小初高学习专题06 书面表达第02期届高三英语百所好题速递分项解析汇编.docx

1、小初高学习专题06 书面表达第02期届高三英语百所好题速递分项解析汇编【浙江省“五校联考”2019届高三上学期第一次考试】假如你是李华，你的好友Tom想约你明晚和他家人共进晚餐，但你因故不能应约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 弥补方法。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Tom,Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret th

2、at I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private me

3、eting afterward? If so, please dont hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.Please allow me to say sorry again.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文为应用文中的书信的写作。假如你是李华，因故不能友John 应约支与朋友一起共进晚餐，据此用英语写一封致歉信。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不

4、要逐字逐句翻译，要注意谋篇布局，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时。第二节 概要写作（满分25分）47. 【浙江省“五校联考”2019届高三上学期第一次考试】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush. It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry. However, its better for people to take

5、 their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush. When people do their jobs or take action in a hurry, they cant make a sound decision and probably regret l

6、ater. As the saying goes, Haste makes waste. We should think carefully before making a decision and do our work less quickly. We should not make mistakes by doing work hurriedly.Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better. For example, taking a train to some place certainly wi

7、ll take more time than taking a plane. However, taking a train makes people have enough time to get to know a lot of new friends. Besides, it allows people to fully enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way. On the contrary, being in a hurry will make us lose chances of enjoying our lives.Finally, s

8、lower life pace provides better health conditions for us. As is known to all, taking action in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress. People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them. But being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally. Ac

9、cording to some studies, people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter.In short, working quickly will bring about more material benefits to make our society more

10、advanced. Yet, much stress cant bring enjoyment, friends and health, which are much more important than money and other material advantages. Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace._【答案】Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead

11、a slower life. (要点一) Firstly, slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking. (要点二) Secondly, more opportunities to enjoy life are allowed by a slower pace. (要点三) Lastly, better health condition physically and mentally is also what a slower life brings. (要点四) Ther

12、efore, lets take a slower life from now on.【解析】【详解】文章涵盖了全部要点，在写作中注意使用非谓语，句式简单明了，同时能正确地使用连词firstly，secondly，lastly.把文章有机地联合起来。作者抓住了关键词，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，用简洁的语言概括了文章重要信息。文章中多处运用了非谓语。如动词的ing形式作状语：Despite being accustomed to the fast pace in modern society, people are recommended to lead a slower life；动词的i

13、ng形式作主语: slowing down lowers the possibility of committing errors by comprehensive thinking；表语从句：better health condition physically and mentally is also what a slower life brings和祈使句：lets take a slower life from now on【山西省吕梁市2018届高三上学期第一次阶段性测试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David 下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件

14、，要求如下：1.表示歉意并说明理由；2.安排他人接机。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。_【答案】Dear David,I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I cant wait to see you. However, I am sorry to tell you that I cant meet

15、you at the airport that day. My sister fell ill and was taken to the hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But dont worry. Ive asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. Whats more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, whi

16、ch I think you may be interested in. Of course you can also visit other tourist attractions by yourself. Meanwhile, I will call you the moment I am available.Im expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。【点睛】本文是一封电子邮件，内容完整，语言规范，语

17、篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I cant wait to see you.现在分词做原因状语；which I think you may be interested in.句中使用which引导的非限制性定语从句；I will call you the moment I am available.此处the moment引导时间状语从句；另外，However, Whats more, Meanwhile,等

18、的运用为文章增色添彩。【湖北省仙桃中学2019届高三8月考试英】假如你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒着贴的，感到很好奇，写信向你询问此事。请你给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他高考后来你家过端午节。参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival；福字the character Fu注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter._Looking forw

19、ard to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,Im really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upsid

20、e down” sounds the same as the character for “ to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isnt it?By the way, Id like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. Its a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we

21、usually eatzongziand enjoy dragon boat races. Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。【点睛】文中使用了由as引导的非限制性定语从句As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down

22、during the Spring Festival. 运用了that引导的宾语从句this means that happiness is arriving.以及反意疑问句Quite interesting, isnt it?还运用了由it作形式主语的句子Itll be a good opportunity to experience truly Chinese culture and tradition.较高级词汇the same as，by the way，in memory of，look forward to也为文章增色不少。【河北省邢台市2019届高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你倾诉他近来对网络社交媒体上瘾。这已严重影响了他的生活和学习。请你给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1表示安慰2提出建议（关掉手机；发展新爱好；多和家人朋友待在一起）。注意1词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_