1、2. 构思点津本文是一篇“现象解释”型议论文,要求考生围绕低碳生活方式进行论述,分析低碳生活盛行的原因并提出如何进行低碳生活的建议。模板共享A hot topic, throughout the worldA minimal output emission to biosphereClimate changeTrigger many natural disastersA threat to lives and propertiesThe way we dress, eat, travel contribute to Transportation, home heating and travel
2、Care about influence other people佳作赏析“Low-carbon” has become a hot topic among people, and many countries throughout the world advocate low-carbon economy, which refers to an economy that has a minimal output of greenhouse gas into the biosphere, but specifically refers to the greenhouse gas carbon
3、dioxide.The main reason for the coming of the low-carbon time is the climate change and thus triggering many natural disasters, which are a great threat to the lives and properties of human beings. So, in order to control the influence of greenhouse gas, we should lead the way to a low-carbon lifest
4、yle. Helping save the planet is part of our daily routine, the way we dress, what we eat and how we travel are all factors that contribute to the new lifestyle.A low-carbon lifestyle covers many aspects of modern life, such as transportation, home heating, and holiday travel, which can be conducted
5、in a way that gives the maximum reduction of personal carbon emissions. Besides, when we have tried our best to care about society, we should also try to influence people around us. 3. 构思点津这是一篇社会现象分析类的作文。按照惯例首先应说明要分析的社会现象,然后分析此类现象的原因,最后提出自己的看法。在四级考试的作文中,三段论模式总是安全的。本文分析的是社会热点话题之一:海外留学生回国的原因。在第一段中首先说明
6、近年来“海归”人数越来越多,第二段分析其中的原因,最后一段写自己的观点。With the carrying out of the reform and opening-up policy, there is a growing number of.With the development of peoples living standard / modern science and technology, more and more.One is not surprised to find that.It is well-known / well-accepted / common that.
7、Several factors account for this change / phenomenon.There are several contributing factors. Firstly . Secondly . Thirdly,.If l were in their shoes, I would. Dozens of years ago, some Chinese people believed that the moon in the foreign sky is brighter, but the situation has changed a lot in recent
8、years. With the carrying out of the reform and opening-up policy, a growing number of students, who study abroad, return to the motherland after they finished their education in foreign countries. And they bring back new information, new perspectives, and new lifestyles.Several factors account for t
9、his change. Firstly, living in foreign countries means more loneliness. Overseas students are far away from their familiar surroundings, and their habits and philosophies shaped by the culture of their motherland are somehow challenged in foreign societies. Secondly, it is not so easy to find a sati
10、sfactory job in foreign countries. Competition for job is fierce everywhere. Compared with the natives, the overseas Chinese have fewer advantages in most - if not all - aspects. Thus, it is really difficult for them to get employed.If I were in their shoes, I would choose to come back to my motherl
11、and. Actually, to study abroad is just a good way of broadening our horizon and taking advantage of the excellent education recourses. When it comes to settlement, few will ignore their “home, home, sweet home”.4. 构思点津这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章,由于没有可以套用的模板,许多考生认为这种作文比较难,其实这类文章能反映出考生最真实的作文水平。本文结合了世博会志愿者这个热点话题。根据所给提
12、纲,首先说明自己作为志愿者所做的工作,然后讨论这份工作的意义。In May 2010, the world witnessed an amazing expo feast held in Shanghai. The World Expo is a large-scale, global, non-commercial Expo.There will be more splendid goals waiting for us to achieve, we can surely make it as long as everyone contributes his or her bit like
13、this.Im very honored to be helpful at such a critical time.The love that lasts longest is the love that is never returned.Caesar the Great once said centuries ago, “I came, I saw, I conquered”; today we create history with our “I devoted, I got delighted”.In May 2010, the world witnessed an amazing
14、expo feast held in Shanghai. As luck would have it, I became an Expo volunteer, providing help along with other volunteers for thousands of tourists from different countries at our Information Booth on one side of a busy avenue. As volunteers, we had to be in position longer than people had expected
