近五年湖北高考英语作文分析Word文件下载.docx

1、B1U1（friendship）B7U3（teamwork）B3U3（cooperation）B7U4（sharing）2012结合事例谈论人生观：所得与所用120左右/11830分2013结合事例说明语言的力量120左右B1U2（English）二近五年高考写作规律 1. 开放式作文为大趋势2. 字数增加，从100字到120字左右3. 分值加重，从25分到30分4. 题材贴近学生生活，现实感强，易于动笔5. 话题与高中教材密切联系三2013评分原则 本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。词数少于100，将分数降低一个档次。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量

2、，确定或调整档次，最后给分。评分档次的确定应在内容符合题目要求的前题下侧重于语言的表达。评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容切题，语言表达准确、多样、连贯、得体。拼写与标点符号是语言表达准确的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写太潦草，以至影响辨认，将分数降低一个档次。四、各档次的给分范围和要求 第五档25-30分 完全完成了试题规定的任务。所有内容与提示吻合。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇。语法结构与词汇应用准确，虽有个别错误，但不影响意义的表达；具备较强的语言运用能力。恰当使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档19

3、-24分完成了试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示吻合。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构与词汇应用基本准确，个别错误对意义的表达有一定影响。较恰当地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档13-18分基本完成了试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示比较吻合。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构与词汇的错误，对意义的表达有较大影响。基本能使用语句间的连接成分，全文结构比较松散。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档7-12分仅完成试题规定的部分任务。主要内容与提示基本吻合。语法结构单调，应用词汇有限。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的

4、表达。语句间的连接成分运用不当，缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档1-6分未完成试题规定的任务。主要内容与提示不太吻合。语法结构单一，应用词汇十分有限。有较多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。五写作步骤 审题考生动笔前要仔细阅读试题，明确写作要求。审题包括审写作要求、审文体、审写作核心内容、审写作时态及语态和审人称等方面的内容。 拟点就是通过审题，拟出写作的基本的重难点，找出五六个动词或动词短语；有时还可构思一些写作可能

5、要用的句型、句式。然后再提炼要点，以备下一步使用。根据提示，理顺要点，既可保证不遗漏所要表达的信息，又可使表达的内容条理清晰。联句将上一步列出来的要点逐句表达出来，这是书面表达写作时较为关键的一步。完成这个步骤要注意：书面表达重在达意，千万不要简单直译，要用自己最有把握的短语或句型将意思完整、准确地表达出来。如果碰到汉语提示中有一时找不到相对应的英语词语或句型时，不要轻易放弃，因为英语中常常会有一句多译的现象。尽可能多地运用较高级的词汇和较复杂的语法结构，如复合句、倒装句、并列句、强调句和分词结构等。选择正确的人称、时态、语态等进行表达。如果是记叙文，还要写明时间、地点和人物。成文就是将写好的

6、句子组织起来，形成段落式短文。要注意使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语，以增强文章的连贯性和流畅性。润色就是有意识地将一些“低级词汇”转换成“高级词汇”，将一些“简单结构”转换成“高级结构”，以凸显文章亮点，增加得高分的机会，例如使用新颖词汇或句型等。六提纲式作文的写作方法 1特点 提纲式书面表达是把材料分割成信息块，列成独立的文字信息。此类试题中有较多的文字说明实际上是规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能少。由于这类试题包含较多的文字说明，容易改变书面表达的性质，使作文成为了翻译。因此，考生应灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方

7、式将试题要求的要点完整的表达出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。此类试题主要学生的实际语言能力。2例题（2009年湖北高考作文） 假设你是华华，与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信，以提高各自的外语水平。最近你收到汤姆的电子邮件（附后），发现有一个成语使用不当。请根据下列要点，用英文回一封电子邮件。要点：1. 不应使用“无所不为”，应使用“无所事事”；2. 说明这两个成语的用法；3. 给予鼓励。注意：1.词数为100左右；2.参考释义：无所不为- do all kinds of bad things无所事事- have nothing to do;3.除以上两个成语外，邮件中不得使用其他汉字或拼音

8、；4.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数），但不得抄入答题卡。附（汤姆的邮件）：华华，你好！近几天在忙什么事？有什么有意思的事吗？我们的学校放假了，所以这几天我在家无 所不为，饱食终日，只好上网发伊妹儿。没意思，我决定找份工作，做个自食其力的人。祝好！3范文欣赏 Hi! Tom,Nice to read your e-mail today. I notice youve begun to use Chinese idioms and used most of them correctly.However, Im afraid there is one mistake Id lik

9、e to point out. It is “无所不为”. This idiom means “do all kinds of bad things”. Are you doing all kinds of bad things at home? I guess what you were really trying to say is that youve got nothing to do these days. In that case, you should use “无所事事”. We usually use “无所不为” to express the idea that peopl

10、e dare to do anything bad, and “无所事事” to describe the situation in which people have got nothing meaningful to do. Have I made myself clear?Anyway, Im amazed at the progress youve made.Hope youll find a job soon.Huahua4常用句式（书信）Im writing to tell you about.Im very much delighted to inform you that.I

11、apologize to for not writing to you for a long time.It was so good to hear from you and I shall be very pleased to let you have the information you need.Im very have to hear that you are all enjoying good health.Give my regards to.Im looking forward to your early reply.Please remember me to your par

