love them, and love can heal everything. Yours sincerely, Brad(山西省2011届高三第二次四校联考)第二节 书面表达(满分25分)假如你是李华,你暑假期间要去英国某语言学校进行短期学习。以下是英方学校寄给你的课程安排选择表。请你仔细阅读安排表,按要求给校方回复一封信。Schedule for Summer English CoursesEnglish CoursesTotal Hours of Study and Day-TripDate Tuition(学费)six-week course75 hours of study;five days of t
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