15、, lest someone could not get timely help when he or she happened to get lost, needed to know the sports schedule, etc., in early mornings and late evenings. During daytime, I was explaining the routes on the map again and again to whoever came to me. It was hard work, but all my efforts paid every t
16、ime I saw people leaving with smile. They appreciated my help, and claimed their love for the city, which made me realize its the work of volunteers from all sides that makes our lives move on in harmony.As to volunteer work, there will be more splendid goals waiting for us to achieve, and we can su
17、rely make it as long as everyone contributes his or her bit like this. Caesar the Great once said centuries ago, “I came, I saw, I conquered.” Today we create history with our “I devoted, I got delighted”.5. 构思点津这是一篇问题解决类的作文,遵循了提出问题,分析问题和解决问题的模式。就本文而言,首先要说明现代社会中父母和子女的关系与过去相比所发生的变化,然后分析其原因,最后提出解决问题的方
18、法。There has been a discussion recently about.It is true to the present situation that. For one thing. For another.As is known to all, there are many ways to.We have figured out many ways to.I think efforts from. are necessary to deal with the problem.It seems that today the parent-child band gets lo
19、ose. Parents nowadays engage themselves in endless work so that they spare little time for their children. As a result, many children, with a sense of being abandoned, become emotionally strange to their parents, thus all sorts of misunderstandings may crop up between them and the so-called generati
20、on gap is enlarging. The phenomenon seems complicated. But one need not go far to find that most of the time parents are the ones to blame, who are so obsessed with money-grabbing that they spend little time with their children. At the same time, one should not neglect the fact that many immature yo
21、ungsters blindly pursue “being special and independent” by defying whatever their parents say or even leaving home, which worsens the already gloomy situation.I think efforts from both sides are necessary to deal with the problem. Parents should understand that their loving company is more important
22、 than what they can buy for their children. A holiday spent with the family would break the ice and promote understanding. As to the children, they should try to cast off their immature outlook towards their parents. Only in this way can we expect a more promising future in parent-child relationship
23、.6. 构思点津 这是一篇图表作文,这类作文通常首先要求解读图表,然后分析。最重要的就是要正确理解图表所反映的问题,否则就会跑题。就本题而言,首先我们要看到表中的统计数字说明在20世纪后50年中,自然灾害不断增加,也就是说环境在不断恶化。而作文的题目是Human Beings and Natural Disasters,那么在第二段中分析原因时,毫无疑问要把人类的活动作为导致环境恶化的主要原因。This chart / table describes that.It can be seen from the chart that a very noticeable trend.As is su
24、ggested (unfolded / demonstrated / illustrated / mirrored) in the above chart, According to the above chart, there has been a drastic growth in.From the above table, we can see distinctly that. has witnessed a huge rise in contrast to the drastic decrease in.It is the responsibility of each individu
25、al to protect the global environment.This table reflects that there has been a growing number of disasters over the last half century. From 1990 to 1999, the number of serious disasters was four times as large as that four decades ago. As a result, great economic losses were produced.The deteriorati
26、ng situation is due to various reasons, which should include human activities undoubtedly. Mankind, with a strong desire for material comfort, grab as many as they can from the Mother Nature and meanwhile destroy its purity with all the wastes and pollutions. The emission of carbon dioxide is common
27、ly believed to cause global warming, so we have to suffer more extreme weather. Forests have been cut a lot so that more floods have taken place. The human beings will not avoid the punishments of nature until they mend their behaviors and live in a harmonious way with the nature.Its high time that
28、some measures were taken to stop the environment destroying. It is the responsibility of each individual to protect the global environment and to save human beings.7. 构思点津书信的作文要注意格式。英文书信一般由六部分组成。即:信头(Heading)、信内地址(Inside Address), 称呼(Salutation),正文(Body of Letter)、结束语(Complimentary Close)、署名(Signature)。常用的开头语有:I have received your letter of July 1st. I have the pleasure to tell you that
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