12、ents/ family.5即学即练习 假如你叫陈宇，你的英国笔友Mike在上次来信中谈到了低碳生活这个话题。最近几个月校倡导学生过低碳生活、过节约生活、做有责任感的公民，引导学生从出行、购物、用水、家电和餐具使用方面反省自己的生活方式。请你用英文给Mike回信。回信要点如下：1你对低碳生活的理解2你校开展的活动3你最近生活方式的改变（至少选取三个方面）1词数为100左右；2参考词汇 低碳生活 low carbon life （style）3信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）Dear Mike,How are things going? In your last letter you

13、 talked about low carbon life. Now Id like to share my understanding of it and my experience in the past few months.Im really glad to communicate with you about this topic. Yours Chen Yu范文：With the environment problem coming into attention, it is extremely important that we take action to protect ou

14、r planet. As more people are determined to make a difference, low carbon lifestyle provides us with the perfect opportunity to do it.Interest tingly, our school called on students to develop a low carbon lifestyle and become a responsible citizen several months ago. In response to the appeal, I have

15、 made some changes in my way of life, which ranges from transportation to water saving. For example, instead of asking my parents to drive me to school, I take a bus to and from school. just like my schoolmates, I now refuse to use disposable chopsticks. At home, I even persuade my parents to reuse

16、water, even though it is not so convenient. TV and computer are important entertainment for my family, but we sometimes read instead, which, I think, may help relieve the shortage of electricity.6趋势 提纲式作文考查的机率已不再大，因为提纲式的作文不能反映出学生的真实水平，只是进行中文要点的翻译而已，也不符合高校选拔人才的要求。七开放式作文的写作方法 开放式作文类似语文考试中的材料作文，试题给出考生一

17、定的素材或主题，让考生在此基础上自由发挥，自由创作，不受“文体形式，内容要点”的限制，甚至不受短文词数的限制。这种开放式作文和目前其他形式的书面表达相比，难度更大，要求更高 2例题（2011年湖北高考作文） We all know that “sticks and stones may break our bones”, but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。Sometimes, bad words are t

18、o us what knives to our body. I learned this from one of my experiences that I went through during Senior One school life.One day, when I was playing volleyball with my classmates in my PE class, I missed several chances that I should have grasped to meet the ball. What surprised me most was that my

19、 best friend Peter called me “fool”. I was so hurt that I almost accepted the fact that our friendship came to an end. It was my classmates comfort and persuasion as well as Peters apology and explanation that helped me realize he did have a strong sense of cooperation and teamwork. It wasnt long be

20、fore I forgave him and we were again close friends as ever.From this story, I am definitely convinced that bad words really have bad influence on us, and that only with a good understanding of them can we get through and get along well.4写作方法 例：请你根据以下提示，结合生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈微笑的作用。The best example of

21、 universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.无须写标题；内容只需涉及一个方面；词数为100左右。1）步骤 第一段：引出话题 开头第一段引出话题，点出观点，可用到主语从句和定语从句。It is well-known that smile is the most

22、 pleasant expression in life, from which we can benefit a lot, for example, getting encouragement and building up confidence.也可运用谚语格言的方式吸引读者注意，同时引出话题，点出观点。There is a saying that goes, “life is much like a mirror. If you smile upon it ,it smiles back upon you.”, with which you can get along well with

23、 others. 第二段：写一个事例，举例论证法，记叙文段落 正文部分，则可运用写记叙文的方式结合事例进行叙事论证自己的观点。要注意连词的使用，使叙述有逻辑条理，连贯通顺。Take myself as an example, When I first learned English, I found it was not as easy as I had thought before. Disappointed, I decided to quit. At this time My English teacher came to me, saying, “I believe you can d

24、o it. After that, she gave me a big shining smile. Suddenly, I was full of confidence again. Since then, a confident smile has always been on my face whenever a challenge comes to me. 第三段：你的观点，议论文段落。结尾部分，重申话题和观点，回应开头，对好的方面要有提倡，利弊都有的方面要进行度的把握。2）总结：作文模版可为 It is well-known that . is the most . in life,

25、 from which we can . for example. Take myself as an example, When I first . Disappointed.Suddenly.Finally.Since then.In conclusion, . can bring us . with which .It is advocated that we should Only with can we 3）即学即练：（2011年湖北高考英语作文） 请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。Working in groups at school

26、 is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other peoples roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people.内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为100左右。It is well-known that teamwork is the most important way of solving probl

27、em in life, through which we can complete the task efficiently.Take myself as an example, I was the leader of a football team. Once in a match, our team failed although all the members had tried their best. Later the coach told us the with key point was teamwork, which means we should cooperate with

28、 each other. Realizing the importance of teamwork, finally we succeed.In conclusion, teamwork can help us play the role of every member at best. Only with teamwork can we make our complicated work easier.4常用词汇短语 1occur 替换 think ofSuddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. An idea

29、occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.2devote替换spendHe spends all his spare time in reading. He devotes all his spare time to reading.3seek替换want / look forThey sought （wanted ） to hide themselves behind the trees.4average 替换ordinaryI m an average （ ordinary ） student.5but替换veryThe film we saw last night was very interesting.