1、8.takesth. intoaccount/consideration 把考虑在内9.with regard to 关于;就10. put forward 提出11.inthisregard/inrespect 在这点上/在这方面12.sharesth. withsb. 与某人分享某事13.withtimegoingon 随着时间的推移14. Be faced with 面临15.takesth. seriously 重视;认真对待 第一部分:说明写信的目的套语:1. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your n
2、ew school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个
3、月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. Im writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients(顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法,以吸引更多顾客。4.You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.你关于
4、如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。5. Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。6. Im very glad to have received your e-mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice on how to learn English w
5、ell in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。第二部分:介绍详情、说明原因 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始,四点钟结束,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there
6、at 9:00. (3) 下午,我们会一起During the afternoon, well.together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下,你可以乘坐322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语,还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。I know you are a native spea
7、ker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。Im sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分:提出建
8、议我建议Id like to suggest thatMay I suggest that?In my opinionI would like to make a recommendation thatI am writing to adviseIf I were you, I would第四部分:希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。2.
9、I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。3. Best wishes!(给你)最美好的祝愿!I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何,我希望这些
10、建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。5.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我
11、的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我。模板Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to_, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _(建议的内容).I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matte
12、r with you to further details.Good luck with your_(祝愿).Yours Sincerely,Li Hua模板Dear_, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to _. Then, it also helps to _. Besides, it should be a good idea to _. You
13、can also _.(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议,如下)As to _, I suggest _(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _(其他的建议). Im sure _(预测可能的结果, 给对方以行为的信心和决心).I hope _(表达愿望)。 1. 建议信写作注意事项 建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,不是投诉信。观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。2. 写作方法 首段:a. 简介自己,不要罗嗦;b. 说明目的,注意语气。 主体:a. 提出具体建议;b. 首先肯定优点,再写改进内容,否则会变成投诉信;c. 经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提到你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论
14、文。尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,使对方易于接受。3. 写作流程图说明写信目的提出希望采纳建议,并表示谢意,盼望回复典例01假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;(3)希望从中有何收获。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im L
15、i Jim,a student at Chenguang High School._Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【写作指导】这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起
16、到事半功倍的效果.【范文】m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. I got the news that your school will send teachers to my school for a week-long summer exchange. During the activity,you will give a lecture on Western art. You want to seek for advice on what topic the lecture will be about. From my persona
17、l note,music is my priority.I am interested in all kinds of music,among which Jazz is my favorite. I want to know about the history of jazz,and some famous jazz singers. I would appreciate it if you can add some sessions of enjoying jazz.一、评分原则1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要
18、求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后综合给分。3. 词数少于100的,从总分中减去2分。4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分,原则上不超过3分,重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误,将视其对交际的影响程度的情减分。6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1. 你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);2. 选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容;3. 希望从中有何收获。三、各档次的给分范围和要求分数
19、档内容语法结构和词汇衔接和连贯整体效果第五档21-25分(很好)覆盖所有内容要点,并有适当发挥。应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇;表达准确、地道;有个别错误,但不影响对写作内容的理解。有效使用衔接手段,内容连贯,结构紧凑具备较强的语言运用能力;完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档16-20分(好)覆盖所有内容要点。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务要求;表达基本准确,些许错误对写作内容的理解影响不大。应用了简单的连接成分,全文结构较紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的第三档1115分(一般)漏掉一些内容,覆盖部分内容要点。应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务要求;有一些错误,对写作内容的理解造成了一定影响。应用了简单
20、的连接成分,内容基本连贯。基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档6-10分(较差)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,有一些无关内容。语法结构单调,词汇项目有限;错误较多,且在很大程度上影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档15分(差)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关的内容,可能未理解试题要求错误较多,严重影响了对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。基本信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。典例02(2017北京卷)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国
21、旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,试题分析:本文为提纲类作文。首先,学生要仔细阅读提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。其次,要注意提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后,要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信,按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构,三段式,其中第一段写你所建议
22、的路线,第二部分是本文的主体,要阐述你所建议的路线的原因,好让 他们有很好的掌握,最后一段,提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【范文赏析】Dear Jim, Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I pre
23、fer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.典例03学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。_这篇书面表达属于提纲类范畴,这篇作文